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- Mon Dec 01, 2008 12:41 am
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: my own webteases
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1974
Re: my own webteases
I like them - the humiliation is nice, and Kate is very stimulating to look at. But the grammar needs some work - it's distracting to have no capital letters or punctuation, at least for me. Being new at all this, I don't know if my opinion really counts, but I think you've got potential - your work...
- Sun Nov 09, 2008 3:41 am
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: My Second Tease
- Replies: 0
- Views: 501
My Second Tease
Here you go. :) I hope everyone enjoys it. Hopefully the first in a series.
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=3448
Jord
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=3448
Jord
- Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:09 am
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: My first tease - ever! (Feedback appreciated)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1754
Re: My first tease - ever! (Feedback appreciated)
Well, the cuckold fantasy is new for me, too, to be honest. I'm very glad you liked it!cumhardy wrote:loved this tease although ive never really been into the whole cuckhold fantasy this one was good
write more! sorry my feedback isnt very constructive, just wanted to say i liked it
Jord
- Sat Nov 08, 2008 12:07 am
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: My first tease - ever! (Feedback appreciated)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1754
Re: My first tease - ever! (Feedback appreciated)
Great job! The story was really enjoyable and well-written. Also, the pictures and the story went perfectly together. My only suggestion for improvement in future teases would possibly be to add more specific (and maybe unusual) instructions for the reader. People seem to really like teases with ve...
- Fri Nov 07, 2008 3:38 am
- Forum: The Art of Webteasing
- Topic: My first tease - ever! (Feedback appreciated)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1754
My first tease - ever! (Feedback appreciated)
Hey there! I'm brand new to this site but it's already really... stimulating. I've made photomanipulations and captioned photos for a long time now, but this is my first attempt at making a webtease: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=3433 I hope you like it, and I hope to make even ...
- Thu Nov 06, 2008 6:14 pm
- Forum: All and Everything
- Topic: The Welcome Thread
- Replies: 1596
- Views: 943125
Re: The Welcome Thread
Hi there! Just found this site and think it's wonderful, so I figured I'd jump in. I'm a longtime photomanipulator and captioner, so webteases seem right up my alley.
It's nice to be here!
Jord
It's nice to be here!
Jord