Sister test by k-0s is looping?

[janhuubdikstaal]

Does anyone else have problems with this tease?
It seems to me that it is stuck in a loop..?

Spoiler: show

After you have to lay down with your ass up against the wall, it goes back a few pages.

[SexualChoc]

hmmm maybe your supposed to orgasm on yourself
and that why there is a loop?

also there is no sound (that I heard)
for stroke to my beat
after she is laying in the bed

second time no sound with her on bed

there a lot of sound missing for on the bed session
I know how hard it is to link sounds
so you may want to look for a small typo
since the sound worked fine earlier. (counted a third time, no sound)

there is No sound/beet when you put ass on wall either...

also I really wish you would correct the spelling of one word
the word is: crap.... you mean to say craMp.. does your body craMp up...
normally I don't give a care about spelling but crap=shit
kind of a really BIG difference

and yes it looped for me too
so there may be some small glitches
but overall a good tease.

I just previewed it, by the way, because of the post.
but good model, well written, just need to correct a few typos.
both in the words
and the code of the tease.
double check you sound lines for the later half of tease.

[wishboned]

Yeah, it looks like page 48 targets page 33 instead of page 49.

[cumping]

I miss the beat in the later part.

[cumping]

And yes it is looping. Or how long should it take?

[k-0s]

Hey guys sorry for the delay but I have been screwing around with this tease a lot (its my first tease). I was getting a ton of errors in nyx that kept looping my pages so I tried an offline editor that fixed everything but now the text is to small and I'm waiting for a fix. I will fix it as soon as something changes.

Thanks,

[k-0s]

Should be all fixed now

[Mabene]

Hey!
I just wanted to say, I really like this tease. It is well written and I like your choice of the model. Did this tease when it was looping and was very sad but when I found out that you fixed it I gave it another run and am really pleased with it. Did it two times since then.

I'd definetely like another one in this style.

As for me this is what I liked and didn't like about it:
Pros:
-metronome
-shoelace
-choice of model
-multiple edges
-good balance of breaks and stroking
-storyline
-sounds!
-duration

Cons:
-she being my direct sister (maybe its just me having a real sister that this fantasy bothers me)
-shooting it "everywhere" was a little ... well in one way very hot because it really gets you going... but at the same time it made me not really enjoy the orgasm because I didn't want to shoot all over my bed. and after such a rather long tease it was quite a load.

Suggestions for a follow up:
-maybe make it the girlfriend, stepmom or stepsis. to still have that part of having the chance of getting caught it could be masturbating and edging in a somewhat public place where someone could walk in on you.
-cum in a certain way, like on a plate, in a glass, on your face... maybe even mouth with optional or forced cum eating or simply come in a condom
-maybe icecubes or a little anal play, maybe include toys

Long story short I liked it and I would love a follow up! :)

[k-0s]

Hey Mabene,

Thanks for the feeback! I know the sister thing is a little weird. I was thinking cousin next time or something. Also glad to hear that that crazy tease is finally working! Took me so much time with all the errors. I don't think Nyx liked all the sounds I used.

Cumming in something is something that I could use too.


Really appreciate the feedback and thanks for doing the tease.