FB: Naturally evil.

[SexualChoc]

I did a preview of this tease,
I loved the story.
I am intrigued by the choice of lube
Baby oil and salt?
Does the salt melt in the baby oil?

I don’t own baby oil because it does not play well with plastic toys
Or chastity belts, But this sounds interesting enough that I might get it just for this tease.

The only negative I really had
Was what the point o the first picture was?
To show a natural predator?
Does not seem to go with the text about being next to a bed
Perhaps You could add on page two that I have awoken from a strange dream???
Other than that a very written little tease
With seductive content.

[Kryten]

Thanks for the feedback. The picture at the start was just a random one I found. Didn't want to give anything away in the build up.

The salt doesn't melt completly in the baby oil but stays quite rough. I quite like the sensation it gives you.
You can probably do it with lube I just that I find I can use a lot of baby oil so it might be a waste of good lube :)

[storydejour]

Great tease, I loved it ... the fact she is evil has a special appeal for me personally. I suspect a lot of people here (certainly myself included) hope you'll continue.

[Brickx]

nice story! go on :D

[black moon]

I've just done the second part and it's been quite tough but great. The right mix between humiliation, pain and lust. Altough I didn't cum it's been a really fulfilling experience.
It turns me on that the girl is so young and cute and at the same time so harsh and cruel. I'm really looking forward to the next part!!

The mixture with salt is a good idea. At the first time it seems strange to me and I feard it would be very painful. But I tried it out (not with baby-oil which I don't own but with lube) and it feels very exciting.

The "strange" start picture for the first part isn't bad I think. It makes curious and doen't tell too much.

[lockgrid]

Liking this series a lot so far, can't wait for the next instalment!