Hey!
First of all, thanks for all the work you put into this tease. I'm a big fan of the Emily Series and dabbled a little in creating webteases myself, so i know how much effort went into this and 8 month's doesn't surprise me at all.
For context I'm one of the people who actually played over the span of a week, and went with
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- Ending B
Feedback:
The tease is really well written and structured. I especially like that
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- you meet all the girls on day 1 and that the dates clearly telegraph what you're getting into with each ending. Also the party gives you an end goal to look forward to all week.
And i love that it's a more supportive kind of femdom instead of all the degrading stuff i see most of the time.
The actual teasing part is well paced. Hard enough that i feel pushed but not overwhelming with enough variety to keep each day interesting. A+ on that front.
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- The ruined orgasm on Day 2 was a welcome surprise. And i had a lot of fun with the little Sabrina quiz and 4th wall breaking milovana question.
The Stab-Diff Art pretty good over all. It has it's problems but i can easily overlook them for the original characters and consistent art-style it provides. That had to have been around 200 Images on my route alone. No complaints there.
Bug report:
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- One of the pages on day 7, during the Sabrina Ending B, (at "Day7-Sabrina5Loop") gives me an undefined instead of text. I didn't have time to do proper bug testing, but i managed to recreate it and i assume it's just a problem with one entry of the list for getSabrinaStrokeTaunt().
Just a guess though.
Spelling and Grammar nitpicks:
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- "Day1-1" There's a holiday tomorrow , so a lot of people will probably be out today as well. (Misses a comma.)
- "Day2-1" You had gotten used to the old cage in that you hardly noticed its presence attached to your cock. (Phrasing seems a little odd to me.)
Suggestion: You had gotten used to the old cage, so you barely noticed it attached to your cock.
- "StrokeTaunts" You've realized all this stroking only makes you ache more, right? (Feels out of place compared to the rest)
Of course everyone realizes that. That's the whole point to begin with.
English is my second language so take that with a pinch of salt.
In short easy 5 Stars from me.
I hope i have time to play another route soon.
Thanks again for the all hard work you put into the tease.
And i wish the Series a bright future.