Any addiction is very very hard to get out of. The following pretentious advice is all just my experience, nothing scientific. ;-) The thing with addiction is that you don't want to stop doing it - maybe part of you does, maybe sometimes you do and sometimes you don't - maybe you feel you should. Bu...

The sequel was excellent, I thought. Very well-written dialogue and characteriation as well as everything else. Nice work! I sincerely hope there are more in this series.

The final part of the Investigation was absolutely fantastic. I really, thoroughly enjoyed reading it, not just as a webtease but as a story. I think you did brilliantly on both counts. I knew it was her! Well, sort of. I was hoping it would be her. The ending seemed a bit abrupt, but that's the onl...

One thing you could maybe do is...

Make a tease on this site but don't publish it. Share the password for the user account so that only the two of you can access it, and thus see the tease. I guess the admins would have access...

Well I'm feeling like it's not a murder, at the moment. I guess that's why I'm not a cop... The obvious answer is Shay herself! But as I don't trust ex-girlfriends, I am going to say Crystal. (Now that I think about it, Victoria is also totally a suspect.) I'm looking forward to the Inspector gather...

The second part was also amazing! Really good work, Cactusman. I love reading your teases, even just as fiction sometimes! They're very good.

(Who's Jenna Fischer?)

I rather liked it too!

There were some great little touches - like trying to run away at the beginning - interesting choices to make - and lots of good dialogue. I'd like to see a part 2 for sure.

Hmm, the way they request 4 identifying photos is a bit suspiscious...

Cactusman, your teases are more like novels! Good ones, mind you. You must put an incredible amount of effort into these... even finding so many relevant pictures must be a nightmare! Well done. This one was my favourite so far. I read the Erica/Kara series recently and was very impressed, and this ...

I thought this one was very good, too - if terrifying with the whole blackmail thing. I stopped ran away shortly before the end, but I still have to say it was very well-written and original.

Just wanted to praise this one! it was short, but very well written (and that first picture had me obedient right away :-D ). This was one of those webteases it was almost impossible not to follow word-for-word, even if I hadn't planned it. I loved the words and the orders - the last two pages were ...

For the record - I put the key on my room-mate's keyring. I don't think he'd mind - and hopefully it's close enough that it meetswith Mistress Kent's approval ;) He's not too observant though... maybe I can subtly steer conversation to make him look at his keys. Is it cheating it I go, 'Hey, look at...

Well I believe her site is going through so big re-modelling at the moment. Also it probably doesn't help that every time Ms Stafford posts, it's something very controversial that provokes huge arguments!

Another very good - and refreshingly original - tease! Nice one, Mistress Kent.

I'm single and don't have a girlfriend... so I'm not sure what to do with the key now. I'm thinking my poor room-mate might have to carry it around, and I'll have an excuse for when he asks!