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Made me....breathless... :-)
was so arousing. Tickling is my most feared or tortures. Worse than any pain!

Plus the part about feeling how tight you are from the dildo... oh my god! :-P
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Thank you for sharing that Princess. It was quite the arousing story. I do believe ill be lying awake thinking about how you just fucked me.

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Something like that has been a fantasy of mine for a while now... Thanks for sharing!
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Wow, what a pretty woman, what a devilish mind. Delicious combo, and a sweet twist.
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Wow, just... wow.
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Sounds like heaven
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oh mistress i'm like putty in your hands willing to do anything for you begging you writhing and bucking under your touch
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Loved it, i love your style of writing christie. For some constructive criticism though, i thought the end was a little rushed - when you started to fuck the cock gag. I dont know if that was deliberate or not. Also halfway through you stopped using paragraphs and the words were all bunched together. I found that harder to read.

Otherwise, it was awesome. Loved the story and loved the delivery. :smile:
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A nice story indeed. I liked how it was written maybe, as Miss T suggested; it's a bit messy on the last part but in any case it was a great story. Thanks a lot!
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