Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'

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Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'

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Just a quick shout to cumhardy on his latest tease.

Personally, I really appreciate teases of this nature. When there are no direct instructions, the writing style is much more critical - you did a great job!

My one (petty) critique would be the use of asterisks as a 'break'. It works fine, but looks slightly jarring.

Anyway, nice one!
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thanks for the feedback! :-)

what you say about the asterisk breaks, what would look better? It was supposed to indicate a short pause.
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Re: Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'

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cumhardy wrote:thanks for the feedback! :-)

what you say about the asterisk breaks, what would look better? It was supposed to indicate a short pause.

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Re: Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'

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les wrote:
cumhardy wrote:thanks for the feedback! :-)

what you say about the asterisk breaks, what would look better? It was supposed to indicate a short pause.

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Yeah actually that works better, Ill change it tonight when Ive got time.... also, that was your 3000th post! Congrats
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Re: Webtease: 'Precum is so much sweeter...'

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Yeah, like I said. Not much of an issue at all, the main thing is the content, obviously!

I agree with Les, though :-)
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