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Slave Job Application - Feedback please...
Posted: Sun Sep 17, 2006 10:31 pm
by Static
Hi All,
I was just wondering what you all thought of my webtease "Slave Job Application". It was my first tease.
I'd be interested in any feedback, so that I can take it onboard when I create my next one.
By the way, I think this site is great.
All the best,
Static
Posted: Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:53 pm
by elvikingo
The idea about a job application is good. Also, the pictures are very good :D
Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:44 pm
by alpahde5
i thought it was a bit short, if it was longer it would of been better, but then i know how hard it is to find lots of good quality pics of the same girl.
otherwise it was a very good tease. enjoyed it very mucho
Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 8:31 pm
by Static
I agree about it being a bit short. It was really just a practise run for me, and as I was learning the editor, it actually took me about 2 hours to put it together, and it was late at night. So apologies for that. The next one will hopefully be better!
Thanks for the feedback.
Static
Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 9:41 pm
by dark
You can edit it and make it longer, everytime you want
Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 7:10 am
by seraph0x
I thought it was great, looking foward to your next!
Static wrote:By the way, I think this site is great.
Thanks!
