I like them - the humiliation is nice, and Kate is very stimulating to look at. But the grammar needs some work - it's distracting to have no capital letters or punctuation, at least for me. Being new at all this, I don't know if my opinion really counts, but I think you've got potential - your work...

Here you go. :) I hope everyone enjoys it. Hopefully the first in a series.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=3448

Jord

cumhardy wrote:loved this tease although ive never really been into the whole cuckhold fantasy this one was good
write more! sorry my feedback isnt very constructive, just wanted to say i liked it

Well, the cuckold fantasy is new for me, too, to be honest. I'm very glad you liked it!

Jord

Great job! The story was really enjoyable and well-written. Also, the pictures and the story went perfectly together. My only suggestion for improvement in future teases would possibly be to add more specific (and maybe unusual) instructions for the reader. People seem to really like teases with ve...

Hey there! I'm brand new to this site but it's already really... stimulating. I've made photomanipulations and captioned photos for a long time now, but this is my first attempt at making a webtease: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=3433 I hope you like it, and I hope to make even ...

Hi there! Just found this site and think it's wonderful, so I figured I'd jump in. I'm a longtime photomanipulator and captioner, so webteases seem right up my alley.

It's nice to be here!

Jord