Feel Girl (part 5)

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Feel Girl (part 5)

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Jin managed to search several blocks in the blink of an eye, until he spotted Feel Girl hiding behind some bushes just in front of an alley. Turning his head so he could only barely see her out of his peripheral vision, Jin raced up to her, snatched the Destin Sword out of her hand, used it to cut through her force field and slice the Power Gauntlet’s right off her arms, and yanked the Warp Ring off her arm right after, all in the space of a blink. Then he grabbed her by the neck and shoved her against the ground, closing his eyes fully and turning his head to the side.

Feel Girl attempted to scream, but the hand around her throat choked her off. Her eyes went wide with terror. One moment, she was crouched down, all her weapons in hand. The next, her weapons were gone, and her body was flaring with pain as she found herself slammed against the ground. For several paralyzing moments, she couldn’t even breath, simply from the wind getting knocked out of her.

“You… fucking… bitch…” his Jin. “I should rip your fucking head off!”

Feel Girl gasped a few times, feebly clutching at his arm. “J-Jin…” she choked out. “P-please…”

“No! Do you have any idea what you’ve done to me? You got me so fucked up with your little lust spell, I just raped my teammate!”

“S-sor-sorry. I d-didn’t mean…”

“Shut up!”

“H-how…”

“Spark blasted me with electricity to get me off her. Unfortunately for you, that seems to have cleared my head,” He pressed harder on her neck until she couldn’t breathe. Struggling again, already starved of air, she passed unconscious within moments. Jin let up his grip as soon as she passed out, even though he was tempted to keep his hold. “But, fortunately for you, I’m one of the good guys.” Sighing, he sat up and kneeled over her, catching his breath, and forcing himself to calm down.

Unfortunately, doing so merely cleared away the adrenalin and rage that let him focus on not falling back under her spell. As the seconds ticked by, Jin felt his cock begin to twitch again as, unbidden, he felt the powerful desire to open his eyes and gaze upon Feel Girl once more. “Oh, no…” mumbled Jin. He tried to stand, and stumbled back, falling into the bush. The branches scratched at his naked body, and one branch in particular poked him none too gently in the testicles. Jin let out a gasp and reflexively opened his eyes to see where he was going. Almost immediately, his gaze was drawn to Feel Girl, and just as quickly, he found himself falling to his knees in front of her, cock throbbing immensely.

“M-mistress,” he gasped. “Mistress, I’m sorry, please, forgive me.” Suddenly, he heard a soft, familiar whine, and he looked up to see his teammate’s jump jet coming towards him. Jin knew he should call for them, knew he should get them to capture Feel Girl and give him some help. But he just couldn’t. He was compelled to help the woman who had completely entranced him.

Desperately, Jin glanced around, then spotted the Warp Ring. He snatched it up, and thought of the place that he’d seen Feel Girl create a portal to before, a tropical beach of some sort. With a brief moment of concentration, he opened the portal, grabbed Feel Girl, and raced them both through it. The two burst out onto an empty beach, and the portal swirled shut behind them.

Jin collapsed onto his knees, dumping Feel Girl into the sand. That was enough to jolt her back to consciousness. She struggled up, coughing, and gasping, looking around wildly. “What the… where are we?!” Feel Girl said, her voice rough.

“An island… somewhere…” said Jin, voice strained. He tossed the Warp Ring to Feel Girl. “Here. Take it and go. Escape, lay low, don’t stir up trouble again.”

“You… you’re setting me free?” said Feel Girl, unbelieving. “Even after everything I did to you?”

“Please!” gasped Jin, face strained. His cock trembled with pent up tension. “Is this enough? Is this enough for you? Will you finally grant me release, mistress?!”

Feel Girl stared at him, then slowly grinned. “Wow. Just… wow. I had no idea my power was really this potent.” She stepped up to Jin and said, “Grab your ankles, spread your legs, and don’t move.” Jin did so, and she kneeled before him, placing her knees between his. She eyed his throbbing cock, then spit into her hands, and grasped his cock with them. She slowly began stroking him. Jin let out a wail of pleasure and his body shuddered. He would have cum instantly had her command not continued to prevent it. She smiled as she stroked him, roasting him in exquisite pleasure.

“Oh, Jin,” she said. “This is incredible. You were ready to kill me, but you couldn’t resist one last glimpse, and that was all it took, huh? God, the things I could make you do now, huh? The things I could make anybody do if I just teased them a little while longer.” She leaned close to him, her breath tickling his neck. Tears streamed down Jin’s face as she continued to stroke him.

“I could probably keep you like this forever. Always horny for me, always needing me, always willing to do whatever I say just for one more chance that I might bring you pleasure, that I might give you that ultimate release you crave. But you know what? I’d never have to give it to you, would I? No, I might never let you cum again, for the rest of your life. I’d just tease you and tease you and tease you until you were nothing more than my own little robot slave. In fact, you wouldn’t even want to cum anymore, all you would want is to just stay in your sexual high, no longer worrying or thinking about anything, just Feeling pleasure forever.” Jin let out a pitiful wail at this, and shook, as if struggle against invisible bonds.

Feel Girl stopped and stood, gazing at the shaking Jin for another few minutes. “But… I’m not that bad a girl. For what its worth, I didn’t mean for this to get so out of hand. I’m sorry.” She reached over and picked up the Warp Ring. She concentrated, and a blue portal swirled into existence behind Jin, revealing alley they had just come from. “So long, speedy. I appreciate all your help.”

Jin looked at her with dismay. “But… but mistress…”

Feel Girl pointed at the portal. “Go! Go through that portal. As soon as you do, you’ll forget where you took me, and you’ll be able to cum again.”

Slowly, Jin stood, and, with one last long look to Feel Girl, he stumbled back through the portal. Feel Girl closed it and sighed. Using Jin would have been quite fun, but the truth was, she didn’t need the Centurions hounding her across the whole planet to get their teammate back. And, more than that, if he ever snapped out of it again, he might actually kill her. It was a valuable lesson in caution, one she fully intended to be mindful of in the future.

***

Jin stepped out through the portal, and back into alley where he’d been moments before. The jump jet had landed on the street, and Spark was there, hands already up and aimed at Jin, prepared to blast him if he tried to attack. She was not, however, prepared for Jin to suddenly drop to his knees and start ejaculating with incredible force. Feel Girl had been true to her word: as soon as Jin stepped through the portal, he’d be able to cum again. And after nearly two days of constant teasing and denial, he was ready to pop just from sheer arousal.

Too stunned to think of looking away, Spark watched as Jin came about as much as a human being could and then collapse, crying onto the ground. “Jeez,” said Spark, running over to his side. She managed to get Jin to sit up, and held him while he shook and twitched.

“I’m sorry,” Jin gasped. “I’m so sorry.”

“It’s alright,” said Spark. “It wasn’t your fault, and I’ve been through much, much worse before.” She paused for a moment. “I guess she escaped, then? Does she have all the weapons?”

“I broke the Gauntlets. The Sword’s over there. She’s got the Ring, though.”

“Don’t suppose you know where she went, then?”

Jin shook his head.

“Well, that’s alright. We can always catch her again some other time. Come on, let’s get you back to base.” Spark helped Jin to his feet and guided him to the jump jet. Chozo had already come and picked up Tact, leaving the extra seat free for Jin. “I found him. He’s okay.” She turned and saw that Jin had fallen asleep, exhausted both physically and emotionally. “Well, about as okay as he can be. Have a bed in the medic ward ready.”

With that, Spark drove the jump jet home, while Jin slept, dreaming of his former mistress, and all the things he had yearned to do with her. Even after he was cured of her hypnotic influence, it would be a fantasy he would pleasure himself to for years to come.

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Re: Feel Girl (part 5)

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@Salamando - I loved this series! Thanks for breaking it up like that too, those were nice readable chunks. I found the idea that Feel Girl didn't really realize how powerful her influence was to be very erotic. In a way she was exploring what she was capable of.
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Re: Feel Girl (part 5)

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This story was excellent, please write more!
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Re: Feel Girl (part 5)

Post by camel »

Wow! Great story!

I especially love the ideas this story brings out of me regarding "what's next?" Her learning her craft, hiding out, keeping one or two or ten or fifty men and women in constant need, eventually getting to the point of taking having no non-human furniture in her entire house, using the warp ring to suddenly appear at a wedding shower of a girl who used to bully her in 7th grade...

or maybe using her powers to take ownership of a cruise ship or seaside clothing-optional resort and using that as a base for cash flow, turning it into one of the most exclusive and high class resorts in the world where the staff is... single-minded... with providing excellent service and getting satisfactory performance reviews, and VIPs are treated to the personal attention of the owner of the resort.

Anyway, thanks for the story and the open ending. :)
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Re: Feel Girl (part 5)

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That was a really awesome story! Please consider writing more adventures with Feel Girl!
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