NEW RELEASE - Cock Hero Pornstar Edition - Gracie Glam

[plandr]

In the unlikely event there is a god, I'm to request that for addition three you do Lexi Belle.

If not her maybe at least Tori Black?

[astania]

First thing first :) all are good girls tho!

Lets pray that no irl stuff gets in the way! And comes online any day now he he :)

[Quantha]

Yeah..... took me 3 tries to make it past round 4.... nice one...



Maybe.... Belladonna? I mean... if anyone can make you believe that she is... 110% into the scene... it's her. Shoot... she can convince you her life depends on the scene, honestly....

[bornforthis]

In the unlikely event there is a god, I'm to request that for addition three you do Lexi Belle.

If not her maybe at least Tori Black?

ooooh Tori Black (how did she slip my mind), will add her to my ever growing list of possible future stars, and maybe Lexi too, though not seen many of her scenes.

Thinking the star of ep3 will probably be..

Spoiler: show

Lily LaBeau

[astania]

In the unlikely event there is a god, I'm to request that for addition three you do Lexi Belle.

If not her maybe at least Tori Black?

ooooh Tori Black (how did she slip my mind), will add her to my ever growing list of possible future stars, and maybe Lexi too, though not seen many of her scenes.

Thinking the star of ep3 will probably be..

Spoiler: show

Lily LaBeau

Labeau good taste sir :)! Keep the good work up!

[andrepar]

In the unlikely event there is a god, I'm to request that for addition three you do Lexi Belle.

If not her maybe at least Tori Black?

ooooh Tori Black (how did she slip my mind), will add her to my ever growing list of possible future stars, and maybe Lexi too, though not seen many of her scenes.

Thinking the star of ep3 will probably be..

Spoiler: show

Lily LaBeau

I love Tori Black
and you thinking for ep3 ??? yayyy... so you must have done with the ep2 so upload it fast

[astania]

In the unlikely event there is a god, I'm to request that for addition three you do Lexi Belle.

If not her maybe at least Tori Black?

ooooh Tori Black (how did she slip my mind), will add her to my ever growing list of possible future stars, and maybe Lexi too, though not seen many of her scenes.

Thinking the star of ep3 will probably be..

Spoiler: show

Lily LaBeau

I love Tori Black
and you thinking for ep3 ??? yayyy... so you must have done with the ep2 so upload it fast

haha yeah ep2 done? :) 100%?

[janmb]

Karlie Montana pleeeeease

[supermokkori]

First off, congrats on your first video tease, born4this. Your first effort was well-produced and, as you can see from the wealth of replies here in this thread, very well-received from CH fans.

So with that said, I'm going to bring you down a notch.

As I've stated, this is a very fine effort for your first time out and, your theme on focusing on one performer is neat angle that I think many Milovanians (have we used that before?) will enjoy. Yet at the same time, I like to challenge you - and for that matter other future creators of 'Cock Hero' type video teases - in making your video teases more "unique." I type this because, after reading a couple comments from some revered members, there's a feeling that some of the more recent CH videos have become a bit more redundant. I don't completely agree with that assessment, but there are certain points made that, after viewing your nice CH video again, make me think as video tease creators, we could try to differentiate our teases to make them each unique.

Now, that's not say your video tease, CH Hero - Gracie Glam, isn't your unique creation - as I stated above, focusing on one adult performer is a new, fun angle and look forward to seeing your future works as well. But as the video opens, one simple change could be your intro style which pretty much is the same as Vindicare's "CH Flux" series. That and a couple songs you've used have been used before in other Cock Hero videos. Not a big thing, but just an example of how you could made a simple change to make your CH video tease a bit more unique.

That said, two things that stood out that were cool - obviously, the choice of the adult model as Gracie Glam is a charmer and the "countdown to completion" ending. THAT was really cool and I think you're going to see a few CH editors borrow that idea (LIKE ME! ).

So, going to break it down, round by round, with my East German Olympic judge's hat on.

Round 1: Good beat, decent tune and the footage is nice. A pretty good warm-up tho I think you should've shown a bit more of Gracie Glam's peachy round butt, as it stands out in a good way.

A note on the Break Times between Rounds: One thing you may want to do in future CH Pornstar Editions is to show outtakes/interview/bloopers of the adult performers your presenting. The more the viewer can see the sexy charm of these performers in these types of breaks, the hotter they become, IMHO.

Round 2: A decent round and the music selection is ok (tho used before in a previous CH video tease). It kinda reminds me why I like going to the gym sometimes - to watch women do aerobics. Kidding aside, I think you should've made some edits to take out some unnecessary parts. An example: the portion of video from 7:02-7:10 could've been edited out as I don't think stroking to a closeup of a stepping machine is really alluring.

Round 3: This was a very well done round. Excellent music selection as it fits the action quite well. Good stroke beat changes as well.

Round 4: Once again, very good music selection here. Your beat changes start getting a little interesting here; the quick 1-2 1-2 rhythm is a little difficult, but got it after the second wave.

Round 5: Heh, you're doing well with the music selection. While this scene has been used previously, it's a pretty good scene for what you're doing - just wish you included some of the scene audio, as there's some dirty talk from Gracie in this scene that would be pretty hot to hear.

Round 6: Ok, this is where you get a little crazy. I think I wouldn't have passed this round IF the stroke beat wasn't so complex. You may want to have the beat change text warning earlier as well as the description of the beat change earlier. Hot action, but I was paying too much attention to getting the stroke beat right to really enjoy it. And I think this song has been used a couple times in other CH videos (but it is a good song, tho).

Round 7: I love this song, but I think you really missed an opportunity to creatively cut to it.
The action of the first is pretty nice - the beat takes some time getting used to. Second scene is ok, something about the scene bothers me (not exactly sure what).
I really like the final scene, but I felt you could've made a simple cut to make it flow a bit better:

Spoiler: show

As it's her first anal scene and the first anal scene you presented, you missed an opportunity to really build up to it. Another suggestion - I would have ended with the cumshot, as this could've naturally transitioned to your final "countdown" scene really well.

Final Round: A very very sound idea, and one I'm going to borrow in the near future.

Love how the footage that rolls with the credits... I think this type of "playful" footage should be used in the Breaks between Rounds.

So, take the criticisms, not as a negative sign, but more of encouragement of things you may want to think about when you plan your next one. Overall, it's a great debut and look forward to seeing your future works.

[bornforthis]

Thanks supermokkori for your very detailed review, it will be useful for future episodes.

There does seem to be a general consensus that the beat patterns got a little too complex something i hope i have fixed in the next episode. Just hoping i haven't gone to far the other way and made them to simple

Yes the music for round 2 was indeed used before maybe more than once but it was too perfect not to use for that scene. Thinking all the creators will need to share some sort of database with used songs/scenes as more movies and more creators are gonna mean more duplicated content (Joking of course, well maybe).
The view of the step machine bit; Oh what a headache I edited and re-edited that bit, as the scene is very short due to it being an intro to a hardcore scene. I cut out bits that only showed madison parker? (is that the right name) as the movie is about gracie and then the remaining footage was just long enough. I did wonder about not including the steps and the stretching bit at the end, but then you would of had lots of footage of just madison which might have looked weird as the movie is about Gracie. Maybe i could have gotten away with a bit of repeated footage to cover the gap? (why did i only just think of this)

With scene 5 i went back and forth with how much audio to include as annoyingly the male actor is a bit noisy for my liking need more sites like manojob and thedicksuckers where the guy is just a stuntcock and it's all about the girl.

I take your point about making mine unique though slightly odd when combined with you saying about using countdown idea in your movie (feel free to do that by the way). As it was my first movie I used ideas that I/others liked in other CH movies.

I tried making intro with zooming pics like in my breaks, but it makes reading the text far to hard, I think you kinda have to have it in this style to make it readable maybe I should try star wars style intro text
Or more seriously is the intro text still needed does everyone know the rules by now or should they be included just incase a newbie picks this as first CH movie to watch?

I have changed my intro music for the next episode to add a slight bit of uniqueness, and have decided to keep the zooming picture effects in the breaks. I did consider little teases etc for breaks but unless the star has done plenty of scenes for sites like ftv inthecrack etc I think it would be hard to find enough of these clips. Still think vindi's option to beat is a great break idea but thought I would leave that as his unique thing.

I also wasnt sure about what to make unique while staying true to the CH style and tradition.

Never sure how these sort of comments come across on the internet, I am truly grateful for the time you took composing your review and hope you take my above comments as a continuation of the discussion rather than a snap back at your comments, or me being arrogant defending my work.

[book_guy]

Quick review / suggestion:

I (personally) find some of the beats much too fast.

Generally, the "overall" beat is manageable, but the "in between" quick smaller burst / beats are just too quick for me. I recall one segment that went ( 1-2 - 12 - 1,2,3 ) in which the "12" part was at about 240 bpm. I can't move that fast. So, I was much busier trying to figure out how to get into a body position to be able to slam my hand that rapidly up-down twice in the minuscule time allotted. Maybe other people are doing something different from me, but, so long as one "thump" or "beat" counts for one full up-and-down stroke, I can't get my hand to do that.

[NeverSay]

I will keep this brief, as I enjoyed it very much.

The beat was perfect, the changing beat was challenging and I like that. Too many CH movies rely on boring beats. Yours challeneged me and made this difficult as hell to hold out. Please keep some of those in.

[minutemen]

I would LOVE to see more of these. This one was much harder than the previous Cock Hero videos, which I find a bit too easy frankly.

[spin]

This was really good. Me and my GF love watching these she loves the music. Both of us edging against each other :D.

I liked this one because the action kicked up very quickly. Some Cock Heroes have 20 minutes of just stripteasing (which is a little boring to me and my GF as well). Some of the beats were hard to follow but overall this edition is great and i liked that it followed one girl.

[nikeak]

This is one of the best CH ever! Really nice! Love the fast beats
And updates on the next one you are doing?