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- Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:02 am
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: FB: Punished by the head girl
- Replies: 2
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Re: FB: Punished by the head girl
Hi. I liked your tease, gave it a 4. I'm a writer/editor. Your writing is fine in that area. I agree about the consistency. I'm not sure it needs more details as a story would have - the one-sided dialog works, IMHO. What would have made it a 5 for me would have been a bit of cruelty. This was a pun...