great tease!
but...there seems to be some kinda loop in the 30minute track (page 3013 i think)
FB: Playing with Vivien
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Re: FB: Playing with Vivien
Thank you, should be fixed!
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nice but it would be better if even 10 minute variant have a possibility for orgasm. But less, then 20 and 30 min variants.
How to do it? Simple. Make 10 pages with names 1 - 2 - 3 - ... - 10, Make 1st page - an orgasm variant, and all others - no orgasm.
Then you'll only get to select random page, for example if you make in 10 min version range from 1 to 10 pages, that would be 10% chance that page 1 will be selected.
And in 20 minutes you'll make range from 1 to 5, that's 20% chance already. Or 1 to 3, that's 30%
To have more room with %, you'll have to make more than 10 pages, where more than 1 pages would be orgasm.
That's just a remark for future reference, I don't think you should rewrite THIS tease too much.
My point is, that you just don't want to select 10 or 20 minutes now, if you KNOW you won't be having release. It would be best, if you are gambling with the game, You may choose to be teased and suffer only for 10 minutes, knowing it's less likely to cum there (but still have a reason to pray all gods for orgasm) or you may choose 30 minutes, knowing your chances increase.
How to do it? Simple. Make 10 pages with names 1 - 2 - 3 - ... - 10, Make 1st page - an orgasm variant, and all others - no orgasm.
Then you'll only get to select random page, for example if you make in 10 min version range from 1 to 10 pages, that would be 10% chance that page 1 will be selected.
And in 20 minutes you'll make range from 1 to 5, that's 20% chance already. Or 1 to 3, that's 30%
To have more room with %, you'll have to make more than 10 pages, where more than 1 pages would be orgasm.
That's just a remark for future reference, I don't think you should rewrite THIS tease too much.
My point is, that you just don't want to select 10 or 20 minutes now, if you KNOW you won't be having release. It would be best, if you are gambling with the game, You may choose to be teased and suffer only for 10 minutes, knowing it's less likely to cum there (but still have a reason to pray all gods for orgasm) or you may choose 30 minutes, knowing your chances increase.
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Re: FB: Playing with Vivien
To be honest I didn't know how to change to a random page for this was my first time working with the editor but now that I know I'll test some new ideas I have ^^
I don't think I'm going to change this tease but I'll keep this in mind for future teases.
Thank you for your feedback and tips!
I don't think I'm going to change this tease but I'll keep this in mind for future teases.
Thank you for your feedback and tips!
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Re: FB: Playing with Vivien
Very nice work I loved it.
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Check out my new site, and read SexTV story there!
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Updated whenever I feel like it.
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