JBK wrote: ↑Fri Sep 30, 2022 8:53 pm
The 'A' button is an admin menu I used to jump around in the tease while building and testing. I still have ideas for this tease, just not enough time to implement them..
Regarding this tease, I have various ideas and I´d like to help you in questions like dialogue and photo selection.
Comments/Suggestions/Expansions:
1. I´d like to have this tease being played in a way that allows the player to spend multiple sessions. Currently, the tease ends when you either escape or have played through all the "key scenes". This is great if you don´t want to spend a day on a tease for a playtrough, but limits the replayability.
2. The "escape is the only option" playstyle is nice, but I wonder if there is some kind to incorporate a "cash" system that sets up the idea that you pay off your debts. This would work with a save system of some sort (which is needed if you want to do an expanded version with more content)
3. Several sessions lead into the idea that a follow up scene is possible, like the "chinese volunteer", "I´ll tie you to the tree in the garden", "Novice domme".
3.1: The session with the stim file test is a great one, one of my favourites of the tease. I connect well with the model and the concept of the scene. I´d like to see this scene expanded as following:
- The scene offers randomized stim files which are ramped up between the test runs. So you can have this scene multiple times. with different files.
- If you cum, the selected file will be highlighted as "works for you" and will be reutilized by others at later stages.
- She will test pain files in a different scene and ask you for the pain level for each file.
- Effective Pain files will be reutilized
- If you cum at the right time, she´ll have you for a special session.
- if you don´t cum for multiple sessions, she´ll be marked a failure and subject to a femsub session.
3.2. The Scene where you have a dedicated tornment session in the garden is missing. This would be a great idea to "earn" the escape route. So you have the session with the hint for the garden, and then you agree to have the session in the garden. If you make it, you gain access to the garden and this escape hint.
3.3. The novice domme needs to return.
For one, she´s hot and I´d like to have more sessions with this model.
Secondly, I´d like to see the rating at the end to have some kind of relevance. Give her a good rating and she´ll return for future sessions, give her a bad rating and she´ll be marked a failure and subject to a femsub session.
4. Femsub Sessions
As part of the organization, you are not just working to pay off your debts by being stimmed, but also by playing with others.
So there should be the chance to play with female subs, either as paid duty or as a job.
When entering such a session, you get the chance to either pay off your debts (you get pain files) or to enjoy the treatment you give to them (you get stim files, but loose cash).
There is one femsub session (card thief) in the game, and I´d like to see this session being turned around when you rat her out and she gets pain and you have the option to end the session or go harder.
Same should be applied to the other sessions.
5. The police girls
I think it´s a shame that there is no session with the police girls involved directly. I mean, police uses Tasers, it´s all so obvious.