Congrats utopia oh getting #2 up! Very nice work and hopefully we won't have to wait too long for #3.
So i'm going to start with the constructive critical feedback first, before I go effusive on the stuff I really liked in this one:
1) Breaks were too long = a bit easy
I don't know if you're measuring the "break time" between each of the sessions, but they're a bit too long, imo. That makes it pretty easy to recovery and get through each session without too much difficulty. The last break before the final session with Madison Ivy was nearly over 2 minutes. I understand part of it is because you added the "Porn Quiz" feature (which i think is AWESOME) - maybe there's a better way to change up the structure so you continue fapping during the Porn Quiz? Anyway, overall I thought Edger #2 was on the easy side and I think it was because the breaks between sessions were too long.
2) Text and overlay images too large
I'm not necessarily talking about the Break and Stroke text in the upper right hand corner (though that's kinda big, too), but the bubble text that occasionally appears in the bottom left corner? While it only appears for a few seconds, at time it can block out a bit too much of what's going on. It's very welcome to get a heads-up on Breaks and other stuff but I think it would've been better to do it as one line on the bottom of the page instead of using a bubble text format.
3) Not enough "POP"
I was hoping to see much more "POP" directional use, as I thought that idea was really really cool. It's used of course, but I think you missed a few opportunities (especially the last session) where you could've really made use of the "POP" indicator.
4) Audio buggery
You probably noticed as well, but when transition from the coach breaks into the actual sessions, there's an audio volume "spike". It's not a big deal - it just happened when I had my volume cranked up with my ear-plugs in!
It doesn't happen in the later rounds but happens @ 1:30, 3:58, 8:19, & 9:15.
Righto, with the constructive critiques out of the way, here's what I really liked:
1) Real-Time Stroking = AWESOME
Love the simple concept (sorta similar to the "Boss" stages in some of the recent Cock Hero episodes... you just went next level with the idea
) and I really thought you executed that last session really well. I think you could've made it a bit longer and used "POP" here, but that's nit-picking on what was a really really good end session.
I'm not even a fan of Madison Ivy, but that end session = red hot.
2) Porn Quiz = Fun
While I think you could tighten up the Porn Quiz so it's doesn't drag that long, I really like this idea; it's kinda of an added real-time "perk" the viewer can earn. As I stated above, the downside is that it makes the Breaks too long, imo. Maybe you could somehow add during a session so the viewer still strokes to the music rhythm while trying to answer the Porn Quiz? That might be too much stuff going on, but I do like the idea for sure.
3) Solid scene selection, pretty good music
Overall, the scenes you chose were quite nice - I'm not a big lesbo fan but the girls featured in those lesbo scenes you chose were quite nice. The music was ok, but the song you chose for session #4 was damn perfect.
To conclude, a nice solid Edger episode - a bit easy, but a lot of fun. I really like how creative you are, utopia, introducing new elements into your video tease. With that said, I hope you don't "overthink" yourself with adding even more new elements as the focus should always be on the hot scenes featuring gorgeous girls and creating pleasurable but challenging stroke rhythms to enhance the "fapping" experience.
Very much looking forward to Edger #3!
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