i mean how bruised their balls are after it. how much pain they are in after it. maybe not actual damage but how much it hurts the victim and how it affects them.

would it not make more sense to make the winner the person who does the most damage to their victim?

spoiler: i got to the main mistress with you and one other participant left in the game and after number ten left and i was about to start with her it ended abruptly. im not sure if this is intentional and there is going to be a second part or there is a mistake in the making of the tease.

i think i have made all the spelling and grammar changes suggested. i think the bug on page 30 is sorted too. any more problems just post them here or message me.

leave any feedback here for this tease. if there are any bugs let me know and ill sort them. if this is popular i may do further parts where you have to save other superheroines. if you like that idea perhaps suggest possible superheroines for future parts.

ok i am in the process of making the tease. i hope you like it when it is finished.

not bad. i had an idea where you are the hero and each of the heroines have been brainwashed or hypnotised by a villain to think you are evil and the only way to stop you is to make you cum but if you do you lose your powers and become weak and helpless. youd have to find a way to make them snap out...

i am thinking of making a new superheroine tease where there are a number of superheroines who tease the reader. i would like any suggestions for ideas for the tease. the superheroines which i am planning to base it on are: miss power catwoman superwoman miss kitty superior girl superchick stargirl ...

i had the same kind of problems for a while tonight but they seem to be sorted now. after i logged in if i clicked on anything it said im not logged in even though i just had. it seems to be sorted now like i said.

i think the bugs are sorted now. if there are any more problems let me know.

if you have any feedback on my last tease please leave your response here.
i would also be interested to know what you chose when asked what youd prefer to do to one of the girls' asses.
just say
a for fuck it
b for lick it
c for spank it
d for let her sit on your face

i dont know about everyone else on here but i think theres too many one page teases being made recently. the idea of these teases are that they TEASE the reader and theyre mainly very short stories which arent that interesting on this site.

i have made up names for each mistress in my other teases.
i don't always know the real names of them.
thats why

What would you like in the sequel other than that?

Also with the names I have had names for the mistresses in my other teases and have always struggled to come up with suitable ones so for this tease I decided to save myself the bother of trying to come up with them.

the rest i can work on.

Sorry made a mistake at that point forgot to put it on to the next page. It should be all right now.