The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again

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The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again

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Okay. So this is meant to be a hardcore but reasonable Webtease, geared mostly towards guys but I think girls might like it too. It's very painful and humiliating and uses Sissy material such as Anna Malice. . .

PLEASE look at it and tell me what you think about it. But first you have to PM me so you can pre-Review it. ;)
IF you Pre-review it I will give you some credit for it.
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argonaut wrote:Okay. So this is meant to be a hardcore but reasonable Webtease, geared mostly towards guys but I think girls might like it too. It's very painful and humiliating and uses Sissy material such as Anna Malice. . .

PLEASE look at it and tell me what you think about it. But first you have to PM me so you can pre-Review it. ;)
IF you Pre-review it I will give you some credit for it.
All three of you have access to it now
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argonaut wrote:
argonaut wrote:Okay. So this is meant to be a hardcore but reasonable Webtease, geared mostly towards guys but I think girls might like it too. It's very painful and humiliating and uses Sissy material such as Anna Malice. . .

PLEASE look at it and tell me what you think about it. But first you have to PM me so you can pre-Review it. ;)
IF you Pre-review it I will give you some credit for it.
All three of you have access to it now
Well what does anyone think?
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@argonaut: ;-) Are you talking to your split personalities in this thread?
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I think It was well written. You did well on the instructions/story integration. The only thing I would suggest is to space it out more over a couple extra pages.
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Takenaga wrote:@argonaut: ;-) Are you talking to your split personalities in this thread?
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And thank you, I may put in an extra page.
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