The succubus ritual part 1

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The succubus ritual part 1

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Hey all story readers :-) I really enjoy the stories forum and I decided to try my hand at writing myself. Hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Sorry in advance for the terrible cliffhanger :innocent: I will hopefully add part 2 soon, but no promises. Writing takes alot of time (especially with one hand :lol: ).

Feel free to give feedback or comments!

The succubus ritual

You had been at it for a while now. Three weeks of edging and denying yourself orgasm while browsing the seemingly infinite amounts of porn on the internet. You love the feeling, the frustration and ache for release, the rush of building up to the edge and letting go at the last moment. As your sexual frustration builds up, you feel more and more submissive. These days most off your attention is spent on femdom sites and watching videos of strong women controlling you. Your fantasy of pleasuring a dominant woman with your tongue while she teases and taunts you feels more and more compelling.

One day during a long edging session you stumble across a fantasy porn site. You are usually not so into those things, but this site is different. This one is kind of like a forum, with people writing about what you assume is fiction, of their encounter with succubi. Reading the stories is perfect edging material for you at this point. The succubi are insatiable creatures, thirsting for the sexual energies of humans. They are always horny and loves to enthrall and use humans as toys to scratch their infinite desires for sex. There are two main types you discover in the stories. One is addicted to draining their subjects of sexual energy. Stimulating them constantly with their spells and body, making them cum over and over until they are completely exhausted. After that the succubus will usually lose interest and find another victim to play with.

The other kind is even more devious. They are strongly attracted to sexual frustration. All the pent-up energies in a teased and denied subject makes them irresistible to the succubus, and they make sure to keep building it up without release while using the victim to satisfy themselves. This can attract even more succubi and succubi fighting over such subjects is not uncommon, and the helpless human is unlikely to be released by the succubus willingly.

As you read though the stories, constantly pushing yourself close to orgasm, you start to realise how similar these stories are. They are all written in the same “universe” and are remarkably consistent. One day, a new thread is posted, called “The Ritual”. You quickly take your cock out and open the post, looking forward to a new story to tease yourself with. This one is different however and it reads:

“While most succubus encounter are just happening by chance, I have done some research and designed a ritual that attracts them and can increase your chances of being discovered by one.
It is quite simple. As we all know the succubi are drawn to sexual energy. They sense this because of their ability to read minds. This ability is not complete, however, and a subject resisting this can limit their access to its thoughts.
Exposing your mind on the other hand, will make it easy for the succubus to enjoy your energies. As I see it, driving yourself into a sexual frenzy while exposing your mind as much as you can, will make it easier for the succubus to find you.
To achieve this the most important part is to abstain from releasing your sexual energy. How long is needed is impossible to say, but after a couple of weeks you will be quite the target for a succubus.”

You laugh at the thought. “I would be quite irresistible by now, if this was real.” Your cock grows harder at the thought, and you start touching yourself as you continue reading:

“The next part is trickier. Weakening your mind and inviting their thoughts might require some experimenting and practice, but some things might help. A few glasses of wine or some puffs of weed might make you an easier prey. Make sure to not overdo it though, as that might dull your senses and make you uninteresting. After that you just need to be open and not resist if you feel anything affecting your thoughts.

Finally, you need to properly expose your sexual energies. A long edging session should do the trick. Watch porn, get as close as possible and keep resisting the urge to cum. Getting a bit tired or getting caught up in the porn (“gooning”) is good, as you will weaken your mind further.

Try this at your own risk though, there is no way of controlling which type of succubus you will attract or how it might use you if it gets access to your mind.”

You really enjoy this fantasy. Your cock is rock hard by now and it is Friday evening, so you decide to have a proper edging session. You find long femdom porn compilation and start edging your brains out. “I sure wouldn’t resist an intrusion in my mind right now.” Your cock twitches at the thought and you must be careful not to get pushed over the edge.

When you finally can’t keep going anymore, you prepare for bed. It would be a shame to have an accident today, as tomorrow would be one month without an orgasm. As you try to fall asleep you start thinking about the ritual again. Your cock quickly grows hard. The plan was to finally orgasm after one month. Maybe you should try out the ritual just before cumming? Just for fun? You have a bottle of wine and plenty of time.

The next day you wake up late. You have the entire day to yourself and nothing important to do. As usual you wake up with your cock all excited. You think of the orgasm finally waiting this evening and do some quick edges before getting out of bed. After having lunch, you sit down to watch some TV. As usual, there is nothing good on and just drift away on the couch.

A sudden sound wakes you up. It is the intro of the weather forecast on the news. It is starting to go dark outside, and rain is knocking on your window. The perfect lazy day inside. Your turn to watch the TV again. The weather lady is smoking hot. Why are they always so attractive? “I guess weather reports would be too boring otherwise.” She is wearing a tight pencil skirt and a tight top with a little bit of cleavage. Appropriate for the news of course, but at this point it is more than enough to wake up your boner. You think of the ritual you read about. “Let’s do it, some wine and gooning should be perfect to build up to cumming anyways.”

You fill up a glass and eat some cheese while enjoying the drink. It has been a long week and you get the pleasant buzz of the wine immediately. You have another glass as you go to the bedroom to prepare. All the curtains are closed, you find the bottle of lube at the bottom of the sock drawer and put some porn on the TV at the end of the bed. By the time you take of your pants, your dick is begging for attention. You decide to set a goal, at least one hour and then you are allowed to spurt.

You lube up and start to stroke. It feels amazing and the thought of actually getting to finish this time gets you to the edge in no time. The wine buzz and the edging quickly take over all your thoughts and lead them to your fantasies. The thought of a succubus using you, giving it pleasure as your frustration builds, the lack of control of your own orgasm. You try to open your mind. You are so close, anxiously looking down at the time. Your cock is in total control of your brain now. No thoughts, only the intense lust for release.

54 minutes… You almost feel dizzy from the arousal and your vision gets blurry. “Fuck, I can’t hold back any longer.” You stroke faster, aiming to push yourself over. Everything is just a haze now as you feel the orgasm coming.

“Don’t you dare, mortal!” The voice comes out of nowhere. You don’t really care at this point, your only focus is to cum.

“You are the easiest prey I ever caught. And it seems I arrived just in time!” You try to keep going, but you are no longer in control of your hand as it slows down. You try to clench your muscles, a single twitch to finally release your load, but in desperation you feel your orgasm fade away.

You let out an involuntary moan, bucking your hips in the air as your hand lets go of your cock. As you lie there, smoke fills the room. Your vision is sharp from the sudden change of events, but your eyes tear up as the smoke envelops you.

Then the smoke clears. You are lying exposed on your bed. Completely naked, legs spread and arms down your sides. Your cock is still glistening from all the lube, your balls aching and your shaft red and twitching. And there it is, sitting at the side of the bed, the succubus:

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“Giving up control so easily? The stupidity of mortals never ceases to amuse me. I think I will enjoy this one a lot.”

To be continued.

Thanks for reading,
Vaol
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Re: The succubus ritual

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Nice beginning of a story :-).

I like that the story builds up slowly while still constantly giving you arousal.
You're right the cliffhanger is pretty mean and I badly want to know how the story continues.
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Re: The succubus ritual

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Well done!

I like the theme of this story; there are so many diverse ways to explore the power dynamic/exchange of enticing, seductive women having their way with passive, submissive males, and the concept of the succubus is quite appealing.

I too use a 2nd person writing style sometimes ("you" do this, etc.); it works when targeted specifically at a submissive male reader (as most of the audience here on Milo is), although it can be debatable for story-telling purposes in general.

But this is a good story idea and I frequently have a similar cliff-hanger in my work, so I thought that part was fine. And I also love using pics to illustrate the types of ladies I'm describing, as it provides the visual stimulation that most men seem to like, so I think your choice of artwork worked well there at the end...

Anyway, thanks for posting it and I'm looking forward to another chapter!
Kitty :love: :love: :love:

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Re: The succubus ritual

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Augustulus wrote: Tue Nov 30, 2021 1:30 pm Nice beginning of a story :-).

I like that the story builds up slowly while still constantly giving you arousal.
You're right the cliffhanger is pretty mean and I badly want to know how the story continues.
Thank you, it is a fine line between building up slow and becoming boring. Glad you liked the balance :-) I did some more writing today so a part 2 is coming ones I find a natural place to end the chapter.


KittyZateez wrote: Tue Nov 30, 2021 7:17 pm Well done!

I like the theme of this story; there are so many diverse ways to explore the power dynamic/exchange of enticing, seductive women having their way with passive, submissive males, and the concept of the succubus is quite appealing.

I too use a 2nd person writing style sometimes ("you" do this, etc.); it works when targeted specifically at a submissive male reader (as most of the audience here on Milo is), although it can be debatable for story-telling purposes in general.

But this is a good story idea and I frequently have a similar cliff-hanger in my work, so I thought that part was fine. And I also love using pics to illustrate the types of ladies I'm describing, as it provides the visual stimulation that most men seem to like, so I think your choice of artwork worked well there at the end...

Anyway, thanks for posting it and I'm looking forward to another chapter!
Kitty :love: :love: :love:

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Thank you! :-) I also find this dynamic very interesting. The thought of an insatiable dominant woman is very appealing to me and adding the supernatural element also makes it a bit easier to make the story make sense.

And yes, the 2nd person style is very dependent on the context. Since I primarily write for myself (submissive male), it makes sense, but it is not the most elegant writing style. If I ever getting around to another story I will try something else probably.

Thank you for your comments! :-)

-Vaol
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