Tease and Trick 1

[sela]

Hi, this is my first tease, so please tell me what you thought of it.
Any comments are welcome. The second part shouldnt be too long to come out.

THks

[fritzi]

there ends very unexpected. is that intended?

[sela]

Sorry! There was a mistake. As I said, its my first tease, there might be some more, but I hope not.

[Tigranes]

Caught me by surprise, hope not too many down vote when they shoulda known it was cumming.

I gave it 5/5 to balance those people out. Pretty good for your first tease.

I really like it when people end up building the red light/green light into things, and you did it quite well (for me at least).

Not really my "thing" but I saw it through to the end. Hope you don't get discouraged and finish the 2nd part soon.

[Narazumo]

I liked it. Great selection of models and pacing. Can't wait for part two.

[Maer]

I have to say that I did see the ending coming.
But I still enjoyed it and it was a decent first tease.
Waiting for the next part.

[supermokkori]

For the most part, you've done a good job creating a tease and for those "curious" about their orientation and preferences, this is well disguised tease.

That said, 1/3 through the tease, I had an idea of what "trick" you were going to pull and once the cocks came out, I was pretty much done with the tease. Not my thing, but fairly well done for what you're aiming to do.

I'm at ends of whether you should put a "shemale" tag on your tease cuz obviously, your aim of the tease it to "trick" viewers to see if they like shemales or not. Part of me thinks you should cuz I don't like shemale content at all and I would like to avoid shemale content here... but I also realize that part of the greatness of Milovana is exploring your sexual preferences and boundaries.

Anyway, I've gone on long enough - decent tease, but will definitely turn-off some without fair warning.

[hhhobo44]

Well done! The surprise works pretty well, even if it can be anticipated by the lack of pussy views early on. You do lead the user on very well, so that by the time the dicks appear there is a great deal of arousal. The denial at the end is also good, as it it leaves the user in an ambiguous position. Your challenge will be to be able repeat similar surprises in your future work. Members will see your name as author and figure there is some twist coming.

[sissyboy90]

I loved this tease!

Spoiler: show

The 'Girls' were hot :)

[Chico]

Yes, well done. I liked this tease because the pacing and timing was well judged and

Spoiler: show

the fact that you're fully aroused while dicks are on screen is a real poser

[subspider]

The pacing was great.

I figured out the end, but like the tease said, I guess by that point I did not care. lol

[indysox]

I loved this tease all the way through i knew what was coming but I was so excited when it did come that it didnt matter that i knew the surprise. I am very excited to see the next tease in the series i hope you continue it awesome job and thanks for sharing it

[wowidk121]

Bro where is part 2 uve been promising it for a while nw ?!?

[sela]

I know, sorry for that. I started it directly after, but have no time to finish it at the moment. I guess you'll hae to be patient

[wowidk121]

any update when its coming out bro ?