Slave Job Application - Feedback please...

[Static]

Hi All,

I was just wondering what you all thought of my webtease "Slave Job Application". It was my first tease.

I'd be interested in any feedback, so that I can take it onboard when I create my next one.

By the way, I think this site is great.

All the best,

Static

[elvikingo]

The idea about a job application is good. Also, the pictures are very good :D

[alpahde5]

i thought it was a bit short, if it was longer it would of been better, but then i know how hard it is to find lots of good quality pics of the same girl.

otherwise it was a very good tease. enjoyed it very mucho

[Static]

I agree about it being a bit short. It was really just a practise run for me, and as I was learning the editor, it actually took me about 2 hours to put it together, and it was late at night. So apologies for that. The next one will hopefully be better!

Thanks for the feedback.

Static

[dark]

You can edit it and make it longer, everytime you want

[seraph0x]

I thought it was great, looking foward to your next!

By the way, I think this site is great.

Thanks!