I've made some updates based on the feedback, and is now retitled "I Cum, You Wish!"

It would be great if anyone had any other input...

good input... i think i'm going to update at some point!

Just went back and reviewed and I totally get it... it builds up, but the tease around the next the last slide ("You beg to sniff my wet pussy") could have been strung along for a few more slides. Honestly I tend to like them quicker! But I totally get this suggestion... thanks for the fee...

It was my first webtease! glad you liked the set-up ... any suggestions?