Heartbreak Hotel, commentary

[Decker]

My latest tease has been published. As was voted on, it is an adventure-style tease with Emily Addison and Aletta Ocean as the main characters. This is certainly the most complex tease I've created... I fully expect it to take more than 1 sitting to complete. I included several checkpoints along the way that will enable you to come back to it at a later time.

I have done my best to check it for quality issues. However, as always, if any bugs are noticed, feel free to bring them to my attention.

The tease is designed to have a feeling of mystery to it. The hotel is full of locked doors with various keys, there are codes, there are secret characters, and more. It is likely that it might stump you from time to time. Trust that there is always a way forward... you just might need to figure out what it is.

Other than that, I hope you all enjoy Heartbreak Hotel! And as always, I love reading comments and feedback about my work.

[ka42]

It is great! The way you build the whole thing!

I think you should try to get a job in the gaming industry!


I can't find the link page for now, although posting it will mayby give hints in the way to solve the game.

Suggestion: mayby some more stroking task if a locked door will not be opened, at this moment I simply click from top downworths without any problems.

Mayby you have to stroke an ammount trying to open the door, and then you find out it can not be opened..
Just to make trial and error tactic more difficult.

[Decker]

Sorry about the link page- forgot about that. It's posted now.

[WeakWilled]

WOW great Tease so far.
Unfortunatly i got stuck somewhere and it doesn't seem to continue. I will send you a private message about it. Maybe it is just a problem that I have though.

Anyway apart from this it is fantastic! So many different women with different personalities. Really incredible!
Thank you a lot!!!!

[yak14]

This is the best tease I've seen so far, super interactive, believable playable story, sweet sexy girls.

Best tease ever!

[Decker]

So I'm curious... for those of you who decided to take the time to work through the tease...

Did you get all the way through it? If so, how long did it take? 1 sitting or multiple? Did you manage to follow all the stroking instructions or at what point did you give up? I already know how everything works, plus my member is all locked up at the moment, so I can't really experience it myself. I'd love to hear from people who have.

[Braska]

Amazing tease !!! I would give 6 stars if I could …

I already liked a lot “the pornstar is right” and “guess who” … So, many thanks and please continue the good job !

I really liked the scenario, the traps, and the end … Maybe I missed something, but was it possible to interact with the “temptation girl” ?

And to answer your questions :

I finished it a few minutes ago, at my 3rd try and about three hours (cumulated) of wanking. But I have to say I am a cheater : I try to respect the edging orders but I often don’t do all the strockings instructed. I ma just unable … Otherwise I think it would have take me a few other attempts.

Thanks again !

[Finlander]

I made it through!!

The ending wasn't quite what I expected :D

[baultista]

Curse this gray key!

[elfbowarrow]

I've been visiting Milovana for a while now, and i can honestly say that this tease was so far above and beyond that it prompted me to make an account just to message you about it, it took me 3 1/2 hours, (the first hour before work, then the remaining 2 1/2 uninterupted upon arriving home.)

Spoiler: show

I first chose to free Emily at the end, and then after vieving that ending, i guess if you've played any rpg's with multiple endings you would understand when i say that its the 'good ending'. i then reloaded with my crowbar code, and viewed the 'bad ending'. I figured out the code for the temptation woman, that puzzle was rather easy, but the safe still has me stumped!

The curiosity is eating at me, but whatever it contains aside, its an amazing tease! the closest i can say i came to cheating was

Spoiler: show

A: once i figured out that choice 8 behind the curtain was 5 strokes, i just kept clicking that one when i'd lose my key (which was in and of itself a great idea) ,

or B: i used a pen and paper to copy which route i had taken through the maze.

Also, as far as Bugs are concerned, i have found one. At any point throught your journey, if you find your way back to the first key( not printing the location, for spoilers sake.) you can obtain it again, and open any doors it can unlock as well as your current key, whats more, is that you can follow the storyline again and obtain the second key, i assume this pattaern can continue. actually, this made the tease a bit better i'd say, as i could no longer open every door on a floor trying to find the right one, as i would earn myself repeat teases. and yet, the lack of sensible dialog kills the atmosphere.

all in all, best tease i've ever had the *pleasure* of enjoying, I can't wait to see how intense the relief is going to be!

[Finlander]

Ah, the safe.

Spoiler: show

It makes the game way too easy if you DO happen to know the code.

I too cheated at the basement, by taking a picture of the map so I could always return to the safe...
I also couldn't figure out what the ATM girl was for...

[patchwolf]

For my money, Kayla and Danielle were the hottest two women in the tease.

Took me quite a bit of time to figure out how to get Danielle to talk to you. I kept thinking it was a timing thing.

[patchwolf]

Btw, I would LOVE to see a version of this tease with some kink to it... One of the best things about the "Giving Up Control" series was Jasmin Sinclair

[smiller]

Looking forward to start it. The last ones of you Decker were amazing.

[dragoul]

And again an outstanding tease! A great storyline which creates a rich atmosphere! Love it! I just did 2 sittings of approx. 3 hours each and i am still not through. Again one (if not even the) best tease on milovana. Great, that there are checkpoints!

Thank you so much for all the work!