New Tease: Roomies from Hell

[johnno240]

I just completed my second tease.

I took the feedback from my last webtease and incorporated it into this one. Its alot longer, about 21 pages. I think its really good, but thats just my opinion.

Hope you guys like it and any feedback would be great to help me with my next tease.

"Edit": I recently got a private message from a member here saying how much they liked my two first teases, and said i should make the roomies from hell webtease, a miniseries. I had already thought about this and had come up with a storyline and found about 70 pictures in total for both roomies 2 and 3. I'd like to know if people liked the tease, what they would maybe liked changed/improved.