red light city

[agus76]

I'm creating a real big tease with different dozens of tease and in particular a lots of different kind of sex preferences (ts, bdsm, fantasies, sm etc).
This is only a little first part, i hope you enjoy it!

[Quazwierdcev283]

Agus,
I read through the first girl and, while this tease looks like it has potential, there are a fair amount of grammatical mistakes. So I was wondering if I could get a copy of the original script and proofread it for you or if you have a friend who can help you. Bad grammar can greatly hurt an otherwise marvelous tease. Just some constructive criticism, I'm not trying to offend, sorry if I have.

[agus76]

thank you! Dont worry, i know i speak a bad english: but i studied it ten years ago and after i never had time to learn it better... so, if someone tell me how to do a copy of my tease, i'll be really happy to see it proofreaded! (in fact i have other two tease wich need to be... checked )

But it is possible to copy a tease? or i need to give my password to someone?

waiting for answer...

[mksl]

Script: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/getsc ... p?id=10856

[Quazwierdcev283]

Mksl,
I guess that's one option but it's a pain to read through. I don't know how you would copy a flash tease. I wrote out my last tease in a word processor and added the pictures when/if needed.

[groan]

Hi!

Great tease! :)

But the URL for the monster cock video seems not to work (for me). Could You please correct it or post the correct url here?

Thanks!

Groan

[Empath]

I believe this is the correct url for anyone interested http://overthumbs.com/galleries/monster ... cocks-061/