First off, I like your audio style, redworm.
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As I'm a jazz fan, appreciate the first cut though stroking to Brubeck is... kinda weird.
While I enjoy all the varying music selections, I also enjoy hearing the audio from the actual scene as well... I'm actually well-acquainted with this scene and the part where Hayden says "I wanna fuck you"... well, hell man, you should've left audio portion in cuz THAT'S HOT!
Overall, as this is an early preview cut, i really like what you try to do here to match different cuts of music to the action and I think this could be a pretty hot video tease should you pursue it further. I could see some real creative cuts, especially the fast-paced tribal beats (@ 12:15 till end) that could make for a fairly intense video tease.
Personally, I think you should use fewer cuts of music and just make those fewer cuts longer - instead of the 6 cuts (or was it 7?) of music, maybe use only three and use your DJ magic to match the pace and intensity of the video action.
I'm going to assume this is going to be "free form" in terms of the stroking instructions? Like no stroke beat or stroke meter? Which I think is fine...but maybe a simple "stroke slow/medium/fast/EDGE/Break" instruction would be something to explore.
Your pick of tunes is a welcome change, btw - would like to hear much more different music used in video teases, especially if the beat and melody matches well with the action. Good luck!