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One of my favorite things about this tease is that I was really pulled into the story. I felt the anguish of my rapidly approaching orgasm...and the need to prevent it in order to save the other heroes. Great job!
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It is very good indeed, however i must point out that following my performance , Mistress Pain is now the ruler of he world !!!
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This tease was also one of the best uses of the "stroke x number of times" instruction. Teases that use that are often a little boring to me, but in this case I thought it fit perfectly with the story and it wasn't overdone.
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Glad you liked the tease. I've always wanted to make a tease with this kind of story. And whacker44, shame on you. You let the whole world down
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Excellent tease, will there be a sequal? Perhaps one with a twist at the end, after he saves the world, the good superheroine tricks him into draining his cum, losing his power, and becoming her slave!
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Or...hehehe...the villainess had already broken Wonder Woman...turning her into a willing slave with the application of many multitudes of orgasms...who then drains you
Not that I have a superheroine thing or think about similar scenarios or anything...
Not that I have a superheroine thing or think about similar scenarios or anything...
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I'm glad to see the tease has captured some peoples' imaginations
I'm liking all of these ideas and I may indeed decide to do a sequel but it won't be for at least another 3 weeks as I'm quite busy at the moment. But as they say, good things come to those who wait.
I'm liking all of these ideas and I may indeed decide to do a sequel but it won't be for at least another 3 weeks as I'm quite busy at the moment. But as they say, good things come to those who wait.
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It took me several tries to beat the first one.
I beat the second one and, well....
GREAT series... I'd love to see a third, if you could find a way to make the story work!
I beat the second one and, well....
GREAT series... I'd love to see a third, if you could find a way to make the story work!
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I'd love another one as well, perhaps Wonder Women's original female side kick comes back to free Milovana Man. And her plan to help him defeat Wonder Women could be to lock him up into a Chastity Belt so he will not loose his powers!
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ok i had to quit
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