Asian Fire, Feedback?

[seraph0x]

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Hey guys,

If you tried out Asian Fire please let me you what you thought!

I wanna improve my Webtease writing skills.

seraph!

[willingtoy]

Nice work. I love the story, provided some form of interaction for the user of the webtease. Being an asian myself, this has quite the bit of meaning for me.

Looking forward to more good work of yours. =)

But, hmm .. the main page listing of webtease does not show the thumbnail of the first image? I think that should be fixed.

[stormeagle]

Oooh, thumbnails - that'd be good.

[seraph0x]

Nice work. I love the story, provided some form of interaction for the user of the webtease. Being an asian myself, this has quite the bit of meaning for me.

Glad you like it, thanks!

But, hmm .. the main page listing of webtease does not show the thumbnail of the first image? I think that should be fixed.

You're absolutely right, it's fixed now.

Oooh, thumbnails - that'd be good.

Hehe, if thumbnails impress you, try posting a tease, that's where I put in most of the effort.

[doink]

Asians turn my crank! SHE is FABULOUS! I like to see some pink, though. As for the text: a nifty new angle, in my opinion. Some spots, the text was a bit long and distracting. Overall, high marks for that one!
----Doink.

[seraph0x]

Hehe, then you will like my next one, too. I'm going put a bit more effort into it though, so it'll take a while to finish it.

[whacker44]

asian fire was really hot...i had a multiple !!!