CH-POV - Warm-up round awaiting your feedback!

[guitarist]

Hey you lovely people...I've lurked here for a while now and thought it was time I gave something back!

I'm currently working on a largely POV Cock Hero-esque game...what are your immediate thoughts?

The warm-up round is almost done, so shall I post that here so you can give me feedback before I get caught up in the other rounds? Or would you rather wait for the finished thing (I've not done this before, so there's a very good chance I'll get something wrong!)

The warm-up round is not POV; it's just some lovely girls to help get things moving.

The subsequent rounds will build in intensity, ranging from hand/blow jobs in early rounds, to the best damn ball-slappingly good fucking I've found.

The game will not include the following:
Anal
Fetish
Face-fucking, aggression, etc.

Sorry, but I'm not personally into any of those, and I want to enjoy making this thing as much as you guys will enjoy playing it - I hope you understand :)

Let me know your thoughts, and there might just be a taster up here soon...


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Here you go, the warm-up round is ready for your comments. Please be completely brutal with your feedback (but make it constructive!), because it will give us all a better end result. I know it's not Hollywood standard editing, but it will get better the more I do.

This clip is missing the next beat instructions, but there will be the standard 'warnings' on the finished product just to avoid confusion when the beat changes.

Enjoy!

http://filecloud.io/uz05b1pw (118mb)

Torrent now added!


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[vivi]

what are your immediate thoughts?
BRILLIANT, this is a great idea and i personally can't wait

[Haggard316]

Can't wait, but no anal? sadface

[Greg House]

Brilliant, kudos to you. Looking forward to the finished masterpiece!

[astania]

Great! No anal!

This Will be good, Did you read anything of " ch everquest"?

[guitarist]

Thanks for the encouragement guys! The first post is now updated with the warm-up round.

Sorry again for the lack of anal in the following rounds - I know it can be a deal breaker for some, but I wanted my first video to be confined to my interests, or I could end up getting bored. If this goes down well, I'll no doubt be back making more, and will most probably tailor them more to the needs of the forum as a whole :)

Astania, I've not heard of ch everquest...?

[Vinc]

could somebody set up a torrent= I dont want to get a free account for downloading

[les]

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[Teralar]

i really like it so far, nice videos/editing/matching beats

but that sound... i dont know, i like a clear beat sound but after a whole ch-vid one might lose his mind...

[legionCockHero]

Very nice idea! I am waiting for this one! Thanks:)

[guitarist]

i really like it so far, nice videos/editing/matching beats

but that sound... i dont know, i like a clear beat sound but after a whole ch-vid one might lose his mind...

Thanks for the feedback! You're right, that beep could get annoying lol...I'm numb to it after listening to it all day so I'll try and find another way or a nicer sound :)

[wangchungass]

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Loving 10 minute mail.

Looking forward to CH-POV, away from home at the moment though. Staying in a hotel and torrent blocked on hotel wifi, download has failed twice now at just over 50 mb so I'll wait until I get back tomorrow night. On the plus side I just enjoyed an hour with an awesome BBW professional who smothered me in 69 for about half an hour. Fucking bliss

[jstwolf]

I love the idea of a POV CH. Awesome. I'm a hardcore lover, so I'm with the "no anal?!" crowd, but its not a deal breaker. Can't wait to see the finished product.

About the Warm-up round:
First off, it isn't representative of the finished product, since it isn't POV. Gorgeous choice of girls, well edited, and the beat meter looks good. Overall, looks really high quality.

Second, the beats disappear with a little bit over a minute left. Not sure if intentional, or if this isn't finished. They don't start until over 30 seconds in and there is a break in the middle. For me, not really much of a warmup. About 1 minute 20 seconds of actually fap time is really short. The beats aren't really aggressive, so I feel if I didn't start completely hard, this round would really do nothing for me. Assuming there is a break in between the warmup round and the first round, that would be well over a minute fap-free. IMHO, I think the best warmup rounds have been relatively fast paced right up to the end, then with a break almost allowing you to recover a bit before settling in for the long haul. This makes me feel like I need a warmup before hand, and this scene is kind of a relaxation round.

Anyway, theres my 2 cents. Hope it helps! Looking forward to the whole thing!

[execedrin]

Excellent! I liked the preview, and I like the idea you're going with. I really can't wait to see it released. Judging by your OP I feel like we have similar tastes.

I do have a similar concern as jstwolf though - was the beat stopping intentional? I feel like, if it was, I'd recommend having it go strong until the end or it defeats the purpose of it being a "warm-up round." I'll almost mirror the suggestion about finding a different sound, but it seems like you're all over it.

But other than that, it really looks great. Stick with it for sure! Make more after this one, even!

[guitarist]

Thank you so much for the feedback. It can be so easy to get lost in your project that you miss the glaringly obvious mistakes!

I completely see it now...this round is far too light for a warm up. The song itself sets up a fast end which I will use, and the pauses and delayed start will be filled. I think the problem here is that April and Layla have no trouble getting me ready, but they might not be everybody's biggest turn on..

Apologies that this isn't a preview of the POV portion. It's just that I'm not sure how to tie POV into a warmup without it getting same-y.

Maybe this was completely the wrong approach. Maybe it should start with BJ/HJ.

I've also decided that I will make two versions of the final or penultimate round. Hopefully that will keep more people happy as they have a choice to go for the hardcore, back door option. It would be wrong for me to deny the community after all this feedback!

Thanks again...I'll reevaluate and will hopefully be back with a better first round :P