[RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
[RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
I just published my very first tease: Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation!
This tease will take you on a weeklong journey into tease and denial using chastity and lots and lots of edging. Every single one of the images was generated via AI by me specifically to be used in the tease.
I originally wanted to finish and publish last month, but the site issues caused me too many delays for that. BUT, better late than never! Please use this thread to report any bugs, typos, spelling issues, etc. that you encounter as well as any constructive criticisms so that I can better tease you in the future. See the link to my tease below.
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=61846
This tease will take you on a weeklong journey into tease and denial using chastity and lots and lots of edging. Every single one of the images was generated via AI by me specifically to be used in the tease.
I originally wanted to finish and publish last month, but the site issues caused me too many delays for that. BUT, better late than never! Please use this thread to report any bugs, typos, spelling issues, etc. that you encounter as well as any constructive criticisms so that I can better tease you in the future. See the link to my tease below.
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=61846
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
It’s now one of the best edging teases on this site!
If I may ask, what AI did you use to generate the images?
If I may ask, what AI did you use to generate the images?
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
Incredible tease! I found the same bug that Molito found.
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
The tease is great, I especially like the AI art. What did you use to generate it? I've tried getting into AI art before, but could never get it to do what I wanted.
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I'm running stable diffusion locally to generate the images. It definitely has a learning curve to getting good pictures out of it which I think is noticeable in the tease that image quality increases in the later days. I'll drop an example prompt below for reference. I decided AI images would work best because I wanted the anime style but there aren't really full sets of the same character in the same way there are for real models.
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
Cool, thanks! The benefit there seems like it could be getting images that support a custom story/scenario for teases, as using available pics limits the options.
And lol on some of the negative criteria you needed to list
And lol on some of the negative criteria you needed to list
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
This is a phenomenal tease! Great work!
I actually didn't take it very seriously when I first opened it and ended up spoiling a lot for myself by clicking through before I realized it was a slow build, and it is really good. My first instinct was "oh another low effort anime tease" but boy was I wrong.
I actually didn't take it very seriously when I first opened it and ended up spoiling a lot for myself by clicking through before I realized it was a slow build, and it is really good. My first instinct was "oh another low effort anime tease" but boy was I wrong.
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
I'm actually at the end of day 2 and I'm really liking it (I'm roleplaying as MC so advance is slow and it will take me a while to see the entire tease)
This are my impresions so far:
This are my impresions so far:
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I finished the whole tease in a couple of days (I know I’m not supposed to do it but I could not resist) I think it’s really well paced and done, I would have preferred some more picture at certain points but that’s not a big issue, I would give 8,5/10 to this tease and I strongly encourage you to do some more, I really like your style and your focus on edging. Thx
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Having more pictures is on my list of improvements to work on going forward. I think I did a better job of managing that in the last few days compared to the earlier days.Bobo29 wrote: ↑Sat Feb 25, 2023 11:13 pm I finished the whole tease in a couple of days (I know I’m not supposed to do it but I could not resist) I think it’s really well paced and done, I would have preferred some more picture at certain points but that’s not a big issue, I would give 8,5/10 to this tease and I strongly encourage you to do some more, I really like your style and your focus on edging. Thx
To be honest, the list of negatives I pulled from someone else's list. The only ones I added were the last two, "large breasts, cleavage" which I found was necessary to avoid having huge anime tiddies which I didn't want for my character.
List of all branching paths below. Spoilers, obviously.
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So what do you need to do on day 3 to unlock a special ending or whatever?
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation
I have to say, this was an amazing tease! I'm not into chastity/denial, so I just outright skipped all those sections and played it like one long tease, but that was still really enjoyable, though I didn't get the special ending.
Gonna have to replay for that, but I was planning on doing that anyway - it seems like you've got enough variation for at least two full playthroughs, even without accounting how it would be good enough to replay even with only one path.
As someone else has already mentioned, a few more pictures would have been nice, especially for the longer edge-holds (also stops someone from seeing the full duration even with preview enabled). But that was more a minor issue.
All in all, great work, and thank you for your effort!
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Okay, I went through it again and got the special ending(after the second try, and, admittedly, with a bit of cheating), and I have to say wow! That's a really awesome finish to this work, and quite intense, too - especially after what you have to go through in order to unlock it. (well, again, with me going through it all in one go. Though I'm not sure if that made it easier or harder.)
I'll definitely be playing it again, and I hope to see something else from you in the future!
Gonna have to replay for that, but I was planning on doing that anyway - it seems like you've got enough variation for at least two full playthroughs, even without accounting how it would be good enough to replay even with only one path.
As someone else has already mentioned, a few more pictures would have been nice, especially for the longer edge-holds (also stops someone from seeing the full duration even with preview enabled). But that was more a minor issue.
All in all, great work, and thank you for your effort!
The answer is in the spoiler in the post above yours.
Edit:
Okay, I went through it again and got the special ending(after the second try, and, admittedly, with a bit of cheating), and I have to say wow! That's a really awesome finish to this work, and quite intense, too - especially after what you have to go through in order to unlock it. (well, again, with me going through it all in one go. Though I'm not sure if that made it easier or harder.)
I'll definitely be playing it again, and I hope to see something else from you in the future!
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