Hey, typos happen, but just so you know: A period goes at the end of a sentance. You can, however, use a comma when you want to interject something into a sentance, like this. Do you know what a question mark is? Do you know what a question is? "What a character says" said the professor, &...

I loved it!

What could be worse for the poor guy than letting the ex-wife in on the action!

Write. More. Now. Please.

Well, this is frustrating. (And not in a good way.)

Ballerina, I just want to thank you for the time you've put into your stories/ teases. Do you have any idea how awesome you really are? With so many pictures of her on the web, I'm hoping for a LOT more sequals to this story. Just don't let my begging for more tempt you to rush your work if it might...

Absolutely perfect in every way.

I gave it a 7 on a scale of 1 to 5... or I tried to, but 5 is as high as it would go.

I have to agree with the BeachBum. It seems like teases requiring passwords represent the majority of the teases being posted recently. No offense to the author(s), from what I've seen they have some awesome qualities to them. On the other hand, some people don't have hours to spend every day on gue...

Just my luck, after my incriminating statement, and I have no alibi for that period of time. (Well, I was in Vegas, and you know what they say about what happens in Vegas.) Fortunately I can fall back on the defense of lacking the knowledge required to do something like that, and the fact I'm on dia...

So, Peckersnot, did you arrange for more federal funding for Acorn or what?

I'm guessing that the three second place teases (Your Investigation Begins, Gina Wants You to Suffer, and Your Dick Makes You Pay) are leaching votes from each other. In other words, if only one of those three teases were in the running that tease would win hands down...but since they are competing...

Peckersnot, your tease was awesome. If I had 10 votes, five of them would have been for yours.

Yes, it's a little different, but that's a good thing.

If you can't tell, I love the stories where the evil femme fatale uses her sensuality to defeat the good guys.

It's also nice not having to go to stop the tease on page two and go to Walmart with a shopping list.

I love it. Love it, love it, love it.

Please tell me you plan to do more with this.

The correct answer has to be number 3, it's the most logical choice.

It's been an incredible investigation thusfar. As for my prediction: Ms Scarlet, in the library, with a candlestick. But hey, just because I solved the case doesn't mean I'm not looking forward to more pictures. And by the way.. what was up with Hanna's knee? And those nipples.. didn't they look a b...

Oh my god yes, I agree with everything posted above -- most emphatically.

I hope to see many more like this from you, thanks.