Feedback: various illustrated letters and board postings

[Devon113]

Hey, I don't frequent the forums often but I just came across this thread. Well, just wanted to let you know that "The Power of Masturcizing (and the Mirror Trick)" was definitely one of the hottest teases I've read in a while. And not just because of the pics :)

Great idea and great job realizing it!!!

[cactusman]

Hey, I don't frequent the forums often but I just came across this thread. Well, just wanted to let you know that "The Power of Masturcizing (and the Mirror Trick)" was definitely one of the hottest teases I've read in a while. And not just because of the pics :)

Great idea and great job realizing it!!!

Thank you, I'm very glad you liked it. I hope you and others will take this as an example,
and find other similar letters (soliloquies) that can be made into webteases.

[cactusman]

I've just posted yet another of these illustrated letters, told in the voice of a dominant female. This one is

"(How I Created) The Perfect Boyfriend!" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7364

It's very similar in spirit to "Penetration Without Ejaculation (or Penetration Denial)" (http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7203), which is in this series and which I posted earlier.

Enjoy!

[cactusman]

I just posted another of these, an illustration of the story "Dream On" by BellOfTheBalls, which is at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7290

In reviewing this one ("Dream On"), I found that I didn't like the narrator interrupting, so I have rewritten it so that it's only the woman talking. If you tried it before and didn't like it much, you might try it again...

[jp]

cactusman,

Just wanted to say thanks for all these story postings. Certainly not your traditional tease, but it's incredible to read these stories. (Proof is in the pudding with the TOTM award you already have.)

Thanks,
-jp

[cactusman]

To support my new story: "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" I have posted several new illustrated letters and bboard posts as webteases. These are as follows:
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F-Stop: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7201
...[/url]

Most of these are interesting for their ideas (especially the one about penetration denial) and are inspirations for various parts of the main webtease I'm posting which is:

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

However, ...[while] the first part of "F-Stop" is exciting (although I don't really like the ending, as it just goes into straight sex, sorry). ...

I have rewritten the ending of F-Stop to make it something that I like more, as now the woman in the story takes control at the end, instead of having the straight sex spoil it (for me).

[cactusman]

To support my new story: "Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing" I have posted several new illustrated letters and bboard posts as webteases. These are as follows:

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A Little Cock Does the Trick: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7221
...

Most of these are interesting for their ideas (especially the one about penetration denial) and are inspirations for various parts of the main webtease I'm posting which is:

Lori's Fantasy-Based Teasing: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7174

... And the story "A Little Cock Does the Trick" is good in it's way and sometimes gets me going.

The webtease version of "A Little Cock Does the Trick" hasn't done very well, so I have revised it somewhat, with different pictures that I hope work better and a few small changes in the words.

[cactusman]

cactusman,

Just wanted to say thanks for all these story postings. Certainly not your traditional tease, but it's incredible to read these stories. (Proof is in the pudding with the TOTM award you already have.)

Thanks,
-jp

Thanks much, I appreciate it. This form of illustrated story is something I like, because I like the stories.
It's great that you (and others) like them also.

I keep hoping this will encourage others to illustrate other stories. One that's already done this is wonderbo, who has illustrated Peter's story the "Fertility Clinic" (Part 1 http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=6064, Part 2 http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=6950, and my favorite, which is part 3: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7017). I think that also works quite well as a webtease. And the story "Tonight an Orgasm Will Cost You" (http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=6763) by StoryFan, which started my series, is one of my favorites, and is very highly rated.

Of course, brand new stories are always appreciated, but some of the best old stories that you like may also make great webteases, so I hope you and others consider doing more of this.

[cactusman]

I have posted yet another one of my favorite letters as a web tease. This is

"Bondage Fantasy" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7378

which illustrates a letter to P*nth**se magazine.

Enjoy!

[cactusman]

OK I've posted one more, which is a very short one

"The Use of T&D": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7400

Enjoy!

[cactusman]

And here's yet another (quite short) one of these letters or board postings. This one is

"Boyfriend's Cock Teasing" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7406

Quiz: let's see if anyone else can identify the beautiful model in the tease!

[cactusman]

cactusman,

I really like these!

Patti was probably my favorite member of the old NTCWeb boards, and it's great to see her wicked ideas revived here. I have tried the mirror trick several times and failed each time. It is a grueling ordeal and takes a great deal of control to finish.

The Penthouse forum was where I first learned about teasing and denial, and where I first learned the power of it. Again, thanks for reviving those old memories.

The images and format match the content very nicely.

If you have more posts by Patti, please send them or better yet, post them in the milovana stories forum.
(I don't think I have any more.)

If you bring them out, then perhaps you or someone else can illustrate them!

[cactusman]

And here's yet another one of these letters or old board posts:

"Four Weeks, Wait, Ride": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7415

This one is different than most of the others, as it's told in your voice, not in the voice of the dominant female. I'm curious as to if you like that or not. (Personally I like the female to speak... but your mileage may vary. In any case, the orginal letter was written by the guy, now "you", and I didn't see how to change it.)

[cactusman]

I found another board posting by Patti and I just had to share. This is a very short one:

"Nail in the Coffin": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7416

Enjoy!

[cactusman]

I just posted another illustrated letter, told in the voice of a dominant female. I think if you've liked previous installments in this series you may like this one.

"My Professor": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=7472

Comments are welcome. Enjoy!