Mistress Motivator

[TheRealUnderHer]

Mistress Motivator by davefrancis89 has to be one of the best teases I have come across. Please please please please please make more similar to this one. I feel as though that tease was made just for me. I LOVE that it its not just straight up denial instead all orgasms are ruined until allowed. I can't thank you enough for this tease!

[Nezhul]

read this through. Great work! I'll gladly give a 5 to that. keep up and make more good teases like that. It's not my thing though, so I'v just read it to enjoy the "story".

A few remarks though.
1) A little bit inconsistent pictures. Like when she strips and then she's dressed again. Your future teases will be better if you keep an eye on that.
2) A bit too long tasks. It would be better if instead of commanding to tie your balls and then punish them 100 times you'd made a few pages of 10 slaps each. Something like that.
3) pages yes18 and yes19 get you to hold an edge for 20 minutes each, so 40 minutes total. I'm thinking it's a bug, and suggest fixing it. If it's NOT a bug, then you are asking too much. Edging 20 minutes while looking at a single picture is BOOOOORIIIING! if you really aim to edge someone that long - command him to fetch some 40-minute long hot porn and edge for that instead. However I think there's not a lot of guys who can hold it that long anyway.

[davefrancis89]

Thanks for the great feedback everyone!

TheRealUnderHer - Thanks! I will hopefully be making more, seeing as the FB has been so positive. I'm super busy at the mo, but when things quieten down I'll get writing.

Nezhul - Thanks for the detailed FB, it's much appreciated. (1) I will certainly do that in the future, thanks for the advice. I struggled to find enough pictures if I'm honest and was aiming for more consistancy, if i find a couple of other sets I'll mod the tease. (2) I was planning to expand these sections at a later date as I've been busy and wanted to publish to see if people liked the idea. I'll get to work on them when I have time and make sure I keep things broken up in later teases. I'm also planning on adding a finish early section. (3) Cheers for the spot! That is definitely a bug which I shall go and fix now! I hope no-one got that far yet and tried it, that would not have been fun!

Once again thank you both!

I've done teases from both of you in past and have thought they were excellent!

[itslate]

Nice tease!

What's her name?

[Hack]

Nice tease!

What's her name?

Kendra James

[davefrancis89]

The model is Kendra James. One of my favorites.

[Nezhul]

(1) I will certainly do that in the future, thanks for the advice. I struggled to find enough pictures if I'm honest and was aiming for more consistancy, if i find a couple of other sets I'll mod the tease.

there's lots on torrents. Type in a model name and you are bound to find a lot of it.

[cumping]

I think first day is nice.
The next 19 days are not my thing.
The rest I do not try yet.

[titaner]

Looking forward for the improved teases:)

[Pov78]

Made only day 1 so far... and liked it!
Should be a motivation/Discipline service...
Thought already about such a service/tease...
Looking forward to day2

[davefrancis89]

Thanks for the feedback all! Everything said is taken constructively so if there's any specifics you liked/disliked then let me know...

THE SEQUEL is currently under construction - about 200 pages so far. I only anticipate another hundred but I'm pretty happy with it at the mo.

Oh, and thanks to all that helped the tease get nominated for the TOTM competition - and thanks for the votes.