Yumi -- FB

[Jinx'd]

Hey y'all.
Thought I'd make a post seeing as I've just uploaded my first tease.
Well I thought I had to start somewhere and I prefer flash teases, so I went with that.

I'd like your thoughts and comments on Yumi, throw some ideas my way and I will see what I can do for next time. Its hard to think of a generic style that most of you will get along with (personally I love latex/leather as you can probably tell), however I might do the odd tease in the future based around some desires.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=23257

xxx

[ElDorado87]

Very nice one!!! Looking forward to do your next tease.

[Sexdog]

A really good first webtease.

Spoiler: show

I really luved the teasing in the beginning ^^ most teases go straight to the edge like 3-5mins in >~>. tease, edging, ruined orgasm and cum-play = awesomeness. But I would of liked some more edging before cumming tho

5 stars for u ;)

[elvisomar]

The pacing was excellent, and I agree with sexdog's comments above me, definitely. Thanks to LcA for taking the time to contribute, I look forward to more from you.

If you want specific feedback, the teases I enjoy most are flash teases, because I enjoy when a tease is at least partially self-paced like yours was. Sometimes I click a button, sometimes I just wait. When I am watching and reading, and there is no button, I do like it when the page changes during a pause. I would rather see six 30-second pages, than one 3-minute page. I think Yumi did a pretty good job on that score.

The other thing I really appreciate in a tease is a good story line. Yours was entertaining, but I sense you are capable of something more involving. If you haven't already, check out teases by 1885, Cactusman, Incubo, and many others that very successfully find a balance between kinky sexual fantasy, good and erotic pacing, and an engaging story that builds and really draws the reader into it.

Thanks again for contributing.

[LeadingEdge]

This was outstanding for a first Tease. I love the Flash style with a metronome and the pacing was very well thought out. The photos were great too.

If you're looking for suggestions for the next one, I might say having some nude or even hardcore pics would be great. I agree with the others about a story line but not if it takes you away from the action. Something longer with more edging might be nice and perhaps some alternation between dangerously fast and painfully slow. Clothespins were good... maybe a shoelace next time.

All in all, I think it was in the top 10% of the flash/metronome teases posted here!

Cheers!!!

[Jinx'd]

Aww, thank you very much for all your kind words.

I enjoyed testing the water with Yumi, not only in the editing side but what can be produced from it. Your feedback and suggestions are exactly what I was after, they will certainly be helpful for the next box of fun.
I will try to keep it suited as a generic tease, but I will be sneaking in some tasty bits for those with other kinks. Mmm ideas

xxx

[dbt]

Just wanted to chime in and say thanks for this one. It was really well done, much more 'teasing' than others here!