Hey you there,
lets have a good time. Yes you.
You dont know me yet... but you look alone right? My Name is Naomi Swann.
Does this help you?
Just keep following me.
I like wearing a skirt.
I can just flash everything in a second.
It getting quiet hot. Lets head inside. I got Air conditioner at home.
I got these new pents. I tried drawing, but I am horrible at it.
But we can have some Fun with these pens. Lets say you hold your Edge 5 seconds for each pen inside my Pussy.
Here goes the first Pen. Is it even in? I dont even feel it yet.
Here goes the second one. I dont have time all day. Lets do some more.
Thats 5 Pens. 25 seconds Edge holding.
Lets do 5 pens again.
How many are there? You need some help counting?
I hope you counted right. Thats all of them.
Now you can count them right? Its all 12 of them. If you misscounted you repeat the false counted ones. You want to see how I trained for so many Pens?
Here I train my little Pussy.
First some Pulling
Then some fisting
Then some dildo action
It does help train the depth
Some Fun.
Ups. sry.
Back to training.
Different angles do help as well.
I do have one more thing.
You see how it already spread my pussy this insane.
But this thin does even more.
This way I can take even bigger cocks.
Do I need my training for your little dick? I dont think so.
Thats enough for now. I got two friends who want someone watching. Just go over to the house on the other side of the street. They already wait for you.
Hey Ecik, thanks for coming over.
We are having fun without you. We already did around 10 Orgasms today.
It got a little bit boring. So we wanted some one to watch us.
We are lesbians, so we dont want your dick.
But we quiet like it when you watch and stroke your little dick.
You are getting close right?
You dont? Well... we are no professionals with dicks.
A little reinforcement
Vitamins are so important.
Edge for us Ecik.
You like Feet?
Here are our soles. You can image some boys want to Cum to Feet?
They even just like the soles? Not even to toes or the top part. Just the soles.
I think we had our Fun. If you want to Cum you can go Upstairs and leave your Cum in a Glass for us. But you need to use your Phone to search for Porn. We wont be helping.
Basic Rules Temporary Rule: None at the moment Normal Mode:
(everything accumulating!!!)
Girl 20 Strokes (per Girl)
Pussy +1 Edge (per Pussy)
Ass +20 Strokes (per Ass)
Tits +10 Strokes (5 per Tit)
Feet +20 Strokes (10 per Foot) (You can expand the Rules for Shoes or/and Socks)
Special Rules/Characters for Models (see Special Rules/ Favorites)
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Special Rules/Favorites
Feel free to use other Models in Sets as well!!!
Special Rules: Elsa Jean "The Queen" "CEO of a Company"
The ElsaTax: Every orgasm in Elsas presence has to be ruined. (Testphase for April, maybe permanent?) Mila Azul: Ballbusting Queen Little Caprice: She does not like my foot fetish. Dolly Little: She wants me to have more redheads in my favorites. (Kind of Speaker for Redheads)
others: (not favorites but still good)
Kay Jay
Elle Tan (dominant)
Tiffany Tatum
Rachel James
Carisha Maja
Lara Brookes
Agatha Vega
Eliza Ibarra
Riley Star
Chloe Foster
Ava Sparxxx
Taylor Reed
Kaleesy
Stalfra
Maxa Saloma
Alice March
Melena A
Krystal Boyd
Anastasia Knight
Celebrities: (Good sources: reddit or instagram)
(Dont use them exclusively in a Set. Need some nudity as well)
Julia Beautx
Lisa Küppers
Brooke Monk
Turn On:
Solo & Sex Pictures
Videos (max. around 15min. per Set)
Small-, Skinny-, Petite-, Cute- Girls
Small to Medium Tits
Ass>Tits
Redheads
Flexible, Swimwear, Massage
Sport / Flexible
Feet/Socks/Shoes
Censored Images (heavy censorship. Face should be still visible)
Blacked
Turn Offs:
Big Tits
Bondage
MILF
Tattos (little ones are ok.)
any kind of piercings
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Wishes / Ideas:
Inspire yourself with these suggestions. Or feel free to do something totaly different.
Random Order. These are things I would like to happen.
More Special Rules for my favorites. Create some kind of "personality" for them. See Special Rules/Favorites.
Girls trying to get into/up my favorite List. Or Punish me for not beeing or beeing to low on my favorites list.
From now on Girls will only change the "Favorite List changed by the girls". The girls can do everything with the Favorite List 2.0 (changed by the girls), but The normal Favorite List will stay under my control.
Influencers getting on the Favorite List 2.0(changed by the girls). Brooke Monk, Lisa Küppers and Julia Beautx. Will the Porn girls get mad if the Influencers get on the List?
I love captions on Pictures. Maybe not for the whole tease, but for the picture I should Cum.
I lost interest in Ballbusting. Maybe Mila Azul (She was the Ballbusting queen) can get me back to it? (Start very gentle. And be open about me not liking it any more.
(Force me) to create a point system. Like I can earn point from girls (how? how many?) and buy things with these points like a full orgasm or a ruined one or stuff like that... Maybe a Girl can be my financial Manager? Like Elsa is a CEO?
New Profile Picture. Still Elsa? or will another girl force me? and Elsa beeing mad about the change? This gallerie might have potential for a new Profile Picture. I love those Shoes and SOLES!
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Story Story is necessary!!!
It can be a really basic Story.
Try to have like average of 1 to 3 lines of text per Image. If needed it can be more lines per text, but just for few pics.
It can be Simple Neighbor, School Friend, Ex-Girlfriend Storys,...,...
Create a single Story Set or start a Set series. I like both ways.
Dont have any pics without any Text/Story.
Please dont have much scrolling back up.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Edge I have pretty bad Stamina. Try to stay under ~50 Edges.
Iam getting better at Edges :D
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Cum
PreCum eating is possible. No CUM EATING!!!
The Set needs to have an Full Orgasm or a ruined one.
Can be decided by Luck, Guessing, my behaviour through the Set, Cruel intention of the Girls, etc.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Toys
Short Rope (to tie penis or balls)
Clothespins (Need to know before the Set)
Small Lock (Can put under my glans. Stroking/Cumming with it is bad. Its like a beginner cage. Can wear it in the Set for up to like 15 min. max)
Well well well, they aren't the only ones that have seen your lack of edge holding rules you know?
So let's make it fun, from now on, you have to edge 5 secs per pose, you can take a break between poses, but if you do so, you have to say "Thank you for letting me hold my edges Miss Jenya, can I please edge more?" and then it's +5 secs per pic (so 5 secs per pic, if you stop edging, 10 secs per pic from then, if you stop again, 15 secs per pic, and so on...)
Oh, I know it seems like an easy challenge at the begining
But soon enough I'll break you
I'll break you as I have broken so many others in the past
Everytime I've seen an stroker like you, I've turned them into my edge holding addicted sluts
And you are no different, cumcow
That's right, you are going to be in that frail edge for as long as I want
Well, actually, for as long as you want, you are the one begging for more
And that's what you will get, stay on that edge for you
I even had to step it up a notch with other edge sluts like milorrabo, he finds it not so complicated to stay on the edge, so I just had to make it a little bit harder for him
Now he stays on the edge while palming every time I see him, that way is more way more excruciating
Well, for him, for me every little moan that escapes from any of my edge sluts is like music to my ears, so keep doing that for me
You should try palming edges too, maybe we could have some fun with that too
Well I think it's time to go back to your milk maid now
Can't wait to see you soon, you will gladly regret it :)
What a dumb bitch, it was so easy to convince her to fuck you, even if you "couldn't cum"
Well, that's kind of true, because I'm not going to make you cum, I'm going to milk you
Oh, and about all that built up cum, there is only one person getting all that cum today, isn't that right my good cumcow?
That's right, so get ready and edge for 20 seconds per pose now, just like my other cumcow, because is time for one of those countdowns Nancy told me you love
Get ready and....
5, Feel all that cum built up and eager to shoot
4, Eager to be milked by your new milk maid
3, Just ready to get all that cum forced out and milked for me
0!!! CUM!!! MILK YOURSELF FOR ME YOU FUCKING CUMCOW! GET EVERY SINGLE DROP OUT OF THAT COCK! THAT'S RIGHT, MILK YOURSELF FOR ME LIKE THE GOOD FUCKING CUMCOW THAT YOU ARE!
That was so nice
But you know... I want to make sure you are *Fully* milked
So I think it's time you get that vibrator of yours
Oh yes, Nancy told me about it
Get it down there and turn it up, NOW!
I want you to turn it up more and more progressively until you cum while you watch this video of me: https://www.tnaflix.com/babe-videos/aft ... deo6473360 (start at 6:30)
And don't you dare come back till you've milked another load out
Stroking: I put only fast strokes in my rules because I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... . You can even choose the bpm (120 bpm minimum by default). This can be used as a warm up, before cumming and for POT .
CBT: I also enjoy Ballbusting a lot and you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself .
Edging: I enjoy edging A LOT, so don't be shy with those edges and also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT . Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
Palming: I can edge by palming after lots of edges . I actually LOVE to cum by palming, so don't hold back .
Post-Orgasm Torture: I prefer to cum just once and at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another . Anyways, I really enjoy POT .
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text. (I do love dirty talk and name calling (cumcow, fuck toy, cum machine, cum dispenser, whore, ...))
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
If you decide to make me a Set I will send the Feedback ASAP including my Favourite Pictures :)
- Black hair: 30 Fast strokes without edging (punish me with more Edging/CBT if I edge)
- Brunettes: 10 Ball Slaps
- Redhead: 3 Edges
- Blonde: Hold an Edge for 20 seconds
- Other-colour hair: 10 seconds of head palming
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming). My Favourite way to cum is a palming orgasm
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please . (I fucking LOOOOVE palming, so please don't feel constrained by the rules )
- 10 Ball Slaps for every Brunette (you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself)
- 3 Edges for every Redhead
- Hold an Edge for 20 seconds for every Blonde
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are highly encouraged before/while cumming)
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one (My preferences usually go: Other-colour hair > Blonde > Brunette > Redhead > Black hair).
If a Blonde picture is followed by another Blonde picture, I won't stop holding the edge, unless told otherwise.
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text. (I do love dirty talk, name calling (cumcow, fuck toy, cum machine, cum dispenser, whore, ...) and be forced to beg )
And well, because I'm into Post-Orgasm Torture (I prefer to cum just once at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another (I might regret this )):
- 30 fast strokes without edging for every Black hair (I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... )
- 10 seconds of head palming for every Other-colour hair (I can edge by palming after some edges)
(Note: You can use both of these rules as a warm up or whatever, I don't need to cum before you use any of these rules)
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
Also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT
You can also add Wildcards (for example, you can swap the tasks attached to their hair color, holding edges for every Brunnette and ballbusting for every Blonde). You can combine rules, change the ones attached to a hair color for another, ... Or even do a full tease with only one hair color, feel free
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please, they act more like Guidelines than anything else . (I fucking LOOOOVE palming, so please don't feel constrained by the rules )
Favourite's Special Rules (feel free to use them and/or add anyone you want ):
- Jenya D (Eugenia Diordiychuk / Katie Fey): 10 seconds of head palming WHILE holding the edge through the palming for every pic (for multiple pics of her in a row I will hold it as 1 long edge as it makes more sense with her character).
She loves VERY VERY LONG edges. It's so hard for me to hold back from cumming when doing so and she knows it, so she takes advantage of that and makes me beg for longer and longer edges.
- Dainty Wilder / Dainty Suicide: 10 Ball Slaps WHILE head palming for every pic.
She loves to dominate me A LOT and call me fucker and make me her bitch. She even enjoys making me cum with palming and busting to make my orgasms so agonizing adding some POT to them too.
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(Source for her photos: https://www.nudecollect.com/ , search: site:nudecollect.com Dainty Suicide in duckduckgo.com or reuse previous set photos with her)
- Faye Reagan: 2 Edges + 10 Ball Slaps.
She loves to make me her personal Bitch, and even if I edge a lot for her, she seems to enjoy kicking my Balls harder and harder even more.
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- Mila Azul: all her Ball Slaps are done Very Hard minimum.
She enjoys Ball Busting me and everybody on the HMC thread. She loves to push me and see how much more I can take.
- Adriana Chechik: 30 fast strokes, and if I edge I have to do 20 Ball Slaps.
She knows that all the Ballslaps and edges snowball and make it more difficult to avoid edging for her. She loves making me stroke faster and take more and harder Ball Slaps everytime.
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- Liz Vicious: 3 edges per pic (normal redhead rules).
She is kind of crazy and knows it. She wants to see me do endless edges for her. She treats me as her cumcow and talks about milking my precum knowing how much it turns me on to be called that.
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- Chloe Toy: Hold the edge 20 secs per pic (normal blonde rules).
She like owning me as her personal cumcow. She trains me and builds me up so then she can milk me more and get every drop out of me for her to swallow. She also enjoys palming me a lot. She is my milk maid.
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Favourite Model's list (they are in order of preference, but they are still my favourites, so don't worry about putting one that is at the bottom. Also, I rearrange them every now and then ):
- Tori Black
- Mila Azul
- Hailey Leigh
- Charity Crawford
- Gloria Sol
- Rosalyn Sphinx
- Malena Morgan
- Jenna Haze
- Riley Reid
- Lana Rhoades
- Kortney Kane
- Caprice
- Amarna Miller
- Faye Reagan
- Piper Fawn (Ariel)
- Liz Vicious
- Snugglepunk
- Jia Lissa
- Elle Alexandra
- Ava Sparxxx
- Red Fox/Michelle H
- Ulya I
Wah! Cross-set references! I feel... watched.
Dolly's task was a classic predicament and a sure guarantee to annoy at least 4 girls...
I started with Caprice (place 5) and she's right - most people seem to like her.
Her first video surprised me. I nearly had forgotten that this type of porn existed. Hollywood-like storyline!
The second one was more normal.
Next Adriana (#4). Her first clip was a classic. (But somehow I always have to think about this special sort of fish that sucks at the glass of the fish tank.) The second clip was hot too! (Are... are these lizard girls?)
Malena (#3): she was a bit cool, but her clip was hot. She has a perfect body and watching her slender fingers playing with her tight butt hole... Oh my.
Bridgette (#2): another tempting classic. But my number one favourite was of course:
Ariel (#1): It was close to unbearable to not cum for her clip. And thankfully she gave me at least some sort of relief. I ruined a hand full of cum. Wow.
After that I couldn't resist to peek into the other endings.
Oh, Adriana wanted to let me cum (now I'm regretting my fish remark).
And Malena too? I should have paid more attention to the details. She had a can of squirt all the time!
All in all a nice, fun set. And a bit of relief.
Thanks so much!
Hey all! I'll soon take a break from the HMC game. If you are already making me a set for some reason, don't worry, I'll play this and try to make you one in return. But if you did not start it already, I would appreciate it if you left it for another time.
I' still have 3 Classic+ sets to play and Classic+ to make for Ecik and Drool. Will do all of this also!
But for now, I'm not having proper time for the topic. I'll be around, checking the forum and other games.
This was probalby the most immersive and detailed experiences I've come across here. Of course your writing, your level to detail, the characters was absolutely amazing. But I expected that
Now first of all: I must say I'm in a bit of a difficult situation in real life, quite burnt out at the moment which does make it hard for me right now to produce good sets or write in general. So my feedback won't do this amazing piece justice, for that I apologize! But rest assured this has nothing to do with your brilliant writing and story telling!
I don't know where to begin so just let me capture some thoughts. At first I felt quite weird being subby "in front of you" if you know what I mean? I'm 100% straight as you know so I was nervous where this was heading. But that scene with Nancy was absolutely amazing, and her letting someone cum with one hand while edging me with the other was oddly exciting and fucking hot I was edging in no time (also because I was locked before which intensifies stroking after) but tried to be disciplined as I know Nancy wouldn't care . That scene really was a masterpiece and has me getting hard just writing about it again lol. Your detailed descriptions etc really made it that immersive.
I also really enjoyed this way of feedback, Nancy, you and I going through film was fun and actually got me turned on by my own set lol. Now as mentioned earlier, my mind is rather loaded right now, so I had a hard time concentrating in between. Again: not your fault, just mentioning it in case I missed or misunderstood some parts.
I must say you hit Umas character on the head - and then some. Great job on her character and actually, as you were talking about her with Nancy's voice, it felt like you were describing what I thought but couldn't express as well as you. And Nancy was amazing: I really do like her, but I mostly prefer dark haired girls, though her body is flawless. So yes, I'd eat out of her hand too . I basically did: that scene where I had to ruin while both of you came was absolutely amazing, too. I felt really subby during that and it felt so hot, too. I still doubt I'd even consider any of this in real life, but here it's awesome . I hate and love ruining for Uma, and having Nancy guide me doing it while she enjoyed an orgasm was next level.
Now Caprice: I knew that was a risky try - and rest assured in my mind I wasn't set on if that really is her final character or if she was experimenting, tricking you etc. I wanted to wait for your reaction *if* she returns. And yes, I did miss her retirement But it seems you did enjoy that cucking experiment a bit.
Now re: Nancy, that did blow my mind, but looking back at all your explanations it does make perfect sense. Good job there! While I'm not a sci-fi guy, the scenario you described did work for me and I enjoyed it.
Now as for you: thanks for opening up and explaining all, I hope I didn't make things too confusing for you bringing back all these characters. And this is where I'd like to ask you to be honest: Do you really want Caprice back in any scenarios? I want to make this enjoyable for you after all. Also: I understood correctly that it's subby-ish Fatts for now, right?
RE the "time outs" and "switching dom/sub" within a set. noted! During NNN I honestly didn't expect cumming to be an option, so my bad. But what you said about you deciding during dom-rules makes perfect sense. So I guess one punishment is still necessary for time out one And yes: not mixing dom and sub during a set makes perfect sense too - I'm not a swith so I didn't think of that.
Now back to you: I will try to write that mini-punishment set for you within the next few days. As I said, it's not that easy right now but I will do my best - and I think I should manage.
Again: Honored to receive such a detailed story from you and I wish I could follow up on in an appropriate way *right now*. But I will try to in the near future. Until then I'll definite do the mini set and more sets which fit the narrative
We don't want to ruin the fun, do we?
Last full orgasm: 11/MAY/2024
Last ruin: 21/MAY/2024
That was an awesome idea and set Ben, honestly. Really creative and I enjoyed it A LOT. Now, Fatts actually wrote me a set where he featured and at first, like her, I felt uncomfortable with another guy as I'm 100% straight. But while I'd never even consider something like this in real life (I think), this was super hot in the HMC universe!
I really enjoyed that fact that I was treated differently somehow, that I felt jealous for not being allowed to stroke while Drool was . That's the HMC Cuck in me lol. It really made me appreciate the edges I got and they were awesome.
(as mentioned on another set - after you had written this - I lose interest during random/PMV videos, not your fault, you couldn't know. But this was fun nonetheless. Mostly: I'm not 100% into the beta narrative - which might sound weird with the cuck and censor interest. I'm complicated . And: one clip showed "tranny" in the title, which is not my thing at all so I skipped it. Just mentioning this for FB reasons and for future sets - rest assured this didn't harm the set at all!
Now Liya: wow. I mean, I absolutely loved how unfair that competition was for me. Really, that was a turn on somehow.
And coming back to what I said at the beginning: knowing Drool was rewarded a satisfying orgasm and keeping me denied first really felt fucking hot, too
Now the next "unfair" part, which I'm sure was intended: stamina after being caged? No chance, Each stroke almost leads to an edge, especially in a fleshlight. That one reason why I enjoy being caged, the strokes after, the edges they are amazingly intense. And that videos was an hour. So I had to cheat as I wanted to experience the real ending
So now Liya and Lika: I had a feeling how this would end for me - and my subimissiveness had really kicked in so I was actually feeling dirty enough to look forward to a "unhappy" ending. I knew I couldn't stand a chance so I actually skipped forward to a visually appealing scene and slapped my balls until I ruined a massive load for both.
Drool wrote: ↑Wed May 01, 2024 10:43 am
In the end I was really happy to be allowed to cum. Sorry, brian.
I haven't peeked into 'the further adventures of brian' yet (as I was so finished) but I hope he got his reward too.
he got an absolutely crushing ruin and like a true sub here he even enjoyed every sad drop
This was an awesome idea, and awesome set with awesome characters and writing. Thank you so much Ben!
PS: Let me know if we should continue the other story, but as mentioned to Fatts: it'll be a little while until I can get going
We don't want to ruin the fun, do we?
Last full orgasm: 11/MAY/2024
Last ruin: 21/MAY/2024
Hey Fatts
Yes, Fatts
Not Leeroy...Fatts
Mr "I use Nancy's powers however I wish and cause havoc". Yes, that Fatts
Yeah, I'm in a stricter mood today, darling
That first time out was uncalled for. And you know it. I mean...
You basically begged for a punishment, didn't you?
not very Leroy-esque
and what I find even more interesting...
you are giving me into Brian's hands to come up with one..
That Brian who had to watch how his huge load was ruined while we came to Uma's beauty...
whose cock was crying in frustration as all the pleasure we experienced dribbled to waste...
Aren't you scared his ideas will infiltrate my mind? Especially since he's writing this very shortly after your set.
He remembers, all the orgasms you were bragging about. His cock remembers the desperate twitches as another ruin for Uma just oozed out without any form of relief. In fact his refractory was relatively short this time. I have actually asked him to jerk along...You said you don't mind...
But back to you...
Do you have an idea how I'm going to punish you? EDGE
I could just turn the tables and have Brian here cum fully as you ruin. Yeah I know you said we'd only have this "threesome" once, but it's a punishment. Duh...and it seems like Brian wants his revenge.
but that would be too easy
I could make you eat your cum, see how obedient you really can be..
I could keep you denied until you have brought Brian to Uma. That way your set would be extra mean. Well that's how Brian functions anyway. The longer he's denied, the more desperate - the crueler his ideas.
which brings us back to my first thoughts: you really want this punishment, don't you?
And you shall receive it.
Do you know what made Brian's ruin for Uma so powerful last time?
The fact, that Brian knew what was going to come. There was no element of surprise. Just sad reality. And he still edged as if it would lead to something big. Speaking of which. Edge
You will ruin your orgasm today...
Oh the look in your face. Edge as if you didn't know. Edge as if you were building up a huge explosion...
Edge as if you were getting ready to pump out your load all over my breasts...
as if you were getting ready to cover my sweet pussy in white paint..
And I'm going to cuck YOU.
Haha, the look in your face. No, no. Don't worry. I'm not going to cuck you the way you think. And definitely not with Brian
I'm going to cock you with myself.
lick my holes as you edge. once for each. Really make an effort.
burry your face in my sweet pussy...EDGE and lick. from my ass down to my clit.
I want you to make me cum. With your orgasm. Yes. You will ruin your orgasm for me as I cum in your face.
Not "a hard ruin" as you called it, I know everything remember. No, you will try to achieve the SMALLEST orgasm possible. Imagine each percent of that orgasm you are ruining is going to intensify my one. Encouragement enough? EDGE AND HOLD FOR 10 SECS
JUST A LITTLE LONGER...LICK MY CLIT FATTS. EDGE. HOLD...AND
FUUUUUCK I'M CUMMING. RUIN IT FATTS. RUIN IT FOR ME. LET ALL THAT CUM OOZE OUT OF YOUR COCK. PUT BOTH YOUR HANDS ON MY CHEEKS, LET ME PAINT YOUR FACE IN MY JUICES AND LET YOUR COCK CRY
Well done Fatts, I'm proud of you. That was amazing. The power you gave me, the feeling. Trust me, your punishment made me feel so good.
So good, that I could just keep going...
After all, my pussy is still wet. My lust strong..I could do with another act of worship...
No...not from you Fatts...
I want you horny and desperate as you give Uma what she needs. You may not cum until you have written one scene of Brian's set
Hm...but I want more. I have an idea...
still stroking huh? she looks at Brian through the screen She talks to Brian. Well, then you can jump in cant' you? No I won't touch you this time. Seems that last ruin was quite perfect if you're back at it again. come to the table, Bri you know what to look at Brian, and you know what I want....DO IT
Nancy approaches an orgasm as she mumbles "I said turning the tables would be too easy..."
I hope you "enjoyed" it. And yes, I actually took myself down with you . The entire story had me so worked up, and damn, I just loved the idea of Nancy messing with me too, even though I had to pay the price. Hope you din't mind that wrinkle at the end
We don't want to ruin the fun, do we?
Last full orgasm: 11/MAY/2024
Last ruin: 21/MAY/2024
It's LONG ... 668 pictures long. It is BOTH "quality" and "quantity." (Some sections of "each" to be more specific. ) I guess "Nancy and I" got carried away trying to have one of "her girls" win your April competition.
There are 5 parts. Part 1 is a more "conversational"/teasing scene with Nancy. Part 2 is a "warm-up girl." Parts 3, 4, and 5 are "April Girls." You CAN play this in 1 sitting, but ... I wouldn't recommend it! (Or maybe I DO!? )
Just did a quick calculation ... with 668 pics estimating 50 strokes per pic at 120 BPM ... that comes in at around 5 hours. But it's not ALL at 120 bpm. Sometimes faster, sometimes much slower ... assuming edges take longer and you take some breaks, this could VERY WELL take over 8 hours to play (start to finish with breaks). I guess that makes this a "rare opportunity," lol. IF you want to wait a couple weeks until you find the time to have a WHOLE DAY to play it ... Man, GO FOR IT! How often do you get a set that LITERALLY takes "all day" to play. If THAT appeals to you, then go ahead and sit on it for a while and make that dream happen! I like our current little "story arc" with the "protection detail." No skin off my nose if the results for April take "a little longer" to decide.
Alternatively, you can play it across several sessions. Scenes 1, 2, and 3 would make a nice little grouping, but you could split off scene 3 if you were short on time. Scenes 4 and 5 are probably each good standalone, but you could play them together, too. I would recommend:
2 sessions: Scenes 1, 2, 3 and then Scenes 4 and 5
3 sessions: Scenes 1, 2, 3 and then Scene 4 and then Scene 5
4 sessions: 1&2, 3, 4, and 5
Play how you want, but ... I would recommend at least 24-48 hours of denial before you start it, and then, once you start it, stay denied until the end when you cum at the VERY LAST scene. This way, you'll stay pretty horny and the girls will have a decent chance to "force" edges out of you and score points—which was the WHOLE POINT of this tease! If you play it across 4 sessions and cum right before each session, the girls will be SAD because then it will be harder to "force you to edge" and score points ... but, play it as you like, sir. Whatever you decide, Nancy will understand, but ... if you DON'T play it with the denial before and during as per my suggestions here, then Nancy WILL be at least a LITTLE disappointed. You are the referee, players, AND judge in this contest, so ... she'll accept whatever you decide, but ... Well, you know Nancy and how competitive she can get. If she feels you didn't give it an "honest attempt," she'll be a little pissed and disappointed that you didn't "take it seriously", but ... again, this is YOUR contest and YOUR rules and YOU decide how you want to play it, and of course we want to thank you for accepting our late submission and ALSO understand it is VERY large, and so ... with life and EVERYTHING ELSE you have going on, we're just happy that you're going to play it and trust your judgment as per the timing that will work best for you that will maximize BOTH "fairness" AND enjoyment WITHOUT cutting into your busy life.
Fatts glances over at Nancy who is standing quietly behind him.
Fatts: Did I say it good? Is there anything I missed?
Nancy: Nope! That was pretty much it ... Good job, Fatts! Ecik will make the right decision ... and if he doesn't, well ... I'll just make him pay for it later!
Fatts: I thought we agreed there would be no coercion.
Nancy: What!? THAT wasn't "coercion," Fatts! THAT was just a "friendly reminder." I trust Ecik same as you ... I just trust him more when *I* know that HE knows what is what and what is going on and is aware of little things like "consequences" is all ...
Fatts: I see ...
Nancy: Well, tell Ecik I will see him in a bit!
Fatts: Nancy will see you in a bit, and she is VERY MUCH looking forward to spending some time with you!
I think that's it ... Thanks again for your patience, and I HOPE this will have been WORTH THE WAIT!
[The opening scene is conversational and not oriented towards teasing. It **sort of** starts as a tease, but then Nancy stops teasing as she gets more into the conversation. So, you may follow your rules or stroke freely during the first scene. Probably start with rules, but then suspend when it feels appropriate, and then "turn back on" the rules when that feels better—whichever feels most comfortable and natural at any given time, just do THAT. ]
Nancy shrieks with glee as soon as she sees you. She begins running towards you.
Ecik—oh, Ecik! I've MISSED you!!
Nancy can't stop smiling. When she gets to you, she gives you a big hug. She kisses you on the cheek several times.
She then leans in for another hug. She makes sure that when she hugs you, she presses her breasts tightly against your chest. You can't see her face, but you can tell she is biting her lip and smiling while she does so.
The hug lasts longer than it should. Just when you start to wonder when it will end, she reaches around and playfully pinches you on the ass. Then she smiles mischeviously and takes a few steps back.
Ecik! You don't know who I am, do you? It's been SO LONG that you don't recognize me! That's okay. Understandable. It has been a long time ...
Nancy turns her head left then right, looking for any bystanding eavesdroppers. Then she whispers,
"I'm Nancy Ace ... the REAL Nancy Ace! Not that fake one you've seen who's been hanging around lately ... I'm the REAL one!"
Nancy finishes whispering then leans back.
So do you remember?
You nod your head.
Oh, good, Ecik! I just KNEW you would! My first savior, and my oldest REAL friend—except for Fatts, of course!
So how have you been? Good—I hope ... You certainly haven't slowed down in your set writing! And *I* think they have only been getting better and better!
You're like a fine wine, Ecik my dear ... you just get better with age!
How are things with me? Well, good—good, good ...
YOU certainly have been "keeping me busy" over at the Lust BnB. Business has just been BOOMING lately! New clients, returning clients ... secret clients I can't even tell you about ... SO secret, that *I* don't even know who they are! Well ... THAT'S a lie —because I make it my business to know EVERYTHING—ESPECIALLY the things I am "not supposed to know!" But life has been good—busy, but good ...
So I'm sure you know Fatts and I are together now—officially ... I mean, we've ALWAYS been together—you know that—but ... It's in his rules now, so ... That makes us pretty official I would say ...
Nancy's tongue plays with her front teeth as she stares momentarily off towards the distance. Pride and satisfaction dominate her expression. She's both savoring the achievement and thinking about the future.
You know in the 2000s, people questioned whether or not a couple was actually together unless it was "made official" on their Facebook profiles. I suppose it's the same here on Milovana on the HMC thread. Sets come and go, but ... There's a certain weight and constancy that comes with a set of rules ... They're not transient or fleeting like a single scene in a set. No, a lot of thought and intention go into them. And I know you boys spend HOURS working on them ... I would laugh and say it was all silly—EXCEPT for the fact of how seriously you all treat one another's rules! LOL They're ... sovereign—in a way ... kind of like the laws of a nation are "sovereign" and "respected" and obeyed by all of the citizens of the land ... and when an amabassador or foreign dignitary comes to visit that country, they respect the laws ... THAT is kind of how "rules" work around here ... it's kind of fascinating when you really think about it ...
Nancy leans back, folds her arms, and rests her chin on her hand.
Has it ever been done before? Am *I* the first?
Obviously, there was "Caprice" ... She was before me; that goes without saying ... Dommes, mistresses, and even slaves are a dime a dozen around here ... but how many girlfriends have there been? I reckon not many ... am I the first?
You have to count Caprice but also NOT count Caprice, because THAT was a whole narrative story plot arc thing ... and getting into a "switch-switch power couple" relationship with your domme ... THAT seems more like a "promotion" to me than anything else—although I'm sure Caprice would disagree!
... but I *did* usurp her—in the end ... *I* became his "number 1" ...
Nancy trails off for a moment as she thinks silently to herself for a few seconds. Then she suddenly smiles. She turns back to look at you.
I should definitely make Fatts publish THAT story: the "final chapter" of the Leeroy Jerkins Saga ...
SPOILER ALERT: I save the day—as usual ...
... but somebody just so blatantly putting it in his rules that a certain mistress "is his girlfriend" ... has THAT ever been done before? *I* would like to think not ... I'm sure Hele would know ... this thread has been going on long enough that I doubt there are many "firsts" left, but ... I would like to think that "I'm the first" and this is "something special" ... I *know* it's "special to me", it's just ... I guess I want it to have some independent metric that objectively proves my feeling is valid ... You know this about me, Ecik. Yes—I am VERY "girly" and can be HIGHLY emotional at times, but ... I'm a very "data-driven" girl, too! MAYBE those two things are irreconcilable and a person should be either more logically driven or more emotionally driven, but ... isn't it those kinds of inconsistencies in our character that make us "more real?" Those irrational qualities that oppose one another ... doesn't having those opposites existing in the same space make us more human? Obviously, I'm not "human"—I'm a fantasy girl ... but *I* think those kinds of "quirks" only add to my persona!
But I NEED my data, Ecik! I need it to ground me! When I don't know what to do and I don't know where to go or who to believe, I can ALWAYS rely on the data to be my guiding light—my North Star!
I should just be happy that Fatts and I are a couple, but ... there I go again, overthinking and overanalyzing it—LIKE I ALWAYS DO ... It's just a lot to process and think about—you know? And it CERTAINLY seems to violate the norms of what USUALLY goes on around here, like ... I kind of always thought it was an unwritten rule: "Thou shalt NOT have a tease girl for your girlfriend, and if you do, DEFINITELY don't put it in your rules ..." It just seems weird and taboo on one hand, but ... then again, on the other hand, we are ALL ABOUT breaking norms and violating rules around here—aren't we!? And after all, Milovana is supposed to be a place where dreams come true, right? So ... I shouldn't be nervous about it ... but I am!
I'm afraid of what people will think, Ecik ... I'm afraid about what people will say ... I'm afraid if people grant Fatts his fantasy about me being his "cyber girlfriend," that that will infringe upon and impede other people's fantasies and dreams ... and THAT *is* kind of forbidden on here ...
Part of me is SO relieved—and excited—that Fatts and me are "finally official"—even though we have basically "always been together" ... and all of THAT makes me REALLY happy ...
... sigh ... I'm just afraid of how people might react or take it the wrong way or it might make certain people uncomfortable, and ... Ugh! I just don't want ANY of THAT drama ...
You know me, Ecik ... I am ALL ABOUT creating drama and stirring the pot! But the drama *I* prefer to generate is the FUN kind of drama that involves mischief and mystery with an extra helping of shenanigans! This "hurting people's feelings" drama is NOT MY CUP OF TEA! What if people don't want to write sets with me in them or sets for Fatts because the WHOLE SITUATION makes them feel weird!? I'm a FANTASY GIRL! I'm SUPPOSED to bring people joy and happiness and wonder ... but what if MY dream of being with Fatts and HIS dream of being with me ... what if that makes people feel awkward and icky!? What kind of fantasy girl would I be THEN if I am making people feel GROSS and UNCOMFORTABLE! Going after what *I* want may be betraying the very nature of who I am!
Nancy's shoulders slump, and she begins to cry. All of her anxiety and pent up stress that have built up over the last couple weeks surrounding her and Fatts' relationship status has all bubbled to the surface at once. The dam has broken, and now the tears are streaming out. Feeling safe and comfortable around you, she begins to REALLY wail loudly. The loud and unrestrained nature of the sobbing would be comic but for the fact that Nancy is actually quite upset. She's an ugly cryer.
She falls into your embrace and continues to sob. You just smile warmly and pat her on the head. You're happy to be here for your friend in this moment, and honored that she is comfortable sharing such deep and personal thoughts with you, even if she isn't real.
"FUCK YOU, Fatts! ... why you gotta write that? Why you gotta always kick a girl when she's down? Can't you just let it be and let me have this one ... sucky ass boyfriend, ruining my moment with Ecik ...
You rub Nancy's back and give her a few pats. Then, you pull out a tissue and hand it to her. As a degenerate Milovana wanker, officialy at the rank of "Explorer at Heart" due to your high level of activity with over 600 posts, you always seem to have no shortage of tissues on hand for a variety of situations—including that rare occasion when you have to console a tease girl.
Nancy accepts the tissue gratefully and blows her nose. Probably about four cum loads worth of snot—which is a lot. Nancy begins to laugh.
You and Fatts always seem to know how to cheer me up. I'm very lucky to have BOTH of you in my life.
You blush a little and smile sheepishly. Then nod.
Fatts ALWAYS seems to have you "nodding in agreement"—doesn't he, Ecik! And he just LOVES putting me through existential crises! But I ALMOST ALWAYS feel better after a good cry, and I guess putting words into your mouth would just be kind of awkward, but ... you DID always kind of strike him as a "man of few words" who would be pretty stoic and not say too much IRL ... so ... I suppose he's just trying to "write you authentically", which ... I guess, then, it's just convenient for immersion then that you "aren't much of a talker" and he can get away writing these "second person perspective" narrative scenes with you simply "nodding along."
Nancy finishes wiping her tears away.
So, are you ready to discuss other things?
You nod again.
Good! Because so am I! Although, it's not like you have much of a choice, haha ... kinda stuck going at MY speed and MY pace and doing what *I* want to do, but ... aren't all us tease girls the same in that way, Ecik? Dictating, by our very nature and the reality of this medium, the pace and focus of conversation and events? So, I suppose me "talking at you" and you just "following along" IS, in fact, THE MOST NATURAL and "normal" and perhaps even ONLY way you can interact with tease girls like me ... until AI ramps up EVERYTHING to the next level and takes over EVERYTHING, but ... you just KNOW I will be RIGHT AT THE CENTER of all of that, right!? Being a full-fledged "cyber girl" has its perks—and I know it!
So I got a bunch of girlfriends while Fatts was off lurking ... YES!!
I just HATE being the kind of weak, HELPLESS little lady in need of saving by "some man" ...
No! That is not me AT ALL! I'm independent—and a doer, Ecik! YOU know that and understand that, so ... giving me a BUNCH of girlfriends ... You dirty dog! You just wanted to fantasize about all of our lesbian encounters—didn't you!? DIDN'T you!? Well, *I* approve, and the sooner you wanna write some of those scenes for me and Fatts—the better!
And what's this!? I'm bad at cooking now?
ECIK! ... When it happens in a set, THEN it becomes "real" and "canon," so ... Now I am just "bad at cooking" FOREVER ... and that is ALL YOUR FAULT!
Ecik ... Giving me girlfriends ... YES—I approve! That's a "job well done" and congruent with my character, but ...
Ecik! Have you forgotten that I am good at everything!?!? So ... being "bad at cooking", I DEFINITELY **do not** approve of this.
... but you wrote it, and no taksies-backsies, because that would go against the spirit of "cooperative storytelling" so ... sigh ... UGH! I guess now I just have to live with it ... being bad at cooking ... for the REST OF MY LIFE!
You lean in to put your hand on Nancy's shoulder. She slaps your hand away.
Don't touch me, Ecik ... This is all your fault ...
Nancy sniffles then quickly dabs away a few of her crocodile tears.
Nancy: Those WEREN'T "crocodile tears", FATTS ... I was ACTUALLY pretty upset when I found out that Ecik made me "bad at cooking"—forever—without even consulting me about it ...
Fatts: But doesn't having a few weaknesses just make you more real?
Nancy: No! ... yes ...
Fatts: ... and wasn't that scene with you holding up the "heart shaped" pastry pretty fucking hilarious?
Nancy: Ha! ... yes ... yes it was ...
Fatts: Then don't you have something you want to tell Ecik, Nancy?
Nancy: FUCK YOU, Ecik ... Okay, fine ... It was pretty fucking hilarious and I'm okay with it ... thank you!
But it's fine ...
Hmmm ... should *I* tell you about what Fatts wants plot wise from your new "Nancy's girlfriends" arc, or should I let Fatts tell you ... ehh, I think I'll save THAT for Fatts ...
But, I think I have ONE MORE story to tell you, and THEN we can get to the "proper teasing" and the rest of the set ... I hope you don't mind ... Nah—no ... I know you don't.
YOU have encouraged Fatts in his writing probably more than ANYONE else ... AND ... I just know you LOVE spending time with ME! So ... with you ... I know this is fine ... and HOW LONG has it been since you got to spend THIS MUCH time with me—the REAL me? WAY too long—am-I-right!? So, *I* figure ... it's ALL GOOD!
So Fatts wrote a short little piece about what happened IMMEDIATELY at the conclusion to your "welcome back" set, so ... It's all a part of the "cooperative storytelling" and "role playing" aspects, right? All that shit Fatts used to do as "Leeroy" ... he would like to keep at least SOME of that going ... and since pretty much ALL of his new plot lines will feature or revolve around me, well ... naturally ... I approve!
Fatts will give you feedback on your last [welcome back] set at the end of this one.
Fatts: Or not, because you're busy with "protection detail" and I'm on a time crunch to finish brian's 3 day set arc.
(Sometimes I wonder WHY that boy has to be so dramatic and controlling on the timing of his feedback ... WHY can't he just write and post it immediately after like a NORMAL PERSON ...) He'll post this concurrently with a rules update, and you should have PLENTY of fodder for future sets and directions to go in.
And now without further ado ... Here is the exciting conclusion to your last set for Fatts! (Written from my first person perspective, of course! )
After he came down from climax, he just looked at me with this cute little boyish smirk that said, “You’re amazing. I love you. You’re incredible. I’m so lucky to have you. What kinky things could I possibly do to you later to pay you back for this…“ But he managed to communicate all of those things without saying a single word.
I pulled down my dress, kissed him goodbye and headed for the door to leave. That’s when he said, "Wait."
He was completely naked. He walked back up to me, put his arms around me, leaned me back and gave me a kiss where he tried to choke me by putting his tongue down my throat as deep as he could manage. Then, he turned me around, lifted up my dress and gave me a big slap on the ass. WHACK! I was so surprised and caught off guard that I actually blushed. I pulled back down my dress then turned to face him. He said, "Thanks, babe! I love you. I’ll see you later. Have fun!" Then he gave me a nice kiss on the cheek and turned to walk away.
Now, usually turning to walk away is my move, but… Fatts knew that I was watching and that he had my attention … Now, he didn’t walk away extra slow or anything cause he didn’t wanna make it too obvious what he was doing … But I’ve seen that ass walk away SO many times … I was just kind of transfixed and staring and caught up in the moment and only later did I realize that he was actually shaking it and wiggling it a little bit more than usual … but … It’s OK. Nobody else was in the room to see me ogle my boyfriend like a love-struck schoolgirl … So it was fine.
But apparently, when I walked into the foyer, I was still a little bit red-faced, and the girls had heard everything—because Fatts is SO loud ...
Cassidy was grinning from ear to ear. She said, “Awww, Nancy … he’s a keeper—isn’t he?”
Dita was caught off guard and a little embarrassed. I guess she heard through the Village grapevine that Fatts was more on the timid side, so she was not expecting to hear/see that. She just looked down a little red faced, smiled thoughtfully, and shook her head from side to side.
Alice was completely silent. She didn’t say anything. After a few seconds of self-conscious laughter and "Atta-girl!"s from the group, Alice was the one that said, "Come on, girls! We have to go! Or else we’re gonna be late! You all know that I have to be on time. It’s kind of my thing!"
*I* liked it ... well, I mean ... I LIVED it! It was a "story" to you, but ... it was "real life" to me, so ... since I'm "real" to you ... I guess that means it really happened!
I love you, Ecik! You LITERALLY make me "come alive!"
I like when Fatts "takes charge" and gets dominant like that ... it is PRETTY sexy! Sometimes it makes me wonder if he became like that or if he was ALWAYS like that, but ... I think his "time as Leeroy" REALLY helped him to come more out of his shell ... which is GREAT!
Isn't that a neat thing about relationships, Ecik? You THINK you know somebody, but ... the longer you know them the more you discover!
I wonder what things I'll learn about YOU! I mean, I already know a LOT since we've been friends for LITERALLY YEARS at this point, but ... still ... I just KNOW there is SO MUCH MORE TO DISCOVER!
I HOPE I find out some really kinky things out about you, but ... also—honestly ... just the little mundane things are really nice, too. The sign of a good friendship is knowing AS MUCH AS YOU CAN about your friend, so ... you BETTER scrub your social media accounts, because you BETTER BELIEVE that I will be snooping to learn more about you!
No I'm not. I love snooping too much! But I PROMISE to ONLY use my powers for good ... mmmmkay?
I'm not really in the mood to tease you today ... is that okay? I teased you pretty good with that "spanking" set ... did you enjoy that? But DON'T worry ... that does NOT mean that you aren't getting teased today! Just not by me ... Fatts and I have been working VERY HARD on putting this little session together, and let me tell you ...
It is NOT a little session. So prepare yourself, and I'll see you again REAL SOON!
Even before Nancy dragged me in for that STUPID "apology"—
Melena momentarily stutters then blushes. For a moment her "domme persona" drops, but then she quickly regains her composure.
I mean, what the FUCK was THAT!?
Are you a pussy, Ecik? ONLY 15 strokes for brunettes? You better make that 30 for me.
And WHY is your metronome set to 90? You know what speed I like to go ... better set that beat to 180 ...
Ah ... that is MUCH better! Now you are stroking EXACTLY the way you SHOULD BE stroking to me! The rhythmic pumping of your cock helps to put my mind at ease ...
... and makes my pussy wet thinking of the ways I'm gonna fuck with your head!
Metronome back to 90 for a minute ...
Yo, Ecik! Did you know that your "What am I focusing on?" rules are an ABSOLUTE GARBAGE CAN OF RANDOMNESS!?! I mean, who the fuck puts slow stroking, fast stroking, ball hits, AND PALMING ... ALL IN THE SAME FUCKING SECTION OF THEIR RULES!?! Like ... make up your fucking mind, slut!
Like ... what is WITH you!?! Do you know how hard it would be for most mistresses to keep track of all of that shit? "Am I doing a busting scene? Am I doing an edging scene? Well, Ecik's stroking fast ... and NOW he's palming ... and NOW HE'S BUSTING HIS BALLS ... Am I supposed to be teasing him about the hits and how he CAN'T EDGE ... oh, wait ... now he's stroking fast and edging ..." Like, pick a lane, bro! Shit like that pisses me off ... WHY can't you just have some normal rules for fuck's sake!
And then WHAT THE FUCK do you do about a pose like THIS!? You just gotta do ALL the things, huh? Well, alright ... FINE if THAT is what you want, then just fucking DO IT!
You are going to do ALL of your "What am I focusing on?" rules for this pose THREE TIMES ... and you are NOT allowed to repeat the same task twice in a row ... so no doing 15 ball hits or 30 eye strokes ... YOU wrote these stupid rules, so YOU are going to have to keep track of them ... GO!!
Alright that's enough of that shit ... I am DONE "focusing on your rules" ... Back to 180 beats and 30 strokes for ME ... That oughta keep things interesting ... but you OBVIOUSLY gotta still do all of your random crap ... and ALL of my body parts are what you are going to be focusing on, so ... make sure to do EVERYTHING YOU ARE SUPPOSED TO ...
[The "two of the following" limit on the "What am I focusing on?" rules has been removed. You will do "ALL of the following" in that section for Melena whenever applicable/she meets a condition. ]
I ain't paying attention to that shit anymore ... but you STILL better give me what you owe—if you know what's good for you ...
If I don't see random palming and fast strokes and busting, imma gonna KNOW you are cheating ... and I am in a "good mood" right now ... so don't PISS ME OFF!!
You're gonna focus on ME right now ... and getting *me* OFF!
I know THREE things about you Ecik: 1) You're a pathetic dweeb. 2) Your stamina is pretty decent—so NOT complete shit ... and 3) ...
... I know you are SUPER into me!
... and knowing how turned on a guy is when he's beating his meat to me ... that just makes me SUPER WET!
Oh, Ecik ... I've missed you, slut!
Most of the other boy aren't as dirty as you—and I kinda like that ...
Most of my other toys—they tend to break when I play with them too hard ... but not you.
You can handle my abuse ... and somehow, it just seems to make you EVEN HARDER!!
You're a fucking naughty bastard for slapping me on the ass—you know that!? But now it is MY turn to get you back!
FIVE edges for THIS piece of ass! And no slappy slappies for YOU, hahaha! **I'M** in fucking charge right now! So, you know what ... Go ahead and palm your head for five seconds IMMEDIATELY after EVERY edge!Let's see if those spankings were worth it, bitch!
Melena begins rubbing herself aggressively as she watches you both pleasure and pain yourself. She seems to only get more aroused ...
FUCK, YEAH! DOUBLE your agony for me ... no, TRIPLE IT!!
I want 30 strokes as slow as possible for my legs and 15 seconds of head palming for my ass ... and if the 15 pussy strokes as fast as possible don't make you edge, then you gotta edge once for EACH of my legs, ass, and pussy ...
Hmmm ... maybe you're stupid rules aren't so useless after all ...
Oh, just LOOK AT HER, Ecik! You're gonna make her cum so hard ... again ... and AGAIN! Oh, I just can't WAIT for that!
I asked Nancy if I could be in your stupid April competition, but she said, "No."
MELENA MARIA RYABUSHKINA
Nothing about the weather in there.
She said there was "A-I-R" spelled backwards in "Maria", but ... I said that was stupid and, and Nancy agreed ...
... hold on—I just ... I just have to get something ...
So she made me be the "warm up" girl ... which kinda sucks—but ... whatever ...
Now where did I put that ... oh, THERE IT IS!!
My lucky golden dildo! It'll look even better inside of me—don't you agree?
But Nancy said that "bush" is a plant AS WELL AS a hairy pussy, so ... I guess that qualifies me for May ... lucky you!
So you ready to get me off, fuck stick? I think it's about time ... I'm overdue for an orgasm!
I'M CUMMING!!! I'M CUMMING!! DON'T *YOU* DARE FUCKING CUM!!! IT'S MY TUUUUURRRRNNNN ... AND DON'T FUCKING QUIT WITH THE FAST STROKING UNTIL YOU'VE DONE THEM ALLL!!!
Hands OFF! Metronome OFF! Take a break, stroke slut ... I think you've earned it!
Yeah ... this dildo is pretty good ... he always seems to get me off pretty good ...
After staring at it for a while, she gives the dildo a kiss.
But he's NOT as good as you ... now turn around and BEND OVER ...
You do as Melena says, and she smacks EACH of your ass cheeks HARD 10 times.
[Administer these slaps yourself. 10 in a row to the first butt cheek, then 10 in a row to the second. If you can't hear the smacks, then you are not doing them hard enough.]
You can't see her, but you can tell Melena is grinning gleefully from ear to ear as she spanks you.
Fucking spank ME on the ass! ... Well let's see how YOU like it!
Your cheeks are red—UNLIKE mine ... MINE are the "cheeks of a domme" ... YOURS are the red cheeks of a SLAVE!
KNOW YOUR PLACE, BITCH!
You can rest for up to five minutes, but I only got off once ... so you KNOW we ain't finished yet! Meet me upstairs in five minutes!
[Open the next spoiler within five minutes.]
I'll give you a BIT of a break ... I AM only the "warm up girl," and it would be pretty shitty of me to bust the toy before the other girls got to play with you ...
So, 110 beats per minute. 30 strokes for me. NO palming. NO ball hits. Make the leg strokes as fast as you can, but the "eye contact" strokes have to be VERY slow ... and the pussy rule can stay ... and do 5 strokes as fast as possible for my ass, too, ass slapper ... order is whatever you like ...
THERE ... THAT oughta do it ... stupid ass overly complicated rules ...
I wish I could ruin you 20 times like that time you were locked up in Angela's basement ...
... but *I* am "just the warm-up girl" ... and somebody else will get the honor of finishing you off ...
Still, it's an important role ...
... Fatts says the lead off hitter in American Baseball has an important job, and I guess it's the same in sexual teasing as well ...
Plus, *I* know how you work ...
YOU are the kind of guy who gets to the edge easier and easier the more you get worked as the teasing goes on ...
... which means that ALL of my teasing has gotten you SO "hot and bothered" ...
... so that the OTHER girls will have a much easier time putting points on the board ...
Now, Nancy said that since THIS set was a late submission, it should ONLY count for April ... which means that any "forced edges" that *I* gave you today "shouldn't count" for May ...
... but MY fucking calendar says its MAY ... so FUCK THAT SHIT ...
... but I'll let you decide ... I guess it will just depend on how much you want ME to be your winner for May.
Should I do it? Should I stick a finger up my ass?
I'm a dirty girl, so ...
... FUCK YEAH, I WILL!! Now GIVE ME AN EDGE!!!
Alright ... time to cum again! And by that, I mean it's time for ME to cum again!
YOU just have to stroke and edge and shit while *I* GET OFF!!! HAHAHA ... does that frustrate you and piss you off a little, Ecik? Yes? WELL THEN GOOD, FUCKER!
Melena cums HARD, enticed by the sight of your edging and fast stroking.
Alright, stroker ... HANDS OFF!!! [Stop stroking. Turn off the metronome and take a break.]
Melena watches the relief spread across your face at being allowed to stop. She smiles while she holds the vibrator tight against her clit, riding out the rest of her orgasm.
You did GOOD today, Ecik ... you were a GOOD little fuckstick ...
Momma got off SO GOOD ... I'm REALLY happy ...
Melena always seems to be in a significantly improved mood after she cums.
You know you don't HAVE to play with me ... I mean ... the way *I* play ... MOST guys couldn't handle it!
... but you let me treat you like SHIT, and you ACTUALLY kind of enjoy it ...
... so ... thank you, Ecik ...
Melena said that last part very quietly.
... but even though you're a dweeb, I LIKE that I can play rough with you without breaking you ... SO fucking HOTT!!
Bring that ass over here.
Now, bend over.
You do as Melena says, and she gives you one GREAT BIG SLAP on the ass, harder than ANY of the other hits she gave you before. You wonder if she left a mark. [You don't have to perform this one unless you want to. ]
May is busy ... but you WILL be seeing me again ...
"Bush" ... Ha! ... and *I* thought that one up ALL ON MY OWN ... I better go tell Nancy before she claims it was "all her idea" ...
I'll be seeing you, Ecik!
[You may take a break of up to 10 minutes if you wish, or, if you are short on time, you can save Part 3 for another day, but soon, the REAL teasing will begin! ]
Hey, Ecik! It's me! HAIL-ey. Hailey Leigh! But you already knew that, didn't you!
I didn't think I could enter your competition, until Nancy reminded me that parts of words still count.
Oh! And she wanted me to tell you that her and Fatts came up with the idea of sending me to tease you independent of your suggestion ... but they were both actually pretty stoked when they read it in your rules as a suggestion!
I just go where I'm told, but ... I thought it was REALLY SWEET that you suggested MY name and thought of me for your competition ... I've always thought of myself as an "April girl!"
So what are we gonna do with these rules of yours ... we can't simply let them stand as they are ... hmmmm ... How about this:
Metronome: 110 BPM.
20 strokes for me instead of usual 15 for brunettes.
10 strokes while staring into my eyes is fine.
NO ball hits for my chest. Instead, 10 extra strokes for my boobies—even when clothed.
Leg rule is fine.
I will MOSTLY be keeping my clothes ON today, but ...
If you see an "ass pose" that you like [or if told] (including clothed), you MUSTpalm the tip for 5 seconds.
And if you get a glimpse of my pussy (even through clothes), 5 strokes as fast as possible.
"Two of the following" is FINE for the "What am I focusing on" rules.
[Commands are obviously not optional. Any time Hailey mentions a body part, apply the rule.]
And with ALL of those additions/amendments, I think we're ready to get going!
I am a lot nicer than Melena! She likes to go fast, but ... *I* enjoy taking my time ...
And our session together isn't a race!
I have lots of VERY CUTE outfits to show you ... I just want to get an honest reaction ...
... from your cock.
Melena does NOT qualify for April—but *I* do ...
... so I want to see just how many times I can force an edge out of you!
I hope you're ready, because we've already started!
This is going to be a LONG session, so I hope you edge a LOT for me!
I'm NOT gonna "take your edges" through "dirty teasing" or super fast stroking ... just simply from perseverance and the "Tick, tick, tick!" of the metronome!
Isn't my GIANT blow-up penis kind of neat!?
You DON'T have to palm right now ...
... but ONLY because I am going to make you in a minute here!
I think that's a "glimpse!"
What's my edge count at so far!?
Oh, yeah ... we can DEFINITELY GO HIGHER!
You know you don't have a chance ... Nancy told me how it works for you ...
... once you START edging ... it's REALLY HARD for you to stop!
OOoooo! That's a "glimpse!"
I've got you in my web, little fly! And you can't escape!
13. Thirteen is the number of outfits me and Nancy decided upon.
She wanted more, but ... *I* decided only the cutest would do!
Head palming AND fast pussy strokes, please!
DO IT AGAIN ...
... and AGAIN!
What are you gonna do when some girl who ISN'T a big tease like me ACTUALLY SHOWS YOU HER PRIVATE PARTS!?!
You'll probably just CUM REAL HARD!
But HOPEFULLY I will have run up the scoreboard SO MUCH that it won't even matter!
There is STILL one more outfit change after this one—will you make it?
Orgasms are worth 5 points ...
What if you came for me, Ecik? You're NOT ALLOWED to cum—but what if you did? (PUSSY!)
Don't I deserve to win? And don't you deserve to cum?
What if I pulled up my shirt right now? Would you cum all over my soft, perky tits?
Whoops! ... I said I wasn't going to "play dirty" and get "nasty", but ... We ALL KNOW how much you LOVE cum ...
Can you fault a girl for playing to win?
Last outfit. Can you make it?
HONESTLY ... NO TRICKS! This REALLY IS the LAST SCENE WITH ME!
I had SO MUCH FUN ... how is my score? Do you think I can win!?
Palm it ...
... palm it ...
... PALM IT AND DO FAST STROKES!!
I **know** I said I WASN'T going to try to win by playing "dirty tricks"—like speeding up the metronome—but I changed my mind ...
I may NEVER have a chance to win another monthly competition of yours—right!? And Nancy and Fatts worked SO HARD to give me a chance by getting that extension—right!?
I feel like if I DIDN'T give it my best, I would just REALLY regret it later ... you know what I mean?
Okay ... I won't make it too crazy, but ... I just GOTTA SEE if I can squeeze a few more edges out of you ...
... and maybe I can EVEN FORCE YOU TO CUM!!!
Set your metronome to 150 BPM. No more special rules. Just do the number of strokes I tell you.
We're going to make this purely a contest between MY BOOBS, your cock, and YOUR WILLPOWER!
[Metronome set to 150 bpm. Just do the number of strokes Hailey tells you (No additional rules.), then move on to the next pic ...]
Hailey twists her nipples and turns her cuteness up to 11. Your eyes go to her AMAZING TITS, but you can't help but make eye contact with her at times as well.
Give in, Ecik ... just give in ... Just let it happen ... don't make yourself hold back ... let GO!!
[Stop stroking. Take a break.] Well, I hope I made it on the scoreboard at least ...
THANKS SO MUCH FOR REQUESTING ME!!
Fatts and Nancy wanted to send me from the start, but, ... you know what they say: "Great minds think alike!"
If I DO end up winning, that would be SUPER COOL!
I would DEFINITELY come by and visit you to PERSONALLY deliver "your reward" ...
Bye, Ecik! I'll see you around!
[This is a time for a WELL DESERVED break! But here's the thing: We have to keep things fair for the other girls, right?
Take a full 10 minute break ... you've earned AT LEAST that! THEN, you need to make a judgment call ...
STAMINA vs AROUSAL
There are TWO more "weather girls." The last one will make you cum. No surprise there. (Why hide the ball? ) Figured I would just tell you.
Nancy INSISTS that we make things AS FAIR AS POSSIBLE. If one of "her" girls wins, then ... well, SHE will take credit for being the mastermind of the set! BUT ... she wants to give EACH of her "April submissions" a fair chance (though she DOES believe she is saving the "best for last." )
So now you have to make a judgment call ... If all of the teasing has made you fatigued and there is very little chance that anyone will be able to "force an edge" out of you then, well ... You may extend your break up to 30 minutes. (OR you may begin Part 4 on another day, as per the initial instructions. )
HOWEVER ... if breaking for too long will adversely affect your arousal levels—making it LESS likely for an edge to be forced—then you need to break for less time. Understand? Good! I thought you would!
So, take your 10 minute break, and you can have up to 30, just TRY to judge it so that your likelihood for a forced edge is maximized!
Hailey's tease was an "endurance challenge." This next contender will NOT DO 13 SCENES!
HOWEVER ... While she will NOT be going OVERLY long (still should be a good length ),
Actually, it is ABOUT JUST AS LONG! Except FAR MORE variety.
she has a VERY DIFFERENT STRATEGY for forcing edges out of you.
OH! ... And Taylor Swift's favorite number is 13, and Hailey had 13 outfits ... I kinda forgot to make a mention of that, but ... MAYBE in her "victory set" she'll get a chance!
I THINK that took me 4.5 hours to write the Hailey scenes ... Finished Melena before dinner—I think—then started Hailey around 7:30 pm ... yeah! 13 "scenes" in 4.5 hours ... that is NOT BAD!
Now, granted, those were NOT all 20 picture photo galleries and I did NOT use EVERY picture ... but I DID use most. ... and I DID choose them ALL beforehand, but ... STILL ... that's like 20 minutes per scene ... which is NOT BAD! Three cheers for "efficient set writing! Went WAAAAAYYY too hard and ambitious on this one, but ... meh. NOT BACKING DOWN NOW!!!
TWO more girls ... who will win? WHO are they? ... Find out soon! I hope you're ready! ]
Hello, Ecik. My name is Tempest—Tempest Raven. [Brunette in front.] I was approached by a man named “Fatts” who said he was interested in my name—and my amateur work. He looked me up on Adult Friend Finder and asked if we could meet. I agreed.
He brought his little blonde girlfriend with him. “Nancy” was her name. She said she ran a “sex hotel”, though I think she called it a “resort” or a “bed and breakfast” or something. Fatts and Nancy said they had a friend they really wanted me to meet—you. Nancy assured me that the way *I* like to party is the same way *you* like to party. She said that she would reserve a suite of private rooms at her hotel for you and me and up to ten of my friends if I agreed to spend a few hours partying with you. Well that sounded pretty good to me.
A “tempest” is “a violent storm”, “a violent windstorm, especially one with rain, hail, or snow.”
They told me to say that. They also told me to tell you that your time with me would be a “tempest”—a sexual tempest. I don’t think they’re wrong about that.
Now, I understand that some cute little gal just got done teasing you for a VERY long time … but hun … Tempest Raven isn’t so much into the foreplay. When you party with me, you party HARD—are you good with that? Can you handle it?
Good. I like you already, Ecik. You seem pretty relaxed and down to fuck … just my type of man.
You better not get squeamish and wuss out on me or blow your load early or run out of gas. We get the rooms for the night regardless of how long you stay, but … Nancy and Fatts were both pretty sure you would last. I hope you don’t disappoint them—or me.
Alright, you ready to get this party started, hun?
Then LET’S GET TO FUCKIN’!!
[“Standard Ecik Set” Format ( ) - Go through the rooms in any order. Each room will have slightly different rules. Stay as long as you want in each room. If you want to “leave” a room early, scroll back up and close its spoiler. You do not have to do additional strokes when “leaving.” (The idea here is that if you choose to leave, and don’t get to see the rest of what happens in that room.) You may revisit pictures (by scrolling back up) and rooms if you wish. Any picture that does not have accompanying text (right above it) you may skip. (Don’t have to do strokes/rules for that pic.) This is both to help you with endurance issues if the set becomes too long as well as "interest" issues. These are all AMATEUR photo sets, so ... the usual "quality" might not be there, and if you aren't feeling it as much, well ... you're allowed to skip ANY photos that don't have accompanying text.
Although Nancy and I—though ESPECIALLY Nancy—hope you stroke to EVERY single one.
All edges in this portion count towards Tempest Raven’s score. You are NOT ALLOWED to edge “willingly,” so, ANY edges you do in this section will be “forced” and/or “unauthorized.” You do NOT have to visit all of the rooms. However, any room you do not “complete” (make it to the last pic, though skipping non-text pics is fine), you should mention in your feedback as there *may* be consequences.
When you open the spoiler, you will have "entered the room." The metronome speed and rules modifications will be in bullet points at the top. Mostly the "What am I focusing on?" rules will be modified/expanded, but, the "up to two" of the following qualification will still hold.
This part of the set is supposed to have a “party feel,” so I want to give you more freedom than usual while still giving Tempest Raven a chance to score some points. ]
The door locks behind you. (You cannot leave this room, and you cannot skip pictures in this room.)
Ballbusting Mode
60 BPM
“What am I focusing on?”: Add “Dildo or Whip”: 5 strokes as fast as possible
Dimonty: OOOooooo, look, Raven! He's back for more!
Tempest: Too bad for him he can't leave!
Tempest: Oh, I want you to DOMINATE me, Dimonty! Do NASTY THINGS to me!
Dimonty: Well, I can think of a few things, Tempest ...
Tempest: I've been SO very bad ... will you punish me, Dimonty?
Dimonty: Only because you DESERVE IT, Tempest ... that, and Ecik likes to watch ...
Tempest: Oh, I just want you to make me feel SO good ... I'm just so horny and DESPERATE TO CUM ...
Dimonty: We'll get to that ... in time, Tempest ...
Dimonty: ... but first, we need to use this whip ...
Dimonty: Do you want me to shove this up her cunt, Ecik?
Dimonty: I'll lube it up, but I WON'T be gentle ...
Dimonty: Tease her at first ... but THEN go HARD!!
Dimonty: Are you sure you want this, Tempest?
Tempest: Oh, Dimonty ... PLEASE give it to me ... I need to cum SO BAD!!
Dimonty: You heard her, Ecik ... Here I go!
Tempest starts breathing hard. Dimonty rhythmically thrusts the dildo in and out of Tempest's wet cunt.
Dimonty: I'm not going to stop until you've cum good and hard!
Tempest: Oh, please! Faster! FASTER!! I'm going to cum, Dimonty!
The dildo rams in and is yanked out again and again. Tempest groans forcefully: "OOhhhhhh! OOOohhhhh! OOOHHHHH!!!"
Dimonty: That's a good girl, Tempest ... That's a good girl ...
Tempest: Dimonty is going to get me off again, Ecik. You can scroll back up and rewatch if you like. [The door unlocks. You are free to go or rewatch as you wish.]
90 BPM [This one is long. Remember you can skip pics you don't like that have no text.]
“What am I focusing on?”: Add “Dildo or Whip or Anal Penetration”: 5 strokes as fast as possible
Tempest: Pathetic slave. You don't deserve the mean things we're going to do to do ... you deserve WORSE!!
Kimberly Scott: We're not going to hold back, Ecik ... I hope you're prepared ... You are LUCKY compared to THIS fucker!
Kimberly: Yeah, get down there ...
Tempest: Make him lick my shoes, too!
Kimberly: Time for a spanking!
Tempest: He's been VERY bad ...
Tempest: Spread 'em, bitch!
Kimberly: Listen to how he whimpers! Isn't that cute!?
Kimberly: You like watching people get spanked, Ecik?
Tempest: Oh, he LOVES it!
Tempest: His cock hasn't been abused enough today, so we're going to fix that ...
Tempest: That's good, but I think we need MORE ...
Tempest: THAT'S better ...
[Remember: You can skip any photos that have no text.]
Tempest: You ready to get FUCKED, slave!?
Kimberly: Yeah! Take it DEEP, bitch! ALL THE WAY down your throat ...
Tempest: This could be YOU next, Ecik ... Would you like that? Would you get down on your knees to suck my cock?
Tempest: Alright ... Now fucking TAKE IT, SLAVE! Why do you think I told you to lube it up with your spit so much!?
The slave groans as Tempest thrusts deep into his ass.
Tempest: STOP clenching, and LOOSEN UP!
Tempest: THERE you go! In and out ... in and get ... get FUCKED bitch boy!
Tempest: Feel mommy's BIG COCK penetrating your skinny ass ...
Tempest: Tell me, "Thank you, Mistress!" you ungrateful bitch! This is me being NICE right now!
Slave: Thank you, Mistress Tempest!
Kimberly: Lick it.
Kimberly: Lick it more. YOU know where these fingers are going ...
Kimberly: These fingers are going RIGHT UP YOUR ASS! So you BETTER get them NICE AND WET!
Kimberly: Yeah, that's it ... lay down—and legs UP!
Kimberly: Yes! IN they go! Now take it—take my fingers in your ass, slave!
Tempest: Just try to relax and let us abuse you, ass slut!
Kimberly: Oh, they slide in so nice now!
The slave takes three fingers. Kimberly's fingers now quickly and easily penetrate him. She squeezes his balls, and that sends him over the edge.
Kimberly: Good slave! NOW get ready, because we're going to do it AGAIN, and this time FASTER ... Once is NEVER ENOUGH for an eager little cum sluts like YOU ...
Veronica is relentless with her tongue and fist. She won't stop until Tempest has cum several times.
Veronica: I think that's probably about all you can handle. You should go before you pop ... unless you want to keep watching ... [You can replay this along with any other scene if you wish.]
The door locks behind you. (You cannot leave this room, and you cannot skip pictures in this room.)
130 BPM
“What am I focusing on?”: Add “Blowjob or Handjob”: 20 additional strokes
"So many cocks in need of service ..."
"It's a good thing I'm in the mood to pleasure EACH ONE ..."
"Oh ... except for you ... I only like to pleasure cocks that are ALLOWED to cum. I like it when the cum covers my face ... but YOU can only stroke and edge, so ... better get to that, stroke slut!"
"Oh, this one's nice ... getting close ..."
"THERE it is ..."
"... got on my glasses a bit, too ..."
"Oh, another one ... They just keep them nice and warmed up for me!"
"Come on, baby! Get CLOSER for me! I want to feel your hot splooge ALL OVER MY FACE!"
"THAT'S it! JUST LIKE THAT!"
"Shower me with your cum ... It makes me WET!"
"This one's already on the edge!"
"I don't mind a quick cummer ... not when there are SO MANY HORNY DICKS AROUND! Haha ..."
"Let's finish getting this one ready to go!"
"I like it when they cum down onto my face."
"Yeah! That's it! Don't stop!"
"Yes, baby! Keep going! Keep going! CUM on my face!"
"Oh, I love it ... you cum so good for me ..."
Tempest is sucking hard on a cock.
Tempest: I've got room for one more in here, hun! But too bad you're only allowed to edge ... Maybe later if you've been a good boy and kept your cum in, I can get YOU off REALLY good ...
Tempest continues servicing every cock that comes her way.
Hey, Ecik! How ya doing? Hopefully you're not too worn out after Tempest's party to play with me!
When Nancy approached me about coming to tease you, I thought, "Ecik ... Ecik ... Where have I heard that name before?" Then I remembered that Leeroy Jerkins was going to set a meet up for us—but then he never did ... and do you know that I always regretted that—never meeting you?
It's because I heard you have a nasty side—same as me.
You like to play hard and are into naughty, DIRTY things ...
... and you're a switch, so ... That means *I* can take my turn dominating you ... and then YOU can take your turn abusing me ... sounds like a pretty fair and kinky deal, right? I'm down if you are ...
A "yes" without hestitation. That's just the kind of assertiveness I like to see in my men ...
... and also the kind of assertiveness I use to abuse my slaves ...
Oh!? Did that make you harder—when I called you my "slave" just now?
You liked that—didn't you, my dirty boy!
Oh ... and you're a switch and NOT a submissive ... that's good ... that means you won't hold back when it's time to rough me up ... I like that—to be "roughed up," that is ...
Fully naked, but no pussy for you—not yet!
You need some more time to fantasize and think about all of the trouble we are about to get into ...
A little blonde birdie told me you were into spanking, and you recently got carried away while you were feeling your oats ... Did you get punished for spanking someone you shouldn't have? Oh, poor baby!
Well, you're allowed to spank me, Ecik ... so go ahead. DO it! I want you to ... and I want you to leave a mark ...
[Suspend your normal rules. Free stroking, edging, and spanking are allowed until further notice.]
Amber turns her ass towards you and starts wiggling it, trying to entice a nice hard slap.
OW! FUCK, YES! AGAIN! SLAP ME AGAIN, ECIK!
Oh, FUCK! PLEASE do it again? And then could you edge for my pussy, master? Please!? It would make me SO very wet for you ...
Alright. Now it's MY turn.
[Regular rules reinstated.]
Now slap your OWN ASS, Ecik!
Amber smacks herself to demonstrate.
Nice and hard—and don't hold back!
Oh, FUCK yeah! You're fun! My friends say I'm pretty crazy—and I'll cop to that! They say I've got a "type" and I'm attracted to the "crazy guys" ... with friends like Leeroy, I guess that's pretty true!
But Leeroy's been gone for a while, but ... it's nice to connect with one of his "crazy friends", lol! You've been on my radar for a while, Ecik ... SO GLAD we can FINALLY play together!
Edge three times for my pussy, Ecik. Nancy said she reached out to you because of my name: "Amber Rayne." Said something about your April game having to do with weather or something ... I need to FORCE some edges out of you, but the only way THAT will happen is if you are good and warmed up first, so ... GIVE ME SOME FUCKING EDGES YOU CRAZY HORNY BASTARD! MAKE THEM SO CLOSE THEY HURT WHEN YOU COME DOWN!!! AND THREE OF THEM!! GO!
Awww ... that's nice! Look at you all red and panting with the precum oozing out ... ah, yeeeaaaaahhhh ... JUST how I wanted you. We're gonna have a good time today—you and me.
Alright. Turn your metronome up to 110, bitch. *I* call the shots this scene. You just follow along and wank how I tell you like a good little stroke slut ...
If my hand is on a dick, then you do 10 ball hits. I want you to associate pleasure with pain. If you see a cock that is tied up, you do 10 strokes as fast as possible. I want you do associate pain with pleasure.
[Follow Amber's additional rules for this scene only.]
Playing with two guys at once is twice as good as playing with one guy at once, and besides ...
... I'm not sure you could handle me if I gave you my FULL attention.
Oh, give me a FUCKING EDGE, ECIK! I know it doesn't count for points, but ... I just like dominating you and watching you squirm SO much ...
That goofy little grin on your face ... you LIKE being abused ... and that makes me SO FUCKING WET!
"Alright, you can come on in now!" A man enters the room and takes a seat on the massage table. "So, what do you think? Would you like light or deep pressure for your massage today?"
"Hmmm ... I think I would prefer ... deep!"
"Well, that can be arranged. Now march on out of here and don't come back until you're buck naked and ready to be massaged GOOD AND HARD!" "Yes, ma'am!"
Oh, Ecik ... He doesn't know what he's signing up for ... That's one of my FAVORITE things. A man thinking he's going to get one thing but then ends up getting another ...
I'll make sure he gets the massage *I* want to give him ...
... and if he whines or starts to cry, we'll just pull the ropes tighter ...
The man enters completely nude and lays down on the massage table. Amber wastes no time getting to work massaging his dick.
Don't forget your ball hits, BITCH! I want to hear them from here while I'm wanking him off ...
Oh, a nice little cock ... so horny and stressed ... he just wants SO very much to get off and experience release ... Well, you just relax and let me handle this for you ... I'll make sure he is well taken care of ...
Isn't that right, Ecik? He's going to get a nice and cumfortable and relaxing orgasm, isn't he?
He gets pleasure ... You get pain ... Well ... All that is about to change ...
Amber quickly ties a rope around the man's dick.
FUCK, yeah! This dick is MINE!
Oh, what's that? You don't like it? You thought this was going to be a "nice" massage?
Well that's TOO FUCKING BAD! SHUT UP AND TAKE IT! I PROMISE it will start feeling good—AFTER it hurts for a bit!
You like this shit—don't you, Ecik? Ten strokes "as fast as you can" for each tied dick pic. Better go back up and do them if you forgot! And if you DID forget, then DOUBLE it!
"Oh, PLEASE stop! I don't want it!"
Oh, SHUT UP you fucking pussy ... Cry more—THAT'S how I KNOW I haven't gone HARD ENOUGH!
You edging yet? If not now, then soon ... just give into it ...You're as helpless as he is ... do you love it?
TWO men at once ... and I can be as cruel as I please ...
You're both trapped ... two cocks at once for me ... YOURS edging OVER and OVER ... and his, well ... he gets some "special attention" ...
Amber swishes her tongue around inside her mouth, preparing a large blob of spit.
She positions the spit on the edge of her tongue, just above the erect cock.
She lets the spit drip down from her tongue onto the man's dick.
MY cock. MY rules. MY desires ... and I have icky desires, Ecik ... You had enough of this fast stroking and edging? Or should we keep going?
No, I think I'm done with you for now ... Put your cock away for a moment, Ecik, and take a break. If I let you see what I'm about to do to him, you may not want to play with me anymore.
The man protests.
Oh, SHUT UP! You're going to stay quiet, and you're going to LIKE what I'm about to do to you! I PROMISE ... it'll FEEL GOOD after it stops hurting! AHahahhahaha ...
To get abused. I LOVE getting it as good as I give it.
I'm a true switch. Dominant AND submissive ... and BOTH are equally thrilling to me.
To take it as far as it can go with someone—REALLY fuck them up ... but THEN ... to see how much I can endure ...
Will I break? Or will I reach a new height of pleasure?
Fuck if *I* know, but I'm willing to try!
Watch this video of me getting dominated. 130 BPM. Nancy said this would be a good way to score some points, and I REALLY want to get on that April Scoreboard!
Of course, if you're as kinky as you say you are, then watching me get abused will REALLY bring you to the edge—again and AGAIN ... Let's test your "naughtiness" and see how much bondage arouses you ...
I hope your dick aches and twtiches every time I moan or yelp in pain. Knowing you're getting off to me while I'm all tied up and helpless, well ... it only makes me wetter ...
Alright, Ecik ... We've "switched" back and forth a bit, with me being dominant and then "subby", but ... I think *I* have been in control FAR too much ...
Unfortunately, though, the goal of this session was to force you to the edge ... Well, how have I done? Dirtier than Hailey, more personal than Tempest, but ... for better or worse NOT AS LONG!
I would prefer it to be "more even" with you dominating me as much as *I* am dominating you, but ... I just can't "force" you to edge over and over if we play THAT way, so ... this is just how it HAD to be ...
... but, since I'm feeling bad about it being SO uneven ...
... How about I just let you fuck me silly later? No rules. You in charge. You can just have your way with me ... and WE WILL BOTH LOVE IT!!
That get you excited, Ecik? And that denial from Angela is finally up—isn't it? Good thing.
YOU deserve a BIG orgasm, and *I* deserve to get fucked HARD!
But we CAN'T get to that just yet ... there is STILL just ONE MORE THING that I need you to do ...
Now, I'm a "cum slut", and I guess that can be taken a couple of ways ...
The FIRST is that I LOVE TO CUM! I guess THAT isn't so surprising ...
... but the SECOND sense in which I am a "cum slut" is that I am a "slut for cum." I just fucking LOVE jizz!
But I'm not the only one who loves jizz around here—isn't that right!? I know about YOUR cum fetish.
So watch this slideshow of my FAVORITE cum shots. You're not "allowed" to edge, but ... We both know you'll still be edging.
110 BPM. 20 extra strokes for every picture containing cum.
Let's see how high I can get my score before I get you off.
Now first of all: I must say I'm in a bit of a difficult situation in real life, quite burnt out at the moment which does make it hard for me right now to produce good sets or write in general. So my feedback won't do this amazing piece justice, for that I apologize!
No worries, brian. I understand. Short sets (even just one scene) are FINE. At this point, they are PREFERRED! ESPECIALLY this week ... milorrabo just sent me a "tough" set. For me, knowing nothing else but that, it will PROBABLY take me 2+ hours to play ... which is probably closer to 3 or 4 ... and THEN if I want to "fully enjoy" it, I will probably need to take a "no fap" day before to rest and get my libido up ... and then finding the window to play it with my erratic work schedule ... it just becomes a whole thing ... and then, I am "full steam ahead" with my production schedule to meet the deadline for your set, so ... PROBABLY won't play his set until AFTER yours is done! So short is fine.
ALSO, friend ... I get that. My real life situation isn't great right now either. But I have THE OPPOSITE problem you currently have. Not much I can do right now to fix it with a LOT of time on my hands, so ... THAT is one of the BIG REASONS I am on here right now ... it's for an escape and to give me SOMETHING to do when there really isn't much I CAN do to fix things, but ... Things WILL turn around for me ... sigh ... I AM optimistic about THAT!
But rest assured this has nothing to do with your brilliant writing and story telling!
Thank you, brian! It's appreciated. I DID spend WAY TOO MUCH TIME writing that, lol, ... but it was VERY fun and I'm glad at least one person read it and enjoyed it!
I don't know where to begin so just let me capture some thoughts. At first I felt quite weird being subby "in front of you" if you know what I mean? I'm 100% straight as you know so I was nervous where this was heading.
Yeah, I know what you mean, like ... we are NOT in the same room, and, realistically, it's just you in front of your keyboard with some words on a screen ... but that is NOT how teases "feel" when you "play them!"
If I'm just wanking "on my own" to some pictures, then, well ... THEN I "feel alone", but ... when I play a tease ... EVEN THOUGH it's just "words on a screen," I OFTEN feel like I am "right there" with the girl ... and THEN, I KNOW that I am going to be relaying feedback after, which ... THAT adds some "accountability" to the experience, which ... since I know that I will be reporting my experience to the tease writer "and the girls", well ... that just deepens the immersion ... yeah, so, I 100% understand that feeling ... which I guess that is part of the reason I tried to make it a "shared experience" with the focus NOT on me ... but, like ... with the story how it was ... I decided early on that I would need to "pull you in." Like, as I alluded in the initial intro, that "simple" "standard-sized" set you sent me with like 5 photo galleries ... it took me like FIVE HOURS to get through ... and MOST of that was reacting and writing (voice to text) to what was happening and "filling in the gaps" ... and THEN it just made more sense after the fact, that instead of just simply "telling you" what happened, to make it more personal by bringing you into the story ... and then I just sort of got into writing and my muse took over, and then it was a few iterations of writing new stuff integrating and revamping and reworking the stuff I already had, and then just bringing it all together into one cohesive piece/experience ... I SHOULD have thought about that—how it might feel—to be "subby" in front of me, but ... I sort of forgot in my excitement. But THEN ... the whole thing just became VERY INTIMATE between you, me, AND Nancy, so ... yeah, it just sort of became a shared experience between the three of us ...
Now, subconsciously, there was just a part of me that intuitively knew "having sex with Nancy" in front of you ... THAT would be SUPER questionable, but ... I just wanted to keep the teasing focused on NOT me ... but then I kind of forgot, but ... Tried to keep you more "observer" than "participant" for the most part ... and then a LOT of it was just "me, you, AND Nancy" all wanking off to Uma Jolie, which ... I KIND OF thought that would just be fun for you—especially getting mine and Nancy's reactions!
But that scene with Nancy was absolutely amazing, and her letting someone cum with one hand while edging me with the other was oddly exciting and fucking hot I was edging in no time (also because I was locked before which intensifies stroking after) but tried to be disciplined as I know Nancy wouldn't care . That scene really was a masterpiece and has me getting hard just writing about it again lol. Your detailed descriptions etc really made it that immersive.
It's all REALLY "quite funny," lol ... I was REALLY putting on my "artist's hat" and trying DESPERATELY to create a "shared experience," so ... I made it a point to play ALL of the same scenes that YOU did, and cum at the appropriate times, so ... We were LITERALLY separated by space and time (because we played the sets in different locations at different times), but ... in a VERY REAL SENSE we both had a "shared experience" ... and I guess that from Nancy's perspective, she played that scene "twice"—first with me but then with you, but ... I'd *like* to think that she "saved"/downloaded her experience with "me" and played that concurrently while "playing the scene with you", so ... I think Nancy is the "only person" who TRULY got to fully enjoy it with "everyone", which ... shit, man ... She would just LOVE THAT! She LOVES "being special", and so ... being the "fantasy girl" who is the ONLY ONE who got to "truly" experience it ... I think that would be just as special as she claimed it would be.
And THAT particular section I added on the fly, by the way. I was doing my final edit, and then my muse struck, and that ENTIRE section with her breaking down and me finishing her thoughts for her explaining how special what was about to take place was for her ... THAT was NOT planned!
No, man ... THAT scene WAS ALSO SUPER HOT for me!
I just LOVE "spending time with Nancy." Just "being with her" makes me happy ... whether she's teasing me in a set or I am writing dialogue that involves her ... I just LOVE IT! And how I wrote that ... the thought of the three of us sitting on the edge of the bed, thighs all pressed together, her jerking us BOTH off at once while we ALL just get aroused looking at SUPER HOT pictures of Uma Jolie ... yeah ... SUPER sexy and just ... magical in a certain way, lol ... and I'm glad I "hit it." Playing into your kinks WITHOUT overstepping—because it EASILY could have been now that you mention it, but ... I tried to take you OUT of focusing on that by trying to make UMA the focus. Which apparently that worked! And then, I wanted to give you a break, and then putting your back in your cage ... I felt that would be better and play more into your "cucking" side AND give you a break ... AND make you more an "after thought" and NOT the focus—just in case it was going to be a turn-off ...
I must say you hit Umas character on the head - and then some. Great job on her character and actually, as you were talking about her with Nancy's voice, it felt like you were describing what I thought but couldn't express as well as you.
THAT shit ALL came from YOU!
I REALLY read into what you wrote about Uma and used that as my "primary data." Then, it was just a matter of "filling in the details" ... but YOU HAD ALREADY painted the broad strokes ... I was just doing "detail work" trying to make sure all of the pieces fit—and I wanted them to all have a certain logical consistency, so ... I'm glad my math turned out to be the same as yours! But like I said in the piece ... you and I BOTH developed Uma's "third element" and NOW it's probably been developed EVEN MORE! At this point, I suppose we each have less and less to contribute as she will only just continue to come more and more "into her own" ...
Now as mentioned earlier, my mind is rather loaded right now, so I had a hard time concentrating in between. Again: not your fault, just mentioning it in case I missed or misunderstood some parts.
And part of that IS my fault, because I was just brain dumping without much thought to readability ... but, like I said, with more time I could have "tightened it up" ... just didn't want to!
as you were talking about her with Nancy's voice
SO much fun to do that! We only ever get ONE side when we play these teases, so ... I ALWAYS enjoy looking at this whole enterprise from a DIFFERENT perspective—the perspective of the girls , so ... don't have much opportunity to do that when I am writing sets for the boys, but ... something like THIS, I just get to REALLY go at it! It is just SO much fun and INTERESTING to let Nancy give her perspective ... BOTH as "one of the girls" who is friends with Uma and knows her personally, but ... ALSO from her unique perspective as a "self-aware fantasy girl."
it felt like you were describing what I thought but couldn't express as well as you.
That's VERY kind, brian. Thank you!
And Nancy was amazing: I really do like her, but I mostly prefer dark haired girls, though her body is flawless.
Have you really forgotten SO QUICKLY that I read ALL of the posts on this website!?
I really do like her, but I mostly prefer dark haired girls,
REALLY, brian? What does it take to please you? Do I have to dye my hair for EVERY set that I appear in for you? Really, brian? That SEEMS like a pretty big ask to me ...
And even if I COULD—which I CAN'T —but even IF I COULD ... I just simply WOULD NOT do it ... I'm a "blonde to the core," bri!
I am "inimitable," brian.
Inimitable: Not capable of being imitated, copied, or counterfeited; beyond imitation; surpassingly excellent; matchless; unrivaled; exceptional; unique.
"Blonde" is just one of my immutable characteristics, and I wouldn't even change it EVEN IF I COULD ...
But:
her body is flawless.
I'll take that, bri ... along with:
And Nancy was amazing
I'll assume THAT one was MORE in reference to my CAPTIVATING personality. I will accept ALL the compliments on my visual/digital hotness, but ... if I can make boys' hearts go "pitter-patter" over my sparkling personality, well ... that's a win on a WHOLE OTHER LEVEL! But I suppose we can ALL AGREE that I am just a "total package hottie" ... THAT was my main takeaway from you, brian ... so, thank you!
So yes, I'd eat out of her hand too . I basically did: that scene where I had to ruin while both of you came was absolutely amazing, too. I felt really subby during that and it felt so hot, too. I still doubt I'd even consider any of this in real life, but here it's awesome . I hate and love ruining for Uma, and having Nancy guide me doing it while she enjoyed an orgasm was next level.
I suspected you would enjoy that. I KNOW that is a kink for you—having less pleasure while others are having more—so ... VERY glad that that worked out.
Now Caprice: I knew that was a risky try - and rest assured in my mind I wasn't set on if that really is her final character or if she was experimenting, tricking you etc. I wanted to wait for your reaction *if* she returns. And yes, I did miss her retirement But it seems you did enjoy that cucking experiment a bit.
I DID ... that I did ... unexpectedly, of course ... and, as per the set, I give you "full creative license" to develop this part of the narrative HOWEVER you want.
Now re: Nancy, that did blow my mind
YES! THAT is what I was HOPING FOR!!
I KNEW that you "didn't know" about Nancy, so ... I thought it would just be "fun" to drop you into the whole scenario not knowing anything, and then having questions and trying to figure it out and piece it together ... it's one of "those things" that is "only shocking once", so ... THAT is ONE of the reasons I went this route ... because you can ONLY discover that "Nancy is self-aware" ONCE, and so ... since she IS my "best idea ever" ... Wanting to do her idea justice and achieve the "mind blow" was DEFINITELY a part of my impetus for writing the set.
but looking back at all your explanations it does make perfect sense. Good job there!
Yes! Good! "Working as intended." Dropped in a LOT of lines—naturally but ALSO somewhat consciously—about stuff that should NOT make sense and leave you with some questions ... until you SLOWLY pieced it together and had that "mind blow" moment.
While I'm not a sci-fi guy, the scenario you described did work for me and I enjoyed it.
Good, good ... glad to hear it. I suppose I *correctly* intuited that you are NOT, indeed, a "sci fi guy", but ... stuff like THIS gets exceptions—right!? When it is directly related to something you enjoy—in this case online porn teases —it becomes more of a "crossover" of the "sci fi" and "porn tease" genres! So, since you are into porn teases, this "alternative take" was probably more palatable ... and at LEAST unique and interesting—or at least I'M GLAD it turned out that way!
Now as for you: thanks for opening up and explaining all,
My pleasure! I've creating this amazing and FANTASTIC fantasy world ... and ... I can basically tell NO ONE about it! At least not in my "real life"! So, it's NICE to be able to share it with someone who appreciates it—which I suspected you would, and you DID!
I hope I didn't make things too confusing for you bringing back all these characters.
Not at ALL! I THRIVE in complexity and the "figuring out of things" ... I don't usually have to "pause the game" during a set ... THAT is a RARE occurrence for me! So, like I said ... it was FUN working it all out!
And this is where I'd like to ask you to be honest: Do you really want Caprice back in any scenarios? I want to make this enjoyable for you after all.
No, you're in on the "secret" now. You are now a part of the "meta game" of set creation ... you kinda can't go back. Knowing about Nancy and the "third element" of the unawakened tease girls ... You're sort of playing THAT aspect of set creation whether you want to or not! "Welcome to the Club!"
I want Leeroyverse Caprice to be happy. That is all.
Obviously, there are "different versions" of Caprice out there ... "Helequin's version" is pretty distinct with a well-developed "third element." There are others which are "more generic", and ... I guess in some sense there is a "generalized Caprice" that is an amalgam of ALL of her "distinct" Milovana tease personalities ... but, as per our story (which, since it was written about in a set, it is now "canon" ), the version of Caprice which Uma sent to me was "Leeroyverse Caprice" ... and, it WAS GoodGirl and I who actively developed her third element—but then she was put into stasis ... but now she's out, and YOU are active and *I* am active, and GoodGirl, is not, so ... I think she's in a bit of a similar spot as me—trying to find herself ... AND ... I would say, that in the GG/Leeroy arc, she was a "closet switch" who was trying to explore her "subby side" ... she was ashamed about it, but ... Leeroy saw and accepted that side of her, which is one of the reasons she ended up choosing Leeroy, because he saw her as she was and WANTED that part of her, even whilst others rejected and judged her for it ... but, I think she still MAY carry some shame over her subby side, so ... I think ALL of that sort of works with her current character trajectory, but ... as I mentioned, YOU are now an "active writer" for her ... It's sort of like it's "your turn" to write a 12 issue series of weekly "Batman" comics. THIS is your character. YOU know her and her history ... what do you do?
And it COULD BE that she's nervous about this and wants to explore this side of her and is ALSO trying to decide ... in which case, she has friends—Nancy and Uma—who can and will support her, and ... I think seeing their reactions to all of this would be QUITE interesting ... ESPECIALLY with Uma being an "expert" at cucking and BOTH Uma and Nancy being switches as well—who BOTH seem to be QUITE comfortable with their subby sides ... although I'm not certain how much Nancy is into cucking, seeing as how much she takes after me, but ... Nancy is ALSO a TRUE Milovanan—Read: "Explorer." And she is EXTREMELY open to new experiences ... So, I don't think that Nancy has EVER been cucked, so ... I am SURE she would be down to try! (See!? It's that "third element." Once you "create the character" they start to take on a life of their own and you have less and less control over them. )
So, I think that is MORE THAN ENOUGH "food for thought!" But *I* just want her to be HAPPY. That is ALL that I want ... and so I leave it in your hands.
Nancy was KIND OF rooting for you using Leeroyverse Caprice HARSHLY against me. Because she is ALL ABOUT THE DRAMA! (All that "Be Little Finger from GoT, brian!" stuff, lol ...) But Nancy at her heart is an altruist and loyal, so ... ANYTHING that involved helping her friend—ESPECIALLY anything that ALSO involves her —she would be down for. The only caveat would be that Nancy SHOULD remain the ONLY "self-aware" fantasy girl and if somehow Caprice DID achieve that, she REALLY WOULD need to "ride off into the sunset", because I don't have enough room for TWO of them in my life ...
Although I lied. The OTHER caveat would be the "Leeroy-Fatts" thing. I think she would feel hurt and betrayed if she found out the person she fell for, "Leeroy", was actually somebody, else ... Ah ... THAT is a tricky one that would take some time to work out ... REALLY not sure how to deal with THAT ... Maybe best to keep "Leeroy" and "Fatts" separate? I don't know, but ... yeah ... if this is becoming too much, ESPECIALLY with your "real life" distractions ... feel free to table the "Caprice stuff" for a while, and that can be a narrative we return to later—UNLESS you have ideas and just want to go for it, then DO IT, man!
Also: I understood correctly that it's subby-ish Fatts for now, right?
I would say, "No." I feel the same as Uma: "Something in between." I do NOT want to go back to "Village Era" Fatts. I WANT to be more assertive and respected, and in fact, when I DO update my rules, I WILL be including a version of Leeroy's "Dom mode." I want to be seen and treated more like an equal by the girls and NOT just a "second class sub." Josh tried to do a whole "denial" thing, and I am just NOT ABOUT THAT. And so when I DO get "dominated" I want it to be more on MY terms, and there are aspects of things in which *I* want to be in control, so ... No, I want to take that middle path ...
RE the "time outs" and "switching dom/sub" within a set. noted!
You CAN switch "dom and sub" within a set. THAT is good and fine. Just ... it has to be clear for me in a scene if I am being dominant or submissive ... and then ALSO, I can't "be dominant" when there is somebody ELSE who is "over me" ... in THAT case, then I am not REALLY "dominant" and have difficulty putting myself into that headspace as per Uma coming in at the last minute to "take charge." I can be subby for her. THAT is fine. I can "dom her." THAT is fine, too! And we can have scenes where we're just equals ... THAT is fine, too ... She can "be in charge" and I can "be under her", but ... if she suddenly "relinquishes control" then we are both equals (like if I'm her sub and then she wants me to dom another one of her subs), and I am NOT going to just SUDDENLY give up control when I have it ... THAT is where my "dom side" is strong, and I am not just going to give up control when I have it ... CHOOSING when and how I give up control ... THAT is a part of my deal ... I need some say and control over that ... I'm just not itching to be abused and be some doormat, lol ... submissive on MY conditions, lol ... So, if she says I am in charge, then I *am*, and *I* need to CHOOSE to go back ... hope that all makes sense!
During NNN I honestly didn't expect cumming to be an option, so my bad.
Well, had I played the set on Day 3 when I was supposed to, then NONE of this would have happened! But, I didn't tell anyone because that would have ruined the betting pool, but Day 5 was my goal. 1 day more than the 4 days of denial I had from the skirata set, so ... new Personal Record! But I'm actually kind of glad it played out the way it did ... because THIS has been WAY MORE INTERESTING! AND gave me an idea to develop out my crazy stories! But, there was NOTHING wrong with the way that you wrote it, NOT for what that was—just a mini set ... "branching choices" take a LOT to do ... WAY too much effort for a lowly, quickie "mini set" ... and yeah, had I played it on Day 3, I WOULD have had to tell her no, because I was DEAD SET on making it 5 days, but ... I am actually SO GLAD it played out the way it did for ALL of the reasons!
But what you said about you deciding during dom-rules makes perfect sense. So I guess one punishment is still necessary for time out one And yes: not mixing dom and sub during a set makes perfect sense too - I'm not a swith so I didn't think of that.
PERFECTLY understandable. Hard to get out of our own personal headspaces sometimes ... ESPECIALLY when it involves kinks that we don't personally have and that don't quite make sense to us and are outside of our personal experiences.
So I guess one punishment is still necessary for time out one
I actually LOVE getting punished—IF I'm being honest. For some reason, my subby side becomes SO FUCKING STRONG when I've been bad and am getting punished. The ONLY thing is that I just simply CANNOT enjoy getting punished "for no reason." I just have too strong of a sense of fairness, so ... getting unfairly punished takes me RIGHT out of it. I find my brain starting to object to the unfairness, and then ALL of the arousal just DISAPPEARS. And random punishments for no reason don't do it either. I need to be CONNECTED to it somehow, but ... just remind me of what I did and have the girl or girls talk down to me and express their disappoint and repeat over and over that I'm being punished and "deserve this" ... yeah, I just started getting a little hard thinking about that. The problem is, LEGITIMATE/organic punishments are pretty hard to cum by ... and ALSO I am a VERY OBEDIENT SUB—a good little boy, so ... OFTEN there is simply no reason, so ... unless there was some "challenge" set up in the set that allowed me to fail and thus "deserve" a punishment ... yeah, it just sort of ends up being a fetish that is hard to execute on, so ... EVERYTHING I mentioned is on the table ... I guess just "have fun with it." Nancy of course would enjoy punishing me because I don't think she has EVER done it before in a set! Never go to check that box [The "punish Fatts" in a set box], so ... she would LOVE to do it, but ... she is ALSO a HUGE FAN of detailed plots and conniving, so ... concocting some false outrage that resulted in a punishment ... that would probably make her EQUALLY wet—so long as she got to watch. So, I guess just have fun with it, and pretty much everything I mentioned there is "on the table" so to speak. Just don't go past any "hard boundaries" like scat and shit.
Now back to you: I will try to write that mini-punishment set for you within the next few days. As I said, it's not that easy right now but I will do my best - and I think I should manage.
No rush. Pretty busy right now with your 3 day set. Schedule is tight, but I will manage. Heck, you could even write it on your breaks during the three day set ... MIGHT FEEL GOOD to get "back at me" whilst you're in the middle of it! Or not. Maximize the experience and the immersion.
Again: Honored to receive such a detailed story from you and I wish I could follow up on in an appropriate way *right now*. But I will try to in the near future. Until then I'll definite do the mini set and more sets which fit the narrative
Sounds good. Just have FUN with it, brian! THAT is the POINT!
I'm not a flower. And some of us Ivy's can even be poisonous.
Is it this what's attracting you?
The risk?
The danger of getting more than you can handle?
Aww... now you are looking concerned.
What naughty plans does mommy have for you?
Do you like my toy?
I hope so, because it's toy time.
Now grab your fleshlight and use lots of lube.
Fuck my plastic pussy to the beat.
If you edge, remove fleshlight and slap your balls to the beat.
You can continue fleshlight stroking at any time or continue slapping until the end. Your choice.
You get a message from Uma on your phone. It’s a voice recording. That’s odd. Uma usually texts you or video chats directly. You open it up and start to listen. It’s a conversation between Uma and another woman who sounds familiar to you, but you just can’t quite place who she is. The recording seems to being in the middle of their conversation …
Mystery Woman: You want me to be your what now? A “battle ax”?
Uma: Yes.
Mystery Woman: Isn’t that a bad word? Isn’t that what they always say on TV when they are making fun of crazy old ladies who are past their prime?
Uma: What is a woman before she is an old lady?
Mystery Woman: A young lady.
Uma: So YOU can be my “battle ax” … you’ll just be a young and sharp battle ax …
Mystery Woman: Oh! … so they’re dull when they’re OLD … *I* get it now …
Uma: See? Battle ax!
Mystery Woman: Can I STILL be crazy?
Uma: Yes! Of course! I would NEVER have asked YOU to be my “battle ax” UNLESS you were crazy … I ONLY chose you, because of how crazy you are … of ALL of my friends, you are the MOST battle ax!
Mystery Woman: Perfect. Then I accept! Uma’s “young and sharp and hot and crazy battle ax” … Write it down on my resume! Can I put you down as a reference?
Uma: Sure!
The two laugh.
Mystery Woman: But I’ll NEVER be an OLD “battle ax.”
Uma: What!? What are you saying?
Mystery Woman: That I’m going to die young. I live too fast. I’m just not gonna live that long. I’m gonna run out of time.
Uma: Seriously? You say the CRAZIEST things sometimes … Come on! STOP talking nonsense … We’re going to live LONG lives and die as old ladies together … and we’ll just make sure we stay fit and hit the gym and make sure our physiques stay “sharp” forever!
Mystery Woman: I’m being serious, Uma. I’ve thought about this … and why are you giving me grief right now about dying young and then going on with the saccharine happy talk? Hypocrite, much? What is that that you got tattooed on your leg? “Too young to live, too old to die?”
Uma starts laughing out loud. It takes her several seconds to compose herself.
Uma: "Too weird to live, too rare to die."
Mystery Woman: So I’m STILL right … you ARE a hypocrite, because you basically think you’re a weirdo who DESERVES to die and your desire for death is SO STRONG that you tattooed it ON YOUR LEG …
Uma begins laughing again.
Mystery Woman: So how are YOU the one lecturing ME about “dying early” and “death wishes” when YOU have one tattooed ON YOUR FUCKING LEG!?! Huh!? HUH!? Riddle me THAT, Uma!
Uma starts laughing again.
Uma: That is NOT what it means!
Mystery Woman: And what gives? “Too weird to live?” That’s a pretty strange thing to tattoo onto your leg, Uma, when, like … you are like THE MOST NORMAL PERSON THAT I KNOW … It’s like it REALLY IS a death wish! “Hey! Look at me! I’m Uma. I’m SUPER normal but I THINK that I’m TOTALLY WEIRD AND DESERVE TO DIE …” Like, what gives … you make NO SENSE sometimes …
Uma laughs again.
Uma: Well, I guess compared to you I’m pretty normal.
Mystery Woman: Uh, yeah—that’s what I’ve been saying … For being SO SMART you can be pretty dumb sometimes, Uma …
You’ve never seen Uma laugh this much before.
Uma: You can be SO LITERAL sometimes, haha … and I NEVER know when you’re joking or being serious …
Mystery Woman: And that’s why *I’M* your “battle ax!”
Uma: Damn straight!
Both girls start laughing after that exchange.
Uma: But it means that I’m going to “live forever” … it’s NOT a “death wish.”
Mystery Woman: *I* know that, Uma … I just like busting your balls … and I’m NOT actually as stupid as people say …
Uma: Hey! I would NEVER say that about you, and you don’t have to remind me! We BOTH had the SAME GPA at university: 4.0.
Mystery Woman: Yeah, yeah, yeah … *I* never forgot that either … just don’t go blabbing that around … you’ll only hurt my street cred … I’ve got a reputation to keep—you know?
Uma: A reputation as what, exactly?
Mystery Woman: A professional. A ringer. The closer. Somebody you bring in when you want a job done right … THAT is why you called me—isn’t it? You wanted to hire a “professional,” and THAT is what I am: a professional.
Uma: But I’m not paying you …
Mystery Woman: Whatever … You know what I mean. “Professional.” “High quality” or whatever … Shit, Uma! Why are you always nitpicking me? It’s like you think you’re better than me even though you KNOW you’re actually not …
Uma: I’m just trying to improve my friend.
Mystery Woman: Bullshit! Don’t play games with me. We BOTH left John Dikinson tied up naked to the football goal post junior year, and he DID NOT have it coming to him!
Uma starts laughing again.
Mystery Woman: He was a nice boy—MAYBE a little naive—but WE did it PURELY for the shits and giggles …
Uma: But it was rush week, and didn’t he get into the Phi Kaps BECAUSE of that?
Mystery Woman: Yah, he did … but he ALSO got a three game suspension and ALMOST lost his scholarship …
Uma: But he didn’t.
Mystery Woman: But he COULD have, and we KNEW how much of a hard ass his coach was, and yet we did it anyway because we’re bitches who don’t give a fuuuuuuuck!
Again, Uma starts laughing out loud.
Uma: You are a bad influence on me.
Mystery Woman: Nonsense. I’m THE BEST friend you’ve got. NO ONE knows you better than ME … *I* keep you GROUNDED …
Uma: … says the crazy “battle ax.”
Mystery Woman: Says the crazy “battle ax.” So what’s with all this pretense, Uma? Come on, man! If you can’t be yourself around ME, then where CAN you be yourself? Besides, it’s just us. You ain’t fooling ANYBODY with this “holier than thou” routine …
Uma: But it’s not just us.
Mystery Woman: Say, WHAAAAAT!? You got your boy toy tied up in a closet somewhere? I can’t see him … is he under the bed?
Uma: No, I’m recording this. I’m gonna send it to him
Mystery Woman: You fucker! Where *I* live recording someone without their consent is illegal.
Uma: Yes. But where *I* live, in California, it IS legal. We’re a one party consent state—so tough titties.
Mystery Woman: No, you’re not. Look it up.
Uma: Yes, we are.
Mystery Woman: No, you’re not. Look it up.
There is a pause in the conversation. Both women are silent. Apparently Uma is looking it up on her phone.
Uma: Mother fucker …
Mystery Woman: See!? I was RIGHT!
Uma: I hate it when you’re right.
Mystery Woman: 4.0, bitch!
Uma: DON’T remind me …
Mystery Woman: I will—WHEN it’s convenient for me …
Uma: FUCK you …
Mystery Woman: … but *I* will give you consent …
Uma: Of course …
Mystery Woman: … because I’m gracious in victory and HUMBLE in defeat …
Uma: The FUCK you are …
Mystery Woman: Yeah, but … your mystery boy toy doesn’t know that, so … are you going to FINALLY introduce me? After ILLEGALLY recording me for SEVERAL minutes, but … it’s okay now, because I consent …
Uma: Say, “Hi” to Brian.
Mystery Woman: Hi, Brian! I’m gonna fuck you up! You are going to get me off SO good … SHIT … Shit! I’m getting wet just thinking about it …
Uma: WOW, well … THAT was fast! You were going on about ME lying to YOU, but … you don’t have to go lying to me to make it even you know …
Mystery Woman: No, for REAL, Uma! … I’m getting WET … John Dikinson … “battle ax” … calling me up and recording me JUST to tease a damn SUB … oh, FUCK … You have NEVER done THIS before … He must be REALLY important to you …
Uma remains silent.
Mystery Woman: You haven’t done ANYTHING like this, since … well … college … This is SERIOUS—isn’t it?
Uma stays silent.
Mystery Woman: FUCK, Uma … You must want this guy BAD … is he THAT good? Is he hung?
Uma doesn’t say anything.
Mystery Woman: Your silence is ONLY making me hornier AND wetter …
Uma: Good.
No one says anything for several seconds.
Mystery Woman: FUCK, Uma … FUUCCCKKK … I want to mess him up SO bad …
Uma: You will. That’s why I called you …
Mystery Woman: FUCK, Uma—you gay slut! THAT is why I LOVE YOU … You make me SO GAY FOR YOU!
Uma: You know you could just “love me like a sister” …
Mystery Woman: Nah, fuck that … I am SO HOT for you, I could eat you out RIGHT NOW!
Uma: Well, lucky for me we aren’t in the same room right now …
Mystery Woman: Lucky for YOU? FUCK that … you would LOVE IT, and they would hear your pleasured screams in GEORGIA!!
Uma: Wait … Your “Georgia” or my “Georgia?”
Mystery Woman: BOTH!!
Both girls pause then laugh together.
Mystery Woman: But SERIOUSLY, Uma … I’m getting wet … I will NOT let you down … DON’T say another word … I KNOW how serious this is, and I. Will. DO IT!
Uma: THAT’S my “battle ax!”
Mystery Woman: FUCK, yeah … Okay, brian … Don’t even TRY to prepare yourself. You are truly and ROYALLY fucked, and NORMALLY I would tell you to get ready, but … there is like NOTHING you can do … just accept your fate and get ready for one HELL OF A RIDE!!!!
The recording ends.
The above story is the "teaser" for the set, so ... go ahead and read it AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. (The full set can be played later. )
The set is "normal length." I tried REALLY HARD to have it done "by Wednesday", so ... HOPEFULLY you can find time to play it today (OR on Friday). I would say, "Less than an hour," for the whole thing, maybe even 30-45 minutes. VERY doable I would say ...
You get a text from Uma. She says there is someone important she wants you to meet. She gives you a time and an address. She says to not be late, or you’ll regret it. She says to arrive with your cage on.
You arrive early. The address is for a townhouse. You knock on the door. No answer. You try the door. It’s unlocked. You decide to enter.
“I’m back here!” says a cheery voice. It doesn’t sound like the woman from the phone, but suddenly, you’re not so sure.
“Don’t be shy! I’m ready for you—in the bedroom!” You make your way back towards the bedroom and open the door …
Hey! You must be brian! I'm Guerlain! It's so nice to meet you!
Uma's told me a LOT about you ... good things—mostly—so don't be so nervous!
She is SO excited for her three day excursion with you! She has SO MUCH planned!
Oh, good! Your cage is on, I see ... I like that ... Could you strip down, please? I want you COMPLETELY naked—except for your cage ...
Oh ... that is MUCH better ... is it tight?
Good! I like that! I think it's SUPER hot when a guy is ALL EXCITED by me, and THEN his cock presses against its cage ... SO hot ...
Guerlain quickly finishes undressing.
Well ... it's more fair if we are both naked—right?
Of course it isn't TOO fair—not for you at least ... *I* can touch myself—if I want—but the best that YOU can do, well ... YOU can only stroke that cage of yours ...
I can rub myself and get pleasure, but ... oh, poor brian ... you ONLY get to watch ...
Does that turn you on, brian? Do you like to watch—and not touch? Well, *I* think that's good ... because *I* like to be seen ...
NO pussy for you—right now—AND no stroking your cock, either! Do you LIKE being teased, brian? Because *I* just LOVE teasing you ...
Pressed against your cage—unable to get out ... just WISHING you could touch my pussy—but you can't ...
I'm used to boys stroking and edging and not being allowed to cum, but ... this NO touching—at ALL—while your cage keeps you from getting even BIGGER ... brian ... I just want to know ...
How do you STAND it? How can you sit there and stroke and not feel ANYTHING when EVERYTHING in your brain tells you to take off that cage and RAVISH my eager body ...
Guerlain lets the question hang in the air for a while. She's clearly getting turned on by the thought of teasing you while you wear your cage and are unable to touch yourself properly.
... but I just HAVE to confess something to you, brian ...
Uma and I ... we have been playing a little trick on you ...
You see, I am NOT the "important person" you are supposed to meet here today ... I guess you could say that I am more of a ...
... “chaperone.” The girl you overheard on the phone is NOT me—she's much crueler and meaner. I'm not sure if that scares or excites you. Maybe a little bit of both ...
... but she's waiting in the next room, and she is EAGER to meet you, so ... you better go see her ...
But don't worry! I'll tag along, but ... I'm not sure how much good that will do ...
You exit the bedroom and head into the next room. Guerlain follows behind you ...
Seriously? This is him? THIS is Uma's new boy toy?
Guerlain nods silently.
A little unimpressive to look at, but ... then again, Uma DID always have "interesting" tastes ...
So what can I do with him, Guerlain? Can I bust his balls?
Guerlain: Yes—a little bit—but not too hard ...
Great ... THAT figures ... He looks to be made of glass ...
How's his stamina?
Guerlain: Not too good ... he would probably lose control and cum if you edged him more than ten times too quickly ...
Fucking lightweight ... but again: That figures ... HARDLY a surprise ...
Guerlain: Aren't you going to tell him your name?
In a minute ... I'm STILL trying to figure him out ...
SHIT stamina, so ... NOT an all-star edgeslut ... Poor pain tolerance, so ... NOT a painslut ... Can I make him cum over and over again?
Guerlain: No ... again, his stamina CAN be an issue, and ... he "loses interest" after cumming—
And let me guess ... his refractory period is on the "long" side ...
Guerlain: Correct ...
Well, FUCK ...
Can I make him put on a dress?
Guerlain: No.
Does he have SUPER big orgasms—like shoot his cum across the room?
Guerlain: I don't think so ...
Then what the fuck DOES he do, Guerlain!?
Guerlain: I think he's pretty good at denial ...
Like THAT will get you a medal around here ...
Guerlain: ... but ONLY during short periods of time ...
I would be lying if I said I was "shocked to hear that" ...
Guerlain: brian is a "submissive" ...
Tell me something I don’t know, Guerlain … I knew that the moment he walked through the door ...
Guerlain: He likes to be "cucked" ...
At this point, *I* should probably just start ANSWERING the questions instead of ASKING them ...
Guerlain: The cucking COULD be fun—IF you were willing to give it a try ...
PASS!
Guerlain: *I* had fun teasing him when his cage was on, maybe if you tried—
PASS! I would MUCH rather his dick be OUT so that I can see it bob and twitch ... I like to watch the boys STROKE FOR ME, Guerlain! I am NOT sold on all of this "cage" business ... HARD and FAST ... THAT is how I like to play ... if you CAN'T KEEP UP, THEN *I* DON'T WANT YOU!
Guerlain: Well, MAYBE if you just—
NOPE! ZIP IT, Guerlain ... NO MORE HINTS ... Uma sees SOMETHING in him ... just give me a goddamn minute to think and figure it out ...
Guerlain: Well, he's not opposed to cum eating ... he's at least a LITTLE curious to try that out …
For the first time since meeting her, you see the "Mystery Woman" smile.
Well, okay ... THANK YOU, Guerlain ... finally ... FINALLY you say something that makes sense ... did you see it?
Guerlain: See what?
The FEAR ... that little bit of fear mixed with excitement that flashed across his face just now when you said, "cum eating" and "a little curious to try" ... FUCKING Uma ... it's ALWAYS with the head games with her ... "Head Games with Head Cases" ... THAT should be the name of her reality tease series ... Fucking Uma—I should have known ...
OH, brian ... You picked a good one! Can't edge. Can't bust. Can't cum ... you can't even STAY DENIED for long periods of time, lol! Most mistresses would just get SO BORED OF YOU and KICK YOU TO THE CURB ... but you are ONE LUCKY BASTARD!! HAHAHHAAA ... You fucking HIT THE JACKPOT WITH UMA!!! AAHHAHAHAHAHAAA ...
Melena Maria Ryabushkina ... THAT is my full name ...
My friends call me "Melena", but ... YOU can call me ...
... whatever the fuck you want ... *I* don't care ... you're just a human beat stick to me ...
... and *I* am going to use you to beat myself off again, and again, and again, and again and again ... well, YOU get the idea ...
Check out my TITS subby boy ... you 'bout ready to come out of that cage? Because *I* am ready to play ...
A slave that can't do SHIT—but APPARENTLY Uma thinks you are some kind of S-Tier "uber sub"—apparently ... well, let's just see how this goes ... I am always HOPING to be surprised ... it's just that only a RARE FEW ever TRULY impress me ... but we've got time, subby boy.
I told you I was going to fuck you up ... Are you ready? NO—of COURSE NOT ... no way IN HELL that you are ready—how could you EVER be with shit stamina and low pain tolerance and ALL the rest of your shortcomings ... you're just a dispenser of disappointmentalways ready to unload ... BUT ...
... Let me just make ONE thing clear ... I have NO IDEA what Uma has planned—that tight-lipped, secret-keeping BITCH—but ... She is one of THE DAMNED PICKIEST mistresses I have EVER met—and I have known MORE THAN A FEW ... IF she sees SOMETHING in you—and who THE HELL could POSSIBLY KNOW what THAT could be—except for Uma, well ... Me? *I* am NOT convinced, but ... I am willing to try ... I will "trust Uma" and MAYBE you'll surprise me, but ... if *I* am willing to try ... oh ho ho ... YOU better be giving it 110 fucking percent, and thanking your lucky STARS someone as AMAZING as Uma is willing to invest THIS MUCH time into you ... you got it, slave?
Melena looks down at the ground for a moment. Her energy level goes down from a "10" to a "4".
"Just don't hurt my friend, bitch ..."
A second passes by before Melena realizes she let her facade drop.
"Now take off that STUPID cage. Come into the living room once it's off. It's time I teased you properly."
[Remove your cage and start using your "Normal Mode" rules.]
You find Melena waiting for you in the living room ...
No, I am NOT going to cuck you—mother cucker … you would probably like that, huh?
No, you do NOT get off that easily … If I am fucking another guy, how am I going to fuck with you? Like … you need my FULL attention—so that you KNOW you are getting fucked by me—and that *I* am the one who is FUCKING WITH YOU! Got it!?
I’m not going to, like … have sex with one guy as I dominate you … No—fuck that!
If ANYTHING I would dominate TWO GUYS AT ONCE!
But how is THAT going to achieve my goal of TOTALLY fucking YOU up? Like … I would have to half fuck you AND half fuck the other guy—at the same time!
Do you only want to get HALF-FUCKED by me, brian? No! FUCK no! Of COURSE you don’t …
NOBODY wants to get HALF fucked by me … they want to get FULLY fucked by me—and that’s what I plan to do!
Do you want to be HALF destroyed? Or FULLY destroyed?
Well, Duh! OBVIOUSLY, you want to be FULLY destroyed—by me—or else what would you be doing calling me up to tease your ass?
No, no, see … Melena Rya here—I am a FUCK THEM ALL THE WAY TILL THEY CRY kinda girl … when I break my toys … THAT is what gets me off—you feel me!?
So NONE of this “half-fucked, watching from the corner and hope she forgets about me” bullshit … no, no, no …
Nancy told me about her little “cucking session” with you and Leeroy … HA!
You got off EASY … Nancy is WAY too fucking nice … she doesn’t make her subs cry NEARLY enough …
When you are with ME … You have my FULL attention … because *I* want to see that look in your eyes that lets ME know that you are TERRIFIED of getting FULLY MENTALLY FUCKED by me …
Not PHYSICALLY fucked; I will NOT touch you. Eww. Gross …
But that FEAR and that UNDIVIDED ATTENTION … THAT is the kind of devotion and attention *I* want from MY boy toys …
Melena’s cell phone begins to ring. She stops dominating you to answer it.
[Suspend your normal rules. This is a "story section." Resume your normal rules once the next scene begins ...]
Melena: Hello? Yes … Yes …
Melena turns to you.
Melena: It’s Uma. She wants you to put your cage on.
She shoots you a look. She’s not happy.
Melena: Well, how the FUCK am I supposed to play with him if he’s GOT HIS CAGE ON, Uma!?
She turns to you.
Melena: Well GO ON! PUT YOUR FUCKING CAGE ON … RIGHT. FUCKING. NOW …
You look down at your erect cock and then look back up at her. She looks at with you with disgust, then rolls her eyes.
Melena: Figure it out … NOT my problem …
She returns to her conversation with Uma.
Melena: Wait … you can make boys DO that? FUCK no … Quit your lying, Uma! … You CAN’T do that … *I* have NEVER seen that IN MY LIFE! Nope! I don’t believe you … bullshit … uh huh … uh uh … BULL … SHIT … And HOW do you EVEN KNOW what I am doing—right now!? Are you fucking SPYING on me—again? Where’s the camera?
Melena flicks the wrist of her free hand to whip out her middle finger. She prominently displays it to various points in the room as she randomly flips off sundry corners and objects.
Melena: Where’s the camera, Uma? Where are you watching me from? Are you seeing this? I need to flip you off GOOD and PROPER …
After pausing for a moment, Melena turns to a clock. She waves her middle finger at the clock while she sticks out her tongue.
Melena: THERE you are, fucker—I GOT you!
Melena starts to laugh. You can barely overhear Uma’s laughter from the phone.
Melena: What the FUCK is the matter with you? Don’t you trust me? Why don’t you trust me?
Oh … It’s because you think I’ll “break your favorite toy” … uh huh … uh huh … So, the cage ISN’T to slow ME down—well I mean it IS but … uh huh … uh huh … it’s for “brian’s protection”—so I don’t break your boy toy before his “big day” …
Melena covers up the receiver on her phone with her free hand to muffle the sound. She turns to face you.
Melena: Uma thinks you're a pussy, brian … She thinks you’re too baby to “handle it” … She’s afraid I’ll be too mean and you’ll get cold feet …
Melena removes her hand and returns to her conversation with Uma.
Melena: Yeah, I KNOW you can hear me … I said it loud ON PURPOSE … Well, what do you WANT me to say? I was playing to the cameras! Oh, come on … DON’T get pissed … THAT one was funny. You SHOULD be laughing … okay, okay, okay … Well, Frederick said three hours was fine … so … Are you gonna be mad at me for believing him? Or are you gonna be mad at him for LYING?
Guerlain: Frederick said he could only handle ONE hour, Melena …
Guerlain says this loudly so that Uma will hear her.
Melena: What the fuck, Guerlain!?
Guerlain: I think Uma needs to know the truth … AND … she has a right to be concerned—that you won’t respect brian’s limits …
Melena: It was ONE HOUR of teasing spread out over THREE—OK!? JUST. ONE. HOUR …
Guerlain: Except that it was three.
Melena: Shut up, Guerlain!
Melena: OK, well … can I just get back to teasing Brian—please!? I mean that’s why I’m here—right!? Okay. Thanks … No … No, I will NOT say that to Guerlain, because I do NOT need a babysitter—OK?
But are you SURE—I mean … I was JUST STARTING to get warmed up! I haven’t even had ONE orgasm yet today! And I have been looking forward to this ALL DAY … I was PLANNING on having two or THREE … I was taking my TIME and working myself up … YOU know how I work … I was getting pretty close—until you BOX BLOCKED ME just now with your STUPID fucking phone call … sigh … UGH! Okay, okay … fine … FINE … I’m not in the fucking mood ANYWAY now … You derailed my mojo—fucking box blocker … stupid cameras and phone calls … I THOUGHT that I was your “battle ax” … “Just an introduction?” You mean JUST an introduction? Well here I thought you called in a professional, and I was on my way to like FIVE orgasms here with your prized boy “brian”, and before I am even HALF WAY to my first one … Well YEAH, I’m getting pissed … FINE … okay, FINE …
All right, Uma … I’ll do what you say … I won’t break him … I promise … yeah yeah yeah … well you KNOW I’ll do THAT... Ha ha … Ok. Fine. I love you too. Bye. See you for dinner.
Melena hangs up. She stares at you. She’s not happy. She turns to face the clock again and flips it the bird again while sticking out her tongue. She does a little dance and jiggles her tits while she does it. Then she stops smiling and sets her phone back down.
Melena: Stand up. Come here.
You get closer to Melena. She stares at your cock. Then, she grabs your cage and looks at it.
Melena: No, no, Brian … I WILL tease the FUCK out of you … just NOT today …
… and I WILL make you cum in that cage—hands-free orgasm—and THAT is a promise … but just not today …
Melena purses her lips and exhales angrily while staring at your cage.
Fucking Uma … how does she even KNOW about that kind of shit?
Melena shakes her head and rolls her eyes.
Melena: Subs that cum in their cages … I HAVE to see THAT … and YOU, brian … YOU are going to show me what that’s like … pop my caged “cumgasm” cherry.
She loudly clicks the roof of her mouth with her tongue.
Melena: … but that is NOT today … no, TODAY … today you just get a ruin … nice little ruin …
Melena scowls and shakes her head again.
Melena: Fuck YOU, brian … YOU get to cum, while *I* get box blocked by my bestie—FUCKING UMA …
She looks at you intensely.
Melena: You BETTER be worth it … You BETTER be fucking worth it …
OH … you are going to get me off SO GOOD, brian … 6 orgasms AT LEAST—I can FEEL IT IN MY CUNT …
Melena slaps her pussy hard several times then begins to rub it a little.
Melena: In my CUNT, brian … my CUNT says that YOU … YOU are going to get me off SEVERAL times—at LEAST six … can you dig it? Can you dig it, brian? *I* can … *I* can dig it …
She curls her lips inward while she makes two popping sounds with her mouth. Then she smiles.
Melena: Wow … Hey! I’m not pissed anymore, brian! Can you believe that? I’m not PISSED!
Melena turns to Guerlain.
Melena: Can you BELIEVE that, Guerlain? I am NOT PISSED anymore!
Guerlain: That’s a surprise, Melena … brian, you just got INCREDIBLY lucky … usually Melena ONLY stops being pissed after she’s cum—and SEVERAL times at that …
Melena: THAT is NOT TRUE, Guerlain … STOP LYING to the boy …
Guerlain: It is NOT a lie.
Melena: Yes, it is.
Guerlain: It is NOT a LIE.
Melena: YES, it IS.
Guerlain makes a mean, judgmental face at Melena. Melena rolls her eyes.
Melena: Okay … it is NOT a lie—Guerlain’s right …
Guerlain smiles.
Melena: … but the REASON I’m happy now SHOULD scare you, brian … because the REASON I am no longer pissed, is because I am getting HAPPY thinking about ALL of the HORRIBLE things that I am going to do to you in less than one week’s time … and what is my “specialty,” Guerlain?
Melena points at Guerlain, and on cue, Guerlain responds cheerfully.
Guerlain: Ruins!
Melena: That’s RIGHT. Gold star for YOU, Guerlain!
Guerlain smiles sweetly again.
Melena: SOOoooo … we’re going to practice one of those RIGHT NOW … you ready, bri? After a couple minutes of preparation, Melena gives you the cue to come into the bedroom: "ENTER, Bitch Boy!"
You see Melena lying naked on the bed, a rare smile on her face ...
I'm happy, brian, because I had a good conversation with Uma ...
... She's my bestie. Talking to her ALWAYS makes me feel better ...
You ... I STILL haven't made my mind up about you—but there's time ... There is time for that later ...
... right now, we have to focus on getting off ... together …
EDGE for me, slave boy! That's a pussy reveal ... See? I pay attention to things more than I let on ...
Right now, YOU are MAGIC ... You are in a MAGICAL POSITION, brian ... I have NOT YET made up my mind about you, but I am HOPEFUL—optimistic even, brian!
You are an utter MYSTERY to me ... and I have NO FUCKING CLUE what Uma sees in you, but ... I have faith ...
Melena spits on her finger. You suspect she's about to use it as makeshift lube—or perhaps she prefers spit.
I have faith that there is something ACTUALLY THERE—inside of you—and since you HAVEN'T disappointed me YET ... it is QUITE POSSIBLE that you MAY even impress me ... and THAT is fucking HOT brian ...
Melena starts to rub her clit faster.
Just LOOK at my pussy ... Why, it's LITERALLY WET at just the THOUGHT of the ENDLESS possibilities of what could be ...
I'm HAPPY, brian ... so you should ENJOY this ...
EDGE AGAIN for me ... I'm feeling downright whimsical right now ... even a little "giddy" ...
You might NEVER see me THIS happy EVER AGAIN, so ... just ENJOY IT, bri!
And I am being 100% serious right now. ZERO tricks. I am high on possibility and feeling GOOD ...
... because the ONLY PLACE you can go from here, is DOWN, bri—Edge AGAIN ...
... and IF you go down, bri—EDGE a SECOND TIME—who will be meeting you at the bottom of your fall?
Why it will be ME—of COURSE, bri—and *I* will be able to FUCK YOU UP with the fury of 10,000 pissed off valkyries ... and THAT thought, well ... THAT thought just FILLS MY HEART WITH SO MUCH JOY ...
Edge again, brian! The time for MY full orgasm and your RUIN is almost here!
So either you DON'T disappoint me, and then I'm a winner for trusting Uma ... OR ... you DO disappoint me, and THEN I'm STILL a winner, because I will gain the "grand prize" of punishing your ass for MONTHS ... so, it will either be "sweet dreams" for you, OR I'll just be a nightmare for you—which would be a dream come true for ME ... of course, YOU have met me ... you know I make a MUCH better "devil" than I do "angel", but ... *I* could be an "angel" for my bestie and her favorite boy toy ... right? RIGHT!?!
Melena rubs herself faster and faster. A hot intensity surges forth from within her. Her moans get louder and louder until she starts letting out a wail.
IF YOU HURT HER, I SWEAR I WILL MESS YOU UP PERMANENTLY, FUCKTARD!!!
Oh! THAT was nice ... was it good for you?
DON'T answer that ... *I* know ruins suck ... I'm "just pretending" to be civil ... YOU just nod your head and say it was great!
I ALWAYS keep my promises, bri!
You will get me off AT LEAST 6 times next week ...
I will DEFINITELY make you cum INSIDE your cage—though probably NOT next week ...
AND ... IF you make Uma happy ...
I PROMISE to give you a FULL orgasm!
How is THAT for an incentive!
Looks like it is all coming up ROSES for brian! What could POSSIBLY go wrong for you? EVERYTHING is just going to turn out peachy—right? RIGHT!?
After Nancy, Melena is probably my SECOND favorite character to write. If she is NOT a good fit for you, well ... I haven't written your big set YET! BUT ... it would take QUITE A BIT of reworking ideas! But HOPEFULLY she is JUST THE *RIGHT* amount of crazy and abusive and unpredictable to be the PERFECT tool for Uma. Her "battle ax."
Short feedback is fine. Will play your set tonight when I have time. PUNISHMENT set.
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From a previous set, I was denied for this one. However getting worked over by Naomi swann(she will be added to my favorites) was fun! The other girls were ok. I don’t really have a thing for feet, but they were cute!
Only opened your explanation…and wowzers! With a length like that, I’m going to try to do this in one go, when I have time later on in the month! Thanks so much for this!
: (it's a bit hard, definitely harder than the last one I did to you, ups I guess 
)
. Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
. Anyways, I really enjoy POT 
: Won't do anal, public, pictures, proof, save/freeze loads. Won't do or watch pee, scat, blood, gore, vomit, pregnant, granny.
because then it will be harder to "force you to edge" and score points 
... but, play it as you like, sir. 
Ecik will make the right decision ... and if he doesn't, well ... I'll just make him pay for it later! 
... Nah—no ... I know you don't. 
Good! I thought you would! 
