"The Babydick" Still Working On My First Tease!

[argonaut]

The name has been changed to "The Babydick". . . . I want five or maybe a ten people to examine the tease before I actually start it. I've got the first two pages started. The storyline is : You are a guy who sexually harassed a guy's girlfriend in front of him by ripping off her bra and slapping her ass in public. You've been captured by the couple and are now their concubine. They are letting other guys and girls use you for sex and torturing your balls for fun.

The character, heretofore referred to as "Babydick" is referred to out of character in degrading and humiliating ways, not just by the characters in the tease. I'm thinking of denial, size comparisons, force homo-erotic, bi-erotic and hetero-erotic activity. Most if not each pages are kind of long, and I have some ideas for bringing some Porn videos I found on Anna Malice to help intensify the tease.

I want the tease to be at least long enough to leave your balls aching for a long time after closing it, maybe hours, and the cock to be very sensitive, denied, and at the end, over used. Babydick is a tease, a little story about revenge, humiliation, sexual fantasy and surprise plot twists. ;)