Feedback for "A Game Of Chance"

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Feedback for "A Game Of Chance"

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Hello, just finished my first tease, looking for feedback, constructive criticism, any mistakes (hopefully not :-/ )

thankyou :love:
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Seems too short thus not very interesting.
Also there's no chance. You may easyly remember what button leads where.

I would suggest you keep up the quality but making it longer. Watching one of your favorite videos is not really that interesting.... :-/

Also about handjob. It's easy to say "Keep up doing what she does when you cum" but in fact very few guys can do that. Personally my head gets so sore I can't even force my hand to stroke it further. It just won't move, as if on some survival core instinct. the same as you won't put your hand in the fire even if you descide to do so.
I know it's pretty much the same for most of guys.
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none of the links work, just so you know
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Yeh, whenever you try to type in the urls, it says 'account suspended'.
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Re: Feedback for "A Game Of Chance"

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jeremy, could you either post the full links here, or edit the tease?
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Love the girl or more importantly the shiny clothing she is wearing, but sadly, all of the links are broken. Too bad, I was so ready to be teased.
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Actually just forget using links in Flash teases.

Since copy and paste do not work it's a real pain in the ass to open a new window and type a long URL in.
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Re: Feedback for "A Game Of Chance"

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I know I would still like the links. Others might as well. Links in flash teasers are harder to use, but can still be nice.
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Re: Feedback for "A Game Of Chance"

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firesword wrote:I know I would still like the links. Others might as well. Links in flash teasers are harder to use, but can still be nice.



Please see.

http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=6680


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