thatsprettyhot wrote: ↑Wed Jan 01, 2020 1:51 pm
Thank you very much for this work! I faced some issues so I have tell about them, but only to help you, not to discourage. I hope you make more!!
My feedback:
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- I think it starts pretty slow
- The pulse meter is terrible, any traditional beat meter outside the middle of the screen would be better
- The heartbeat meter is almost as terrible as per its job to indicate how to stroke
- I understand both meters fit the idea aesthetically, but that won't make me like them :D
- I think in the beginning there was 6 minutes of 1 stroke per minute, and after that 2 minutes of no-touching resting break time -> I would need permission for way more stimulation, I understand the idea of building anticipation but I can't stay hard with so little So I have to break the rules...
- I kept noticing, starting from the Intro 6 minutes free warmup, that something seems to be going weirdly with the aspect ratios of the video clips playing (the actual porn clips), and I don't think it ever stopped, at least for the first 2 video files I managed to try today. The actresses looked tall and narrow to me, tried checking my own setting but I think I see the same in your original screenshots too? It's not a huge mistake but it's something that can turn ppl off. There's also the chance that this would be messed during re-encoding, I guess, but I don't really believe that happened in this case? I downloaded this one from torrent "CH Relentless 3 x265 reencode" I do think some of the video scenes were shown correctly, though.
- Overall, bypassing the super slow start, without the beat meters and aspect ratio stuff that bothered me, I think it looked and felt beautiful, and I really hope you keep making more because you clearly are going to be a master teaser
- I'm sorry that my first comments about meters, aspect ratios are negative but I want to help you become the best instead of just sweet talking politely :D
- I can feel greatness here in the product, was just those little things that gave me troubles :D
Hi.
Thank you very much for the feedback. I'll try and address the issues as laid out in the order of your critique:
1. OK. I'll try and put a little more stroking pace and intensity into the early stages of future projects.
2. The aspect ratio problem was probably due to me cropping some of the original footage to exclude logo issues.
But, I normally am pretty solid at maintaining those aspect ratios for the frame in general. Sorry about that, but if it is
accepted that the video will not be taken down for showing digital watermarks/logos as happens with most streaming
sites,ie; 'PornHub', then I will leave them on screen in future.
3. I'm currently looking for a better beat/stroke meter that I like the look of. Any suggestions gratefully accepted.
4. Please do not feel that I take any of your criticism in any way other than positive feedback designed to allow for better CH
productions now, and in the future. Nothing ever gets better without at first failing to achieve what you wanted to achieve.
Thanks again for providing me with valuable feedback information.
NUMBERONEFAN.