FB: The Brothel series

[texturedshroom]

Part 1 was posted today. I have some really innovative ideas for later in the series, so I hope you all liked Part 1 and are going to stick with it.

I appreciate any comments, criticisms or concerns as always.

[JDude]

Very nice.. keep UP the good work.

[DeniedHard]

I haven't tried it yet but it had caught my eye and I like the sound of innovative ideas. Thank you.

[slaaf_1981]

As always, I'm a fan of your series. I'm checking several times a day to see weither pert to is posted yet

Keep up the good work!

Part 1 is very promising...

Greetz

[texturedshroom]

Might still be a few more days for Part 2, just a heads up, so if you're denying yourself for the series you might want to reconsider or maybe do the whole thing when it's finished.

[ordered]

Damn. I was hoping the next part of the "Brothel" tease was coming, say, "tomorrow" like it said in the tease. Then I thought maybe it was waiting for Friday, or even Saturday, to break out.

Oh well. The Brothel is an awesome introductory tease, I'm... ummmm... quivering..... just a bit... to see what comes next...

Shroom always writes the badest- ass teases, he's figured out the mix of what we need NOW and what kind of temptation to leave for LATER; then takes the necessary time to provide us with a well thought tease that's fun to use.

Thank You, Shroom
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[slaaf_1981]

Well it's better to slowly write a good series. More then quicly write a lousy one.

I'll wait...

Slaaf

[texturedshroom]

Damn. I was hoping the next part of the "Brothel" tease was coming, say, "tomorrow" like it said in the tease. Then I thought maybe it was waiting for Friday, or even Saturday, to break out.

I understand the frustration and wish I could work faster, but I've got a million and one projects to work on right now outside Milovana. But I'll do my best to try to make sure it at least ends up being worth the wait.

Oh well. The Brothel is an awesome introductory tease, I'm... ummmm... quivering..... just a bit... to see what comes next...

Shroom always writes the badest- ass teases, he's figured out the mix of what we need NOW and what kind of temptation to leave for LATER; then takes the necessary time to provide us with a well thought tease that's fun to use.

Thank You, Shroom
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Thank you for the kind words! It's hearing stuff like this from time to time that inspires me to work that much harder at living up to it.

Well it's better to slowly write a good series. More then quicly write a lousy one.

I'll wait...

Slaaf

Thanks for understanding.

While you're all waiting, why not try and go out and get all the clothes listed in the tease (if you don't have them already)? This is going to be a tease series where you get out what you put into it. At the very least, if you don't have any ladies' clothes you might want to get some so you enjoy the series more.

Believe me when I say that while right now it kind of looks like "Lisa's Sissy Training" mixed with "The Sorority Series," it's going to be something much different in the end.

[slaaf_1981]

I allready got all the clothes needed. And more.

[texturedshroom]

Awesome. Where'd you find fishnets? I couldn't find them in the normal places I buy stockings... i.e. the grocery store or pharmacy.

Also, Part 2 is well underway... expect it out today or tomorrow. I've changed it to a flash tease as that was where the series was headed eventually anyway.

[texturedshroom]

Status update: The Brothel: Part 2 has about 31 pages so far. I have the entire thing planned out; it is a flash tease and it can essentially be divided into 3 major sections. I am done with the first section and a decent part of the second.

ETA: Hard to say right now. The third section of Part 2 will take significantly longer to write than the first two sections. Optimistically I'd say it should be out by some time tomorrow, depending on how much time I find myself willing to invest in it today and tonight. I do appreciate everyone's feedback and it definitely has encouraged me to get this out ASAP (while still ensuring a quality tease).

Right now though, I've been working on this since early morning and my eyes are starting to hurt. I'm going to take a much-needed break and, who knows, maybe work on my day job.

[slaaf_1981]

Don't forget to eat and drin while you're working.

I bought the fishnets in a Belgian shop http://www.veritas.be/. I guess in other countries you will have the same type of store. They sell stockings, things to sew, gloves, scarfs, things for your hair, ... It's actually the superstore for a teenage girl (with money) who wants to experiment with her looks. It took some guts to go in, but hey, it's always for the girlfriend

[texturedshroom]

I bought the fishnets in a Belgian shop http://www.veritas.be/. I guess in other countries you will have the same type of store. They sell stockings, things to sew, gloves, scarfs, things for your hair, ... It's actually the superstore for a teenage girl (with money) who wants to experiment with her looks. It took some guts to go in, but hey, it's always for the girlfriend

That sounds cool; I'll have to check it out.

Part 2 might be another week away honestly... sorry but it's to ensure a good quality tease. I think this will be one of the hardest parts of the series for me to make. The rest should be a lot more straightforward.

[texturedshroom]

Part 2 is posted. I ended up shortening it and saving the rest for Part 3.

However, it's still over 100 pages even with the shortening--so happy wanking!

Part 3 should be out in another week--you might want to save Part 2 until then if you can really wait.

[texturedshroom]

Apparently 2500 people have viewed Part 2... but no one has any comments on it?

I can't get feedback from ratings as it's a flash tease, so I'd prefer some sort of feedback here...