My first tease - ever! (Feedback appreciated)

[Jord]

Hey there! I'm brand new to this site but it's already really... stimulating. I've made photomanipulations and captioned photos for a long time now, but this is my first attempt at making a webtease:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=3433

I hope you like it, and I hope to make even better teases! :)

Jord

[eteased]

Great job! The story was really enjoyable and well-written. Also, the pictures and the story went perfectly together. My only suggestion for improvement in future teases would possibly be to add more specific (and maybe unusual) instructions for the reader. People seem to really like teases with very specific, kinky instructions. (You can just sort the teases by rating and look at a bunch of the top ones to see what goes over well here).

Anyway, it was really good and I'll look forward to seeing more teases from you here.

[cumhardy]

loved this tease although ive never really been into the whole cuckhold fantasy this one was good
write more! sorry my feedback isnt very constructive, just wanted to say i liked it

[Jord]

Great job! The story was really enjoyable and well-written. Also, the pictures and the story went perfectly together. My only suggestion for improvement in future teases would possibly be to add more specific (and maybe unusual) instructions for the reader. People seem to really like teases with very specific, kinky instructions. (You can just sort the teases by rating and look at a bunch of the top ones to see what goes over well here).

Anyway, it was really good and I'll look forward to seeing more teases from you here.

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll try making my future teases more specific, too.

Jord

[Jord]

loved this tease although ive never really been into the whole cuckhold fantasy this one was good
write more! sorry my feedback isnt very constructive, just wanted to say i liked it

Well, the cuckold fantasy is new for me, too, to be honest. I'm very glad you liked it!

Jord