[PRE-RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Goddess of Lust

[SilverSlut]

Hello!

I'm working on a new tease called "Goddess of Lust." It is heavily inspired by d3vion's Pilgrim Quest.

In Goddess of Lust, you are an acolyte of the Goddess and you have traveled to a large city to worship properly in her temple. You sit in a meditation chamber and are shown erotic visions (porn, yay!) from the Goddess. You will need to edge for some of them, and eventually you will be able to offer your accumulated Lust to Her and earn your release! (Or not! If she's in a cruel mood or if you are too greedy, you may be denied!)

As with my other tease, I want to get some feedback from you guys before I straight-up release it.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showteas ... 5c56cb2326

Give it a try!
Oh, and just like my other tease, this includes furry images. Sorry if that's not your thing, but my galleries are huge and it would take way too much work to sort them into Furry (straight, gay, futa, tentacle, etc) and Non-Furry (straight, gay, futa, tentacle, etc).

Feedback requested:

• How is the introduction? Too much information? Too little information? Do things generally make sense?

• What do you think of the frequency of visions (regular porn), foci (the 'edge to this' things), and instructions?

• What do you think of the foci? Are there some foci that you would like added to the tease?

• What do you think of the instructions? Are they too annoying? Do they add to the experience?

• Have I broken any content rules? If there's an image that has, please let me know so I can remove it.

• Did you run into any bugs or glitches?

• Any suggestions or improvements?

BUGS FIXED/THINGS CHANGED:

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• Fixed an issue where Standard Chamber instructions would freeze the whole tease... oof

• Fixed the issue where the entire Offering sequence was borked (thanks Ghingis)

• Fixed the issue where the "Knees to Chest" instruction had no ending text (thanks Ghingis)

• Made "Straight" toggle-able

• Separated Yiff and Hentai in the visions. Still need to update Focus images

• Removed "once per day" mechanic.

[Ghingis]

I think there should be something broken during offering..

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I watched a red bar filling up for 2 minutes, with a button above if I came early.
The picture was the alrar the whole time and there were no instructions what so ever.
After that the goddess become bored..

Also I do not know if this is intentional:

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I tried a couple of times with different preferences and it seems out of 10 pictures, 1-2 has human characters, 0-1 has monster characters (sometimes with humans) and the rest is furry.

Misc

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Not a bug, but if there is no preferences enabled, the lust does not climb, maybe a base could be 1 and not 0.

After the knees to chest instructions the text that should say you can get back to your preferred position is just shows undefined.

[SilverSlut]

Thank you so much for pointing out those issues! I was able to go in and fix the straight-up bugs.

On the furry thing, yeah... I do have a lot by comparison. I'm actually putting in the effort to sort out my galleries so that the furry stuff is separate. It'll let me make better teases. At the same time, I'm searching out more hentai to balance the scales in each category.

[Haru Lunes]

Just played it and just wanted to really quickly chime in about two bugs I encountered(will leave a more thorough review later, but am hella tired rn)

Firstly, at one point it just stoped showing new images - I tried fixing it by going to the altar, which kinda worked, though then:

Secondly, returning from the altar broke the game completely, including the buttons on the right.

Otherwise really happy to have some furry content on here, its sadly very underrepresented, though if you put toggles for preferences, then why dont you also put a toggle to disable straight stuff - just out of curiosity, seems like an oversight to me.

Also, since your asking for more foci - a list with the ones already included would be helpfull

[SilverSlut]

H E C K

I should have put it in this thread. I'm currently sorting out the furry from the hentai to add that to the preferences list. That involves renaming a lot of galleries, which is probably why the images refused to load and everything broke... :( sorry!!!

Okay I've finished with the separation of yiff and hentai. It's now an option! :)

I also made Straight toggle-able, as that is a valid point.

[Haru Lunes]

I mean, Id love to test this... but it doesnt let me, thats literally the worst feature Ive seen yet. Remove this please or make it optional. That literally turns this tease from one of the best Ive seen in the last time to more or less the worst in my opinion, sadly.

[SilverSlut]

Huh that’s weird! The “come back in one day” thing shouldn’t have proc’d unless you made it to the end of an offering. So unless you made it to the end of an offering, that’s a bug.

But the waiting period is that frustrating, huh?

[phönix]

I can only agree with Haru Lunes.
Blocking your own tease for 24 hours is a death wish idea.
Don't do this.
Just tell them they are denied and those who want to play along can do that.

PS: Love the rest of your tease.

[Haru Lunes]

I mean, you asked to look for bugs etc. so I went straight about clicking through to see if the issues I found last time still persists, which made me actually reach a very fast ending this time, so they may have actually been related to you changing things up, as you suspected, but that blocked it, which is really big of an issue, if you want people to test for bugs, also I hate when things take away my agency of when to do stuff, as someone with a very specific schedule

[SilverSlut]

Fair enough, fair enough.

It's an artifact from the game I took inspiration from (Pilgrim Quest, which uses GuideMe). It's been ages since I played, and now that I think back, the forcing of 'come back tomorrow' was frustrating then, too.

It's been disabled until I figure out a way to incorporate it in a non-frustrating way (probably have a nun comment on it, or something).

[Haru Lunes]

Yeah, thats probably a good idea. Im currently kinda caught up in some rounds of truth or dare, once thats doneIl probably give it another bigger shot at testing around stuff(or tomorrow if Im too tired by then) and give you a thorough feedback ^^

So, for the Feedback:

Feedback requested:
How is the introduction? Too much information? Too little information? Do things generally make sense?

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Makes good sense, see no issues with it the way it is now.

What do you think of the frequency of visions (regular porn), foci (the 'edge to this' things), and instructions?

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It sometimes feels very random from what I experienced so far - I had runs where I got spammed with foci and I had runs where it took me 10+ min to even see a second one.

What do you think of the foci? Are there some foci that you would like added to the tease?

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I like the system in general, though a bit more variation would be great, e.g. sometimes getting only a very short time(5-10sec) to reach the edge(which would also incentivice staying close all the time), edging in a specific way/speed/grip, or such. Additionaly the chance for a rest doesnt make sense from my perspective, since the only insturction so far is to stay hard, not to keep stroking, so I cant see what this is good for. To the topic of foci to add - cant really comment on that, since I dont know which ones are in, some I came up with that I at least didnt see yet would be: Knotting(furry/beast), Cum, Cumming(M), Specific Species(furry(saw its already in for beast)), Blowjob(M)

What do you think of the instructions? Are they too annoying? Do they add to the experience?

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They are kinda boring for me, since Im playing on PC, in a quite small space, so I have to ignore most of them. Adding other thins like e.g. having to stroke in a specific way for a while, or speed, or such could really add on that end imo, instead of just having positions to assume.

Did you run into any bugs or glitches?

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Not really this time, though the content options seem to overwrite eachother on some pictures, so with straight disabled and beast enabled I still got some straight content, I also got some non furry content with only furry enabled, though it usually always (except once) included some of the other enabled content options, so I think that may be the issue

Any suggestions or improvements?

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Already included them on the previous topics :P

Edit 1:Made my BF play it and he enjoyed it aswell, the first time I showed him a tease, btw. ^^
One last thing we both agree on is, that more content in form of pictures(or potentially gifs, if that even works) always makes things better, due to less repeats(especially on the gay furry end, for us :P).

Edit 2: Found a bug, or atleast kind of a bug - the final edge when offering Lust seems to completely ignore any preference setting, the focus given for it, as well as the pictures shown(Which in extend also means, depending on the focus you get, that the chances for a picture depicting it apearing at all, can be quite low).