Hey everyone, let me know if there is anything not working properly or that you did/didn't like and I can make sure to incorporate it into the next parts. Yes, the code at the end will affect later parts.
Thanks for playing.
Feedback: Exchange Program part 1
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Re: Feedback: Exchange Program part 1
Very nicely written tease, flash. I enjoyed it and look forward to future episodes.
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Re: Feedback: Exchange Program part 1
I'd really prefer it if you used continue buttons to timers for conversational speech and setup, I can read so much faster than a slideshow can operate. It seems well-written enough.
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Re: Feedback: Exchange Program part 1
Flash, I am so glad you made this tease, and I hope you continue the series.
These days I visit Milovana maybe once a week, and for several weeks now I haven't seen a single new tease I really found interesting, until yours. For whatever reason I have always needed a backstory and dialogue that at least attempts to create a sense of character in order to really get into a tease. Those things seem to be very rare on Milovana these days, but your tease is a welcome exception. A five star effort IMO!
I must say though that I agree with sub-routine, timers are okay for stroking parts but I don't really like them for conversations.
Also, even the stroking timers tend to be too long for my tastes, but that is a very minor complaint and I am sure that many other readers feel differently.
All in all, please keep up the strong work.
These days I visit Milovana maybe once a week, and for several weeks now I haven't seen a single new tease I really found interesting, until yours. For whatever reason I have always needed a backstory and dialogue that at least attempts to create a sense of character in order to really get into a tease. Those things seem to be very rare on Milovana these days, but your tease is a welcome exception. A five star effort IMO!
I must say though that I agree with sub-routine, timers are okay for stroking parts but I don't really like them for conversations.
Also, even the stroking timers tend to be too long for my tastes, but that is a very minor complaint and I am sure that many other readers feel differently.
All in all, please keep up the strong work.
Re: Feedback: Exchange Program part 1
Thanks for the comments, I'll keep the conversation timers in mind. I like timers for stroking parts since "stroke while I say the next plot advancement" always made me extra horny in others' teases but I completely understand not wanting it for just normal dialogue.
It'll be a couple weeks probably before the next installment but I'm working on the story at the very least.
It'll be a couple weeks probably before the next installment but I'm working on the story at the very least.
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Re: Feedback: Exchange Program part 1
I loved it! Can't wait for the next installment. I agree with others about the conversation parts, but everything else was perfect!!! Thanks for making it :)
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